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Écrire un avisThis novel gives off a similar vibe to Journey Towards Greatness, in that once the MC establishes himself, he becomes overpowered and nearly invincible. The key difference is that while Journey Towards Greatness relies heavily on raw power and overtrained Pokémon, here the MC’s strategy also plays a significant role. I really enjoy this strategic aspect, which clearly draws inspiration from the competitive nature of Pokémon games. Unlike in Journey Towards Greatness, the MC doesn’t necessarily capture his Pokémon himself (he’s extremely rich), but this isn’t an issue because the author has made it logically consistent within the story. Now, for a few minor drawbacks (which are, of course, subjective). The MC quickly makes his Pokémon extremely powerful by utilizing the Pokémon game mechanics through a system (a classic trope, but one that’s still popular). This approach accelerates the story, allowing for high-level battles to unfold quickly, but it also shortens the potential lifespan of the work. Once the MC becomes invincible, it raises the question of whether there’s still a story to tell. In conclusion, it’s an interesting read—entertaining, though not particularly deep. If the author manages the pacing well, perhaps the novel could be stretched out a bit longer. However, I’m not sure it can reach 500-1000 chapters without sacrificing quality.
Esta muy Bueno, excepto que hay Pokémones olvidados como [Los Numeros son Apariciones en los Capitulos]: Venonat ×1, Zubat ×1, Toxapex ×6, Nidoking ×2, Arbok ×4, Drapion ×2, Glimmet ×1, Gligar ×1, Eevee ×1, Pikachu ×1, Larvitar ×1, Zoroark ×1, Yamask ×1, Honedge ×1, Pikachu ×1, Ninetales de Alola ×1 y Gimmighoul ×1. Hubo mucho Pokémon Vacío. Me sigue confundiendo la Fuerza de los Campeones ya que varía del Nivel 50 - 80
It seems like there is an underlying romance in this novel but I am wondering if it is harem or no-harem?
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It’s been a while since I read a decent pokemon fic. The translation and editing was done very well. Engaging story wise and well executed characters and strategy exploration
This is a good history honestly............................................................................................................................................
Es bastante bueno por lo general los autores suelen chetar a sus personajes de formas absurdamente descaradas (aquí x lo menos te dan un contexto)
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I was enjoying it until the system came in. Completely unneeded for a story like this when the MC did not even need it and was already setup to be strong.
I like it definitely Unique among other pokemon fanfics, The update is kinda slow or maybe I'm just excited to get Chapters
i like the story about mc being a gym leader, especially his cheat, i also like the pokemon battles in his gym with a mix of comedy, overall i like it. please keep updating
Ngl the system kinda ruins the story, it's perfectly fine without one and there isn't even a tag for it.
I like the story idea but the constant explanation of every single moves typing hurts me on an emotional level. There will be almost nobody reading a Pokémon fanfic that doesn’t know most of the moves already and can sus out the rest. Actually made me drop the story during the Red fight.
The simple explanation for this story is “reincarnater becomes gym leader and trolls challengers with the most toxic, cancer inducing strats possible.” It’s hilarious.
This gets a 5 from me you've done an excellent job translating especially since I've checked out the raws and they're real bad to the point that I read one paragraph and was like this does not translate well I noped out of there so fast. My only Complaint is i read 100 chapters in a day now I have to wait for more so I can binge read them again.
I definitely need more I caught up so fast and I'm totally hooked. Love the Gym leader premise, love the despicable Toxic stall and Parafusion tactics etc. Really good just need a few hundred more chapters lol. Hard finding a good Poke Fic on here.
Honestly really like this its new for me if there are any others about being a gym leader id like the recommendations.
Very funny character who is a total troll but in a very funny way very well written. It updates every day at 11 am. Its also very interesting having the Mc be a gym leader while still going on adventures
This is really good, hope the updates keep coming because I practically caught up in a single evening.
Very interesting story so far, i like that the MC has multiple teams as well as using actual strategy against opponents.
The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.
translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....
This novel gives off a similar vibe to Journey Towards Greatness, in that once the MC establishes himself, he becomes overpowered and nearly invincible. The key difference is that while Journey Towards Greatness relies heavily on raw power and overtrained Pokémon, here the MC’s strategy also plays a significant role. I really enjoy this strategic aspect, which clearly draws inspiration from the competitive nature of Pokémon games. Unlike in Journey Towards Greatness, the MC doesn’t necessarily capture his Pokémon himself (he’s extremely rich), but this isn’t an issue because the author has made it logically consistent within the story. Now, for a few minor drawbacks (which are, of course, subjective). The MC quickly makes his Pokémon extremely powerful by utilizing the Pokémon game mechanics through a system (a classic trope, but one that’s still popular). This approach accelerates the story, allowing for high-level battles to unfold quickly, but it also shortens the potential lifespan of the work. Once the MC becomes invincible, it raises the question of whether there’s still a story to tell. In conclusion, it’s an interesting read—entertaining, though not particularly deep. If the author manages the pacing well, perhaps the novel could be stretched out a bit longer. However, I’m not sure it can reach 500-1000 chapters without sacrificing quality.
Esta muy Bueno, excepto que hay Pokémones olvidados como [Los Numeros son Apariciones en los Capitulos]: Venonat ×1, Zubat ×1, Toxapex ×6, Nidoking ×2, Arbok ×4, Drapion ×2, Glimmet ×1, Gligar ×1, Eevee ×1, Pikachu ×1, Larvitar ×1, Zoroark ×1, Yamask ×1, Honedge ×1, Pikachu ×1, Ninetales de Alola ×1 y Gimmighoul ×1. Hubo mucho Pokémon Vacío. Me sigue confundiendo la Fuerza de los Campeones ya que varía del Nivel 50 - 80
It seems like there is an underlying romance in this novel but I am wondering if it is harem or no-harem?
..........,......................................,......................................,..........................,.......................................
It’s been a while since I read a decent pokemon fic. The translation and editing was done very well. Engaging story wise and well executed characters and strategy exploration
This is a good history honestly............................................................................................................................................
Es bastante bueno por lo general los autores suelen chetar a sus personajes de formas absurdamente descaradas (aquí x lo menos te dan un contexto)
merry christmas............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I was enjoying it until the system came in. Completely unneeded for a story like this when the MC did not even need it and was already setup to be strong.
I like it definitely Unique among other pokemon fanfics, The update is kinda slow or maybe I'm just excited to get Chapters
i like the story about mc being a gym leader, especially his cheat, i also like the pokemon battles in his gym with a mix of comedy, overall i like it. please keep updating
Ngl the system kinda ruins the story, it's perfectly fine without one and there isn't even a tag for it.
I like the story idea but the constant explanation of every single moves typing hurts me on an emotional level. There will be almost nobody reading a Pokémon fanfic that doesn’t know most of the moves already and can sus out the rest. Actually made me drop the story during the Red fight.
The simple explanation for this story is “reincarnater becomes gym leader and trolls challengers with the most toxic, cancer inducing strats possible.” It’s hilarious.
This gets a 5 from me you've done an excellent job translating especially since I've checked out the raws and they're real bad to the point that I read one paragraph and was like this does not translate well I noped out of there so fast. My only Complaint is i read 100 chapters in a day now I have to wait for more so I can binge read them again.
I definitely need more I caught up so fast and I'm totally hooked. Love the Gym leader premise, love the despicable Toxic stall and Parafusion tactics etc. Really good just need a few hundred more chapters lol. Hard finding a good Poke Fic on here.
Honestly really like this its new for me if there are any others about being a gym leader id like the recommendations.
Very funny character who is a total troll but in a very funny way very well written. It updates every day at 11 am. Its also very interesting having the Mc be a gym leader while still going on adventures
This is really good, hope the updates keep coming because I practically caught up in a single evening.
Very interesting story so far, i like that the MC has multiple teams as well as using actual strategy against opponents.
The premise is good. Writing is ok. But the 'System' mechanic came out of nowhere, there wasn't even a tag for it. I expected the gym leader mc use his meta-knowledge to his advantage, which he still uses, but those moments feel shallow when he literally uses short-cuts with his System. And the exaggerated female praising is just plain cringe. It's like the author written it with one hand... I certainly hope he wouldn't be one of those mc that treats men different from fem just to show he's the toxic 'alpha male'.... Toxic gym leader I mean.
translator-san, or author, put the raw in the synopsis please, to make this easy for the gang MTL find....
Author, Update the pokemon farmer dont drop it.