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I like this story very much but it's been a while since you have updated chapter please update more thank you author🥰🥰
The writing quality can be a lot better. The creativity behind the story is lacking . It is pretty much like the other novel just different names
story is interesting, character and cultivation system well develop, but translation is bad.
My new work- 1.I am only mortal but why do you all all treat ma as a immortal! 2.A man called himself a God! 3.Problems start after graduation but I receive system! Please read few ch after make decision.
I like it! I come after reading description about garbage system and it's make me little interesting.
more updates so all of us readers can enjoy it more gradually specially this last month where there are only 2 chapters updated i hope you can upload more chapters and thank you for your wonderful story😘😘
I like this story very much but it's been a while since you have updated chapter please update more thank you author🥰🥰
The writing quality can be a lot better. The creativity behind the story is lacking . It is pretty much like the other novel just different names
story is interesting, character and cultivation system well develop, but translation is bad.
My new work- 1.I am only mortal but why do you all all treat ma as a immortal! 2.A man called himself a God! 3.Problems start after graduation but I receive system! Please read few ch after make decision.
I like it! I come after reading description about garbage system and it's make me little interesting.
more updates so all of us readers can enjoy it more gradually specially this last month where there are only 2 chapters updated i hope you can upload more chapters and thank you for your wonderful story😘😘