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I have serious doubts as to whether the author was under the influence of some drug, but other than that the fic is simply wonderful, completely out of character, and it's Deadpool we're talking about
It's a very well written and engaging story. I'm curious to see what the next story will be like and I've given it a 10 out of 10 up until the latest episode. I hope the next episode comes out soon.
Yeah, really bad fic, writing is mid and lazy. author just doing whatever he wants with the plot and the grammar is horrible! Pretty funny story tho, I love the humor! But! Why did the author make Deadpool as Wolverine's son! I don't know what the author smoke but I dont think its legal and safe! So many plot holes too! not recommended!
grammar is mid, Story is mid, the way author writes the chapters is confusing, way too much of the talking is about the author, who no one cares about, or that its a fanfic, instead of focusing on the story. Overall mid/10
SPELL CASTER TO WIN BACK YOUR EX LOVER AND MAKE IT LAST FOREVER... Hello everyone. I am from Santa Monica I never ever believed in spell until I met a man called Dr. Salem who help me cast a spell that brought back my ex-lover who left me for two years before our marriage, His spells works beyond my imaginations and today I am happily married with two kids and me and my [ex-lover] now husband are very happy more than ever before, what more can I say rather than to say thank you Dr. Salem for been there for me, contact him today and your life will never ever remain the same his email is salemmanifestloverspell@gmail. com... may the lord continue to use you to save people as you did to me, He is the best spell caster that can help you.
if you are a deadpool and wolverine fan there is no way in 7 hells that you won't like this marvel jesus and hope author updates as soon as possible and yet did I say this is one of my most fav deadpool fanfic
I love the story and its humor. Before this I never thought someone could write Deadpool, but the way you write him makes me believe that you yourself are suffering from DID, which is cool I guess as long as you give us quality content.
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It is a good story and I hope that you can see the story through to the end
deux etoiles a cause d'une voix dans la tête. je trouverais ca trop relou si je me reincarnai, dommage c'est presque parfait...... ....................
Crazy Best Fanfiction, people If you love Crazy 🤪 Mc as much as me, this one will be the thing which you have to read it, its funny and entertaining as hell, Personal opinion i felt like i was watching Deadpool movie..............................................
Pretty good for chapter 1 and pretty entertaining so far. The narrative jumps around quite a bit, which seems intentional to reflect MC's chaotic state of mind. However, some readers probably might find it difficult to follow. Maybe consider adding a bit more structure to the flow of thoughts to help guide the reader through the story. I am also gonna updated my review as the time goes...
I love crazy, schizophrenic mc’s. Good job author. I do hope tho that you’d be able to mass release or at least speed up the uploads, if you can.
I have serious doubts as to whether the author was under the influence of some drug, but other than that the fic is simply wonderful, completely out of character, and it's Deadpool we're talking about
It's a very well written and engaging story. I'm curious to see what the next story will be like and I've given it a 10 out of 10 up until the latest episode. I hope the next episode comes out soon.
Yeah, really bad fic, writing is mid and lazy. author just doing whatever he wants with the plot and the grammar is horrible! Pretty funny story tho, I love the humor! But! Why did the author make Deadpool as Wolverine's son! I don't know what the author smoke but I dont think its legal and safe! So many plot holes too! not recommended!
grammar is mid, Story is mid, the way author writes the chapters is confusing, way too much of the talking is about the author, who no one cares about, or that its a fanfic, instead of focusing on the story. Overall mid/10
SPELL CASTER TO WIN BACK YOUR EX LOVER AND MAKE IT LAST FOREVER... Hello everyone. I am from Santa Monica I never ever believed in spell until I met a man called Dr. Salem who help me cast a spell that brought back my ex-lover who left me for two years before our marriage, His spells works beyond my imaginations and today I am happily married with two kids and me and my [ex-lover] now husband are very happy more than ever before, what more can I say rather than to say thank you Dr. Salem for been there for me, contact him today and your life will never ever remain the same his email is salemmanifestloverspell@gmail. com... may the lord continue to use you to save people as you did to me, He is the best spell caster that can help you.
if you are a deadpool and wolverine fan there is no way in 7 hells that you won't like this marvel jesus and hope author updates as soon as possible and yet did I say this is one of my most fav deadpool fanfic
I love the story and its humor. Before this I never thought someone could write Deadpool, but the way you write him makes me believe that you yourself are suffering from DID, which is cool I guess as long as you give us quality content.
It's kind of bullshit, BUT I really like it. 👍👍👍👍[img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]
It is a good story and I hope that you can see the story through to the end
deux etoiles a cause d'une voix dans la tête. je trouverais ca trop relou si je me reincarnai, dommage c'est presque parfait...... ....................
Crazy Best Fanfiction, people If you love Crazy 🤪 Mc as much as me, this one will be the thing which you have to read it, its funny and entertaining as hell, Personal opinion i felt like i was watching Deadpool movie..............................................
Pretty good for chapter 1 and pretty entertaining so far. The narrative jumps around quite a bit, which seems intentional to reflect MC's chaotic state of mind. However, some readers probably might find it difficult to follow. Maybe consider adding a bit more structure to the flow of thoughts to help guide the reader through the story. I am also gonna updated my review as the time goes...
I love crazy, schizophrenic mc’s. Good job author. I do hope tho that you’d be able to mass release or at least speed up the uploads, if you can.