31Critiques
4.87
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
I’m not gonna lie to you. This shit is straight crack cocaine levels of addiction when it comes to reading it. I feel like a washed up attic when it comes to waiting for more chapters. And I mean that in the most positive way possible. If you enjoy yu-gi-ou and Elden Ring along with lore, comedy, and character interactions READ THIS NOVEL. Seriously, stop wasting time reading through the reviews and go check it out already
I’ll just say it. This novel is amazing and it scratches that itch that makes you save it for last in new releases each day auther im begging you on my hands and knees don’t drop or go on haitus 🙏👍
giving some five stars to help with the ratings, as tanks for the card images in that FGO x YU GI OH fanfic
A excelente story, i like more romântico stories but i fallen in love by that gender now. Miquella is a man in the original lore, made with it what you want.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Spoiler de révélation
This is really good I slick want to get some proxy's made and actually play these decks with the homies. I really hope you keep this going, can't wait to see more of it.
I'll put 5 star review on this fic because the author is actually making an effort in making the cards artwork upto it's effect. I'm very impressed with his effort and dedication on this fic. And I'm reading at chap 24. Keep up the great work author 💙
I really love your fic. The thinking it goes into making the decks and the individual cards are fantastic and i really love both the franchises especially elden ring. There is however, one single thing that doesnt make sense to me. Im sorry to say this but the MC doesnt need to explain EVERYTHING to everyone. A little hint here and there to act mysterious is fine, hell it builds the character personality, but he doesnt need to go on a rant about everything he did, to who and when and how and what would happen if he didnt ...with everyone he meets. Still great job, especially the duels those are really great.
It's pretty good so far. The main issue is the grammar and spacing of paragraphs. Some words aren't capitalized and there are quite a few run-on sentences. The paragraphs can be condensed which makes it hard to read since there are so many words shoved together. Other than that, the story is fun to read.
Excellent work adapting Elden Ring lore to Yugioh cards. The artwork is beautiful as well, whether chosen or self-made.
A combination of my personal all time favorite games, in my eyes, this is a masterpiece.
In some Cursed way I haven't found this story until about 3 hours ago Anyway the book is awesome keep it up 👍
Better be smashing all those female elden ring duel spirits Miquella can get it too tbh
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Solid story with an interesting idea, fine main character, and a so far well thoughtout plot. Unique, for the most part and looks to be heading solidly In a good derection, hope the author doesn't abandon it
Pretty interesting so far. The grammar has some errors, but it is readable despite english not being my native language. The idea of using Elden Ring as a deck of cards in YuGiOh is quite original and reminds me of that Heroic Spirit card fanfic, although the direction of the story is entirely different. Miquella is my favorite character so far and the MC is decent, I like how he helped Jaden and he seems smart. Since there are only 11 chapters so far, I can't say much more, but it was really fun to read, I hope more people can read this fanfic and that the author doesn't drop it.
I’m not gonna lie to you. This shit is straight crack cocaine levels of addiction when it comes to reading it. I feel like a washed up attic when it comes to waiting for more chapters. And I mean that in the most positive way possible. If you enjoy yu-gi-ou and Elden Ring along with lore, comedy, and character interactions READ THIS NOVEL. Seriously, stop wasting time reading through the reviews and go check it out already
I’ll just say it. This novel is amazing and it scratches that itch that makes you save it for last in new releases each day auther im begging you on my hands and knees don’t drop or go on haitus 🙏👍
giving some five stars to help with the ratings, as tanks for the card images in that FGO x YU GI OH fanfic
A excelente story, i like more romântico stories but i fallen in love by that gender now. Miquella is a man in the original lore, made with it what you want.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Spoiler de révélation This is really good I slick want to get some proxy's made and actually play these decks with the homies. I really hope you keep this going, can't wait to see more of it.
I'll put 5 star review on this fic because the author is actually making an effort in making the cards artwork upto it's effect. I'm very impressed with his effort and dedication on this fic. And I'm reading at chap 24. Keep up the great work author 💙
I really love your fic. The thinking it goes into making the decks and the individual cards are fantastic and i really love both the franchises especially elden ring. There is however, one single thing that doesnt make sense to me. Im sorry to say this but the MC doesnt need to explain EVERYTHING to everyone. A little hint here and there to act mysterious is fine, hell it builds the character personality, but he doesnt need to go on a rant about everything he did, to who and when and how and what would happen if he didnt ...with everyone he meets. Still great job, especially the duels those are really great.
It's pretty good so far. The main issue is the grammar and spacing of paragraphs. Some words aren't capitalized and there are quite a few run-on sentences. The paragraphs can be condensed which makes it hard to read since there are so many words shoved together. Other than that, the story is fun to read.
Excellent work adapting Elden Ring lore to Yugioh cards. The artwork is beautiful as well, whether chosen or self-made.
A combination of my personal all time favorite games, in my eyes, this is a masterpiece.
In some Cursed way I haven't found this story until about 3 hours ago Anyway the book is awesome keep it up 👍
Better be smashing all those female elden ring duel spirits Miquella can get it too tbh
(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤
Solid story with an interesting idea, fine main character, and a so far well thoughtout plot. Unique, for the most part and looks to be heading solidly In a good derection, hope the author doesn't abandon it
Pretty interesting so far. The grammar has some errors, but it is readable despite english not being my native language. The idea of using Elden Ring as a deck of cards in YuGiOh is quite original and reminds me of that Heroic Spirit card fanfic, although the direction of the story is entirely different. Miquella is my favorite character so far and the MC is decent, I like how he helped Jaden and he seems smart. Since there are only 11 chapters so far, I can't say much more, but it was really fun to read, I hope more people can read this fanfic and that the author doesn't drop it.
giving it a five star for elden ring and yugioh