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Very Good Crossover.!!! 11/10.......................................................................................................................
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It got a tad repetitive with everyone pushing work or should I said requests onto Naruto but other then that I have no complaints. Good translation, barely any jarring errors, no noticeable Chinese nationalism, Naruto is actually a well written and enjoyable character. His presence is felt and holds weight in both worlds.
The storytelling moves too quickly. I don’t know what this is connected with, but I think this is the author’s problem. I read it in over a week, the story is good. It's so addictive that you can't put it down. I just can't understand Naruto has two bodies, one in soul society and the other in the main world and his consciousness moves between bodies?
It's one of the best Naruto/Bleach fanfic I have read........................................................................................................................
One of the best power trips done correctly, the MC is not an edgelord, neither is he a saint. The balance is very well written. I will keep reading this story.
I am currently watching Bleach and I have to say, it's the perfect blend of both, Naruto and Bleach. it's absolute cinema.
This is literally a hidden gem, i had this added to my library for a couple months now and never bothered to read this again after skimming some chapters. I'm a hoarder so I have tons of book marks on my library and it just happened that i am clearing some dead work and good thing i gave this work again a try and to my surprise it was actually good. I binge read this the entire night and i had a good night and now I'm sleep deprived. Kudos to the Original writer and to the translator.
I really love this Fic. I even run to the MTL because I couldn't wait. MC a.k.a. Naruto is a wholesome dude. He learns how to not be so naive and because he goes to soul society he also understands how badly people were treating him in the ninja world. He keps going to and from Ninja/Blech worlds. He becomes OP but in a more natural pace. It's also nice how the interaction with both worlds makes him learn the plot path without being all knowing reincarnation MC. Since he's isn't a reincarnator. He doesn't worry all the time with future events and things happen naturally. PLEASE. IF ANYONE KNOW OTHER FICs LIKE THIS... TELL ME. Especially Bleach
Honestly a really good fanfic so far. The only thing I can say is the pace has slown down considerably compared to the start. He gets super op but then his progress kinda just halts. I get that its more story focused right now but a new technique or something would be cool.
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Una muy buena historia, salvo algunos errores con los nombres o términos, no encontré nada que me disgustara de esta historia. Los antecedentes mundiales, el pasado, personalidad y desarrollo del MC y de los personajes que lo rodean, las escalas de poder, la historia de ambos mundos, el desarrollo general, el entorno, todo es perfecto, uno de los mejores fanfic que leí tanto de Naruto como de Bleach. Una historia Increíble, sigue así autor.
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In Shinigami in the Ninja World, Naruto Uzumaki gains the ability to travel between the Ninja World and the mysterious (Soul Society). The story is told through his diary entries, which offer a personal glimpse into his thoughts and emotions as he navigates this strange new existence. Naruto initially struggles with the weight of being brought back to life, questioning whether it might have been better to remain dead. His search for his parents in the proves fruitless, leaving him disconnected from both worlds. As time passes, his desire to become Hokage fades, replaced by a growing interest in becoming a Shinigami, in the hope that he might find his family and reunite with them. Overall, Shinigami in the Ninja World presents a mix of familiar themes with new, darker elements. Naruto's internal conflict and search for meaning add a reflective layer to the story, though some readers may find the shift in tone from the original Naruto series to be somewhat jarring. The novel offers a fresh take on Naruto's character, but it may not resonate with everyone, depending on how much they enjoy introspective narratives.
Overall is a 3.6 It annoys me that this is not tagged as a translation, The premise of the story is very interesting and I would love to continue reading. But this is a translation, mind you, this is like the best translation I've read on web novel, it is still a translation. I will continue reading until I just cannot stand it anymore. I would appreciate it if you put in the description of the story that this is translated, I had to read a review the specifically told me this was translated.
Damn you author, when he is in konoha I want more soul society, but when he is there I want more konoha, I know you're doing this on purpose ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Nice, Bleach side is well written though Naruto side needs a little more work.
I really like this Fanfic. Naruto is OP in his home world, but each power-up is earned. Naruto also had a personality change but not suddenly it was due to a gradual positive experience, a Higher Point of View, and Wisdom of age (as Naruto spends decades inside Soul Society) so he is very mature, not arrogant due to strength, and still a good guy but not good to the point of "It's not your fault you hate me or try to kill me I forgive you, no I should have been better". I also like how lore accurate the powers Naruto has and the characters of both Naruto and Bleach are consistent
eu vi pelo contexto dessa historia muito interessante, continue assim. e vi que tem outra pessoa traduzindo essa historia também aqui no Web novel
I have only read about 16 chapters, but it's a very interesting concept and a well written story. I couldn't resist putting in a review [img=recommend]
Thank you for the wonderful translation, my brother, and your choice of this story is really successful, but I have a request, can you publish more chapters, you are applying for more than 120 chapters, so you may publish more chapters every week if possible, thank you.[img=recommend][img=strong][img=update]
This fanfic is about Naruto traveling back and forth between the Bleach world and the Naruto world (Ninja World). He possesses powers from both Bleach and Naruto, including Shinigami abilities, Kidō, Chakra, the Nine-Tails, and more—you get the idea. As he uncovers the secrets of both worlds, he continues to grow stronger, fight, epic scene, and make new friends. The dialogue flows well, and doesn’t feel awkward like normal Chinese Fanfic. Best of all, you can read the latest updates as we’ve caught up with the raws on Patreon. Haha, had to mention that as well! Hopefully, you guys will enjoy it! Welcome!
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I love the way the whole story is described. Compared to other fanfics, it is certainly very attractive. Seeing a fanfic where we can see a very interesting development of the protagonist in this one [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
boom, boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Very Good Crossover.!!! 11/10.......................................................................................................................
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Spoiler de révélation It got a tad repetitive with everyone pushing work or should I said requests onto Naruto but other then that I have no complaints. Good translation, barely any jarring errors, no noticeable Chinese nationalism, Naruto is actually a well written and enjoyable character. His presence is felt and holds weight in both worlds.
The storytelling moves too quickly. I don’t know what this is connected with, but I think this is the author’s problem. I read it in over a week, the story is good. It's so addictive that you can't put it down. I just can't understand Naruto has two bodies, one in soul society and the other in the main world and his consciousness moves between bodies?
It's one of the best Naruto/Bleach fanfic I have read........................................................................................................................
One of the best power trips done correctly, the MC is not an edgelord, neither is he a saint. The balance is very well written. I will keep reading this story.
I am currently watching Bleach and I have to say, it's the perfect blend of both, Naruto and Bleach. it's absolute cinema.
This is literally a hidden gem, i had this added to my library for a couple months now and never bothered to read this again after skimming some chapters. I'm a hoarder so I have tons of book marks on my library and it just happened that i am clearing some dead work and good thing i gave this work again a try and to my surprise it was actually good. I binge read this the entire night and i had a good night and now I'm sleep deprived. Kudos to the Original writer and to the translator.
I really love this Fic. I even run to the MTL because I couldn't wait. MC a.k.a. Naruto is a wholesome dude. He learns how to not be so naive and because he goes to soul society he also understands how badly people were treating him in the ninja world. He keps going to and from Ninja/Blech worlds. He becomes OP but in a more natural pace. It's also nice how the interaction with both worlds makes him learn the plot path without being all knowing reincarnation MC. Since he's isn't a reincarnator. He doesn't worry all the time with future events and things happen naturally. PLEASE. IF ANYONE KNOW OTHER FICs LIKE THIS... TELL ME. Especially Bleach
Honestly a really good fanfic so far. The only thing I can say is the pace has slown down considerably compared to the start. He gets super op but then his progress kinda just halts. I get that its more story focused right now but a new technique or something would be cool.
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Una muy buena historia, salvo algunos errores con los nombres o términos, no encontré nada que me disgustara de esta historia. Los antecedentes mundiales, el pasado, personalidad y desarrollo del MC y de los personajes que lo rodean, las escalas de poder, la historia de ambos mundos, el desarrollo general, el entorno, todo es perfecto, uno de los mejores fanfic que leí tanto de Naruto como de Bleach. Una historia Increíble, sigue así autor.
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Spoiler de révélation In Shinigami in the Ninja World, Naruto Uzumaki gains the ability to travel between the Ninja World and the mysterious (Soul Society). The story is told through his diary entries, which offer a personal glimpse into his thoughts and emotions as he navigates this strange new existence. Naruto initially struggles with the weight of being brought back to life, questioning whether it might have been better to remain dead. His search for his parents in the proves fruitless, leaving him disconnected from both worlds. As time passes, his desire to become Hokage fades, replaced by a growing interest in becoming a Shinigami, in the hope that he might find his family and reunite with them. Overall, Shinigami in the Ninja World presents a mix of familiar themes with new, darker elements. Naruto's internal conflict and search for meaning add a reflective layer to the story, though some readers may find the shift in tone from the original Naruto series to be somewhat jarring. The novel offers a fresh take on Naruto's character, but it may not resonate with everyone, depending on how much they enjoy introspective narratives.
Overall is a 3.6 It annoys me that this is not tagged as a translation, The premise of the story is very interesting and I would love to continue reading. But this is a translation, mind you, this is like the best translation I've read on web novel, it is still a translation. I will continue reading until I just cannot stand it anymore. I would appreciate it if you put in the description of the story that this is translated, I had to read a review the specifically told me this was translated.
Damn you author, when he is in konoha I want more soul society, but when he is there I want more konoha, I know you're doing this on purpose ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Nice, Bleach side is well written though Naruto side needs a little more work.
I really like this Fanfic. Naruto is OP in his home world, but each power-up is earned. Naruto also had a personality change but not suddenly it was due to a gradual positive experience, a Higher Point of View, and Wisdom of age (as Naruto spends decades inside Soul Society) so he is very mature, not arrogant due to strength, and still a good guy but not good to the point of "It's not your fault you hate me or try to kill me I forgive you, no I should have been better". I also like how lore accurate the powers Naruto has and the characters of both Naruto and Bleach are consistent
eu vi pelo contexto dessa historia muito interessante, continue assim. e vi que tem outra pessoa traduzindo essa historia também aqui no Web novel
I have only read about 16 chapters, but it's a very interesting concept and a well written story. I couldn't resist putting in a review [img=recommend]
Thank you for the wonderful translation, my brother, and your choice of this story is really successful, but I have a request, can you publish more chapters, you are applying for more than 120 chapters, so you may publish more chapters every week if possible, thank you.[img=recommend][img=strong][img=update]
This fanfic is about Naruto traveling back and forth between the Bleach world and the Naruto world (Ninja World). He possesses powers from both Bleach and Naruto, including Shinigami abilities, Kidō, Chakra, the Nine-Tails, and more—you get the idea. As he uncovers the secrets of both worlds, he continues to grow stronger, fight, epic scene, and make new friends. The dialogue flows well, and doesn’t feel awkward like normal Chinese Fanfic. Best of all, you can read the latest updates as we’ve caught up with the raws on Patreon. Haha, had to mention that as well! Hopefully, you guys will enjoy it! Welcome!