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I really like it, especially since I'm currently watching Nige Jouzu no Wakagimi. And I quite like the character of the main character. And there are also updates - 2-3 chapters per day, which can't help but please
damn one of the best representation of Sosuke Aizen if he were born as a human in dxd. Damn its good. Please don't drop it author. Its rare seeing dxd fic without mc changing races within the first few chapters and also being goody two shoes. Thank you for your effort Author-san.
I loved the start of this. if someone could do the same thing with issei with how takauji by becoming a dragon that would be cool.
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This dxd fic brings out a fresh new concept and is done so perfectly. The writing quality is good, no grammar or punctuation mistakes. The mc is also cool. The story development is good, its fresh to see in a fic. Overall I highly recommend it
Is very solid updating. Enjoyable world building the characters all stand line worth personalities traits given. And evole Not once have guessed the plot progression right
Overall great DXD fic. This is his first work and he's dropping heat like this, the story is great, his character isn't a wuss and straight up 'betrays' Rias and crew once their usefulness ran out, the updates are frequent, and the world background is dxd and we all know dxd. I know the dragon trope is played out in DXD fics but this one is done pretty well and is quite different from how it usually happens. Maybe not everyone's cup of tea as he isn't collecting a pokemon harem. There was even a guy crying about it and gave a one star review because the mc didn't get with rias even though they barely interacted and was calling the mc a cuck because issei and Rias are a thing even though the mc had no intentions on Rias in the first place and was only using them. I guess in that guys mind anyone who isn't dating every woman ever to exist all at once is a cuck. Impeccable logic.
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pretty good story with bad start and fool mc but when story reaches moment when mc got first buff after this it really becomes a good read, I give it a rating so that the author continues to post...
Very different main character from other ff. I am really invested in this. Hope you don't drop this and keep up. I like how you introduce the powerups for the mc.
...Are you intrested in a story of a weird guy,that get off by making his enemies stronger so that he could be defeated by them? Even if that's literally a nonsense and impossible? Well,i don't... What is wrong with you? Are you a masohist? What kind of perverted creature you are?
hmmm it's written well, but just not my preference, upto to chapter 16 where I dropped I realized that the mc is like fang Yuan from revernd insanity, as long as it serves his purpose, he can betray ,kill you and sell you.... although I am not into hero types nor do i care world, society or others but I do like when characters are loyal and loving to their close ones. As long as you don't mind mind this kind of mc , this novel is great read
I hope that Issei becomes stronger than in canon and is able to win some of the fights against the MC. I also hope that he doesn't have a miserable end like in stories where Issei doesn't get along well with the MC. Instead, I wish he would become a tough rival that cannot be truly defeated.
The mc is a good character with is written well, up until he evolves later in the story and becomes a dragon. After that the story starts to fall off, he starts making seemingly pointless decisions and the other characters writing starts to fall off as well. Story is an 8/10 up to that point, after that it becomes a generic copy and paste MC personality on a harem collecting quest, story is a solid 5/10 after that ngl
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gran historia, ya hace mucho que no encontraba una historia de dxd que fuera tan buena, felicidades amigo, pero este es mi gusto personal pero me hubiese gustado que le dieras un mejor final a asia, pero ya es opinión mía, todo lo demás está excelente
everything was good til mc become a dragon and start obsessed with yasaka. romance development was good before, but author just ruined it with mc forcing himself to yasaka. i thought mc is smart, cunning, and calculating type like aizen or sukuna, but the mc is hornier than i thought. the story is like 70% of training arc, i dont want to comment about it. and the writing style is kinda weird for me with all the MC's inner self thought, that's annoying to read it ngl.
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It would be much more intresting if he knew abaut dxd world in hes old life ore some thing like that. Now story develpment is meh
Although I enjoy DxD verse only ff, its probably the only one I enjoy this much. I don't really like Raynore but this one is tolerable and might even turn likable for me in the future. Also, fox mommy instant 5 star.
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One question and if you make Akeno betray Rias when they meet again because personally I think her potential stagnates by staying with the Gremory and always being a stupid competitor for Issei's attention as if it were a race to see who will get her. Gives her pathetic virginity, what do you think of this suggestion?
nice ................................... ( kill isei and i will get you another 5.0 )
Imagine an Aizen Sosuke in the dxd world, but someone who starts from scratch and has no knowledge of the plot. Another thing I need to point out is that the author has not only benefited from the bleach or dxd world when giving spells or skills to the main character, he has added a lot of variety and seems to continue to do so. The plot has changed from the beginning. I'm looking forward to the sequel. I hope there won't be too much drama in the betrayal part. (google translate)
if you like sukuna and aizen the read..............good overall...................................................................................
For a new writer this story is very well put together. The story pacing isn't inconsistent and doesn't have any major jumps for no reason. The main character design (Taka) is a good combination of Aizen and Sukuna, or that is what it looks like at this point in time. He isn't "Evil" just for plot convenience, every action Taka has taken has been true to his characterization. As far as update stability, well we have had a chapter daily. Some days we have had Multiple chapters dropped. The world background, well it's DxD and the original "canon" didn't really explore any of the verse. So any background we see in this will be better. Writing quality, well that speaks for itself. No one has commented any grammar issues or inconsistences. Overall this story is 5/5 for the DxD genre for me.
Great story so far. Really well written and captivating. I really like the concept and the mc you made. Keep up the good work🤘
This is honestly one of the best DXD fanfics I’ve read so far. Hope the author doesn’t drop this masterpiece and finishes it with an ending where the mc stands above the heavens.
Thought I should make some things clear about this story here. 1. Keep in mind that the Villain tag is there for a reason. 2. He will not reincarnate as a Devil, so if you're one of the people who don't like reincarnated MC stories then this might be to your liking. 3. There will be occasional smut chapters, but they will be very far and few between. Though it exists in this story, it is not the focus of it. If you have any more questions, you can leave them here and I'll respond when I get the chance to.
I really like it, especially since I'm currently watching Nige Jouzu no Wakagimi. And I quite like the character of the main character. And there are also updates - 2-3 chapters per day, which can't help but please
damn one of the best representation of Sosuke Aizen if he were born as a human in dxd. Damn its good. Please don't drop it author. Its rare seeing dxd fic without mc changing races within the first few chapters and also being goody two shoes. Thank you for your effort Author-san.
I loved the start of this. if someone could do the same thing with issei with how takauji by becoming a dragon that would be cool.
Spoiler de révélation This dxd fic brings out a fresh new concept and is done so perfectly. The writing quality is good, no grammar or punctuation mistakes. The mc is also cool. The story development is good, its fresh to see in a fic. Overall I highly recommend it
Is very solid updating. Enjoyable world building the characters all stand line worth personalities traits given. And evole Not once have guessed the plot progression right
Overall great DXD fic. This is his first work and he's dropping heat like this, the story is great, his character isn't a wuss and straight up 'betrays' Rias and crew once their usefulness ran out, the updates are frequent, and the world background is dxd and we all know dxd. I know the dragon trope is played out in DXD fics but this one is done pretty well and is quite different from how it usually happens. Maybe not everyone's cup of tea as he isn't collecting a pokemon harem. There was even a guy crying about it and gave a one star review because the mc didn't get with rias even though they barely interacted and was calling the mc a cuck because issei and Rias are a thing even though the mc had no intentions on Rias in the first place and was only using them. I guess in that guys mind anyone who isn't dating every woman ever to exist all at once is a cuck. Impeccable logic.
Spoiler de révélation pretty good story with bad start and fool mc but when story reaches moment when mc got first buff after this it really becomes a good read, I give it a rating so that the author continues to post...
Very different main character from other ff. I am really invested in this. Hope you don't drop this and keep up. I like how you introduce the powerups for the mc.
...Are you intrested in a story of a weird guy,that get off by making his enemies stronger so that he could be defeated by them? Even if that's literally a nonsense and impossible? Well,i don't... What is wrong with you? Are you a masohist? What kind of perverted creature you are?
hmmm it's written well, but just not my preference, upto to chapter 16 where I dropped I realized that the mc is like fang Yuan from revernd insanity, as long as it serves his purpose, he can betray ,kill you and sell you.... although I am not into hero types nor do i care world, society or others but I do like when characters are loyal and loving to their close ones. As long as you don't mind mind this kind of mc , this novel is great read
I hope that Issei becomes stronger than in canon and is able to win some of the fights against the MC. I also hope that he doesn't have a miserable end like in stories where Issei doesn't get along well with the MC. Instead, I wish he would become a tough rival that cannot be truly defeated.
The mc is a good character with is written well, up until he evolves later in the story and becomes a dragon. After that the story starts to fall off, he starts making seemingly pointless decisions and the other characters writing starts to fall off as well. Story is an 8/10 up to that point, after that it becomes a generic copy and paste MC personality on a harem collecting quest, story is a solid 5/10 after that ngl
Spoiler de révélation gran historia, ya hace mucho que no encontraba una historia de dxd que fuera tan buena, felicidades amigo, pero este es mi gusto personal pero me hubiese gustado que le dieras un mejor final a asia, pero ya es opinión mía, todo lo demás está excelente
everything was good til mc become a dragon and start obsessed with yasaka. romance development was good before, but author just ruined it with mc forcing himself to yasaka. i thought mc is smart, cunning, and calculating type like aizen or sukuna, but the mc is hornier than i thought. the story is like 70% of training arc, i dont want to comment about it. and the writing style is kinda weird for me with all the MC's inner self thought, that's annoying to read it ngl.
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It would be much more intresting if he knew abaut dxd world in hes old life ore some thing like that. Now story develpment is meh
Although I enjoy DxD verse only ff, its probably the only one I enjoy this much. I don't really like Raynore but this one is tolerable and might even turn likable for me in the future. Also, fox mommy instant 5 star.
………………………………………………………………………. x x x x x x x x x x x. x x xx. x x x x x x x x. x x x x x x x x x. x x x x x x. x x x x x x x x x. x x x x x x. x x x x x x x. x. x x. x x x x x x x x. x x x x x x xx x. x x x x x x x x x
One question and if you make Akeno betray Rias when they meet again because personally I think her potential stagnates by staying with the Gremory and always being a stupid competitor for Issei's attention as if it were a race to see who will get her. Gives her pathetic virginity, what do you think of this suggestion?
nice ................................... ( kill isei and i will get you another 5.0 )
Imagine an Aizen Sosuke in the dxd world, but someone who starts from scratch and has no knowledge of the plot. Another thing I need to point out is that the author has not only benefited from the bleach or dxd world when giving spells or skills to the main character, he has added a lot of variety and seems to continue to do so. The plot has changed from the beginning. I'm looking forward to the sequel. I hope there won't be too much drama in the betrayal part. (google translate)
if you like sukuna and aizen the read..............good overall...................................................................................
For a new writer this story is very well put together. The story pacing isn't inconsistent and doesn't have any major jumps for no reason. The main character design (Taka) is a good combination of Aizen and Sukuna, or that is what it looks like at this point in time. He isn't "Evil" just for plot convenience, every action Taka has taken has been true to his characterization. As far as update stability, well we have had a chapter daily. Some days we have had Multiple chapters dropped. The world background, well it's DxD and the original "canon" didn't really explore any of the verse. So any background we see in this will be better. Writing quality, well that speaks for itself. No one has commented any grammar issues or inconsistences. Overall this story is 5/5 for the DxD genre for me.
Great story so far. Really well written and captivating. I really like the concept and the mc you made. Keep up the good work🤘
This is honestly one of the best DXD fanfics I’ve read so far. Hope the author doesn’t drop this masterpiece and finishes it with an ending where the mc stands above the heavens.
Thought I should make some things clear about this story here. 1. Keep in mind that the Villain tag is there for a reason. 2. He will not reincarnate as a Devil, so if you're one of the people who don't like reincarnated MC stories then this might be to your liking. 3. There will be occasional smut chapters, but they will be very far and few between. Though it exists in this story, it is not the focus of it. If you have any more questions, you can leave them here and I'll respond when I get the chance to.