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In over 80 chapters the only bad written chapter was going back to village so will say it's a very good fanfic barely any mistakes or none at all
The system is too OP. Would have been better if he gets a single random jutsu, stat, or % towards each release type for a small boost from each corpse. Why does it arbitrarily allow him to skip hand-signs without having to do any training to master/perfect each jutsu. The jutsu creation system is ridiculous, seemingly able to do anything without clearly defined limits or caveats. For example if it was limited to combining jutsu components for jutsu he already knows it would be less OP. MC is very arrogant and goes about things in a super obvious manner. He simultaneously doesn't care about the village allowing normal cannon plots while willing to desert yet expose himself to arbitrarily help the village without any reason/goal in mind. Why did he break out of prison instead of simply leaving a clone behind and using earth escape? The MC should have simply learned/created jutsu to help him in his primary means of gaining power, staying in contact with corpses while undetected. He could have infiltrated the various hidden villages and farmed skills without causing any stir or worked as an undertaker.
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This shit is good, just a question, do u have patreon? Or anywhere that i can support ur work?
I just wanted to have a good review😘 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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I really like this story. Chapter could be a little longer, but the story development is nice and new. It’s not only about a powerhungry mc and with nice and funny plot twists
Very good story. Fights are well written. Emotions displayed very well. The system is good and helps keep track of everything because it would be a lot without it. The writing has almost zero mistakes and the transitions are smooth. The only thing that could potentially ruin this story is if it turns into politics.
It's a good fanfic, hence I gave a high rating. But it's not for everyone. MC uses his powers to help Ino grow, which ticked me off. So I will not be continuing further. I am ticked off because MC himself isn't very capable. It's his system helping him with everything. And seeing him helping others with low potential instead of someone with higher potential ticked me off.
Eu gostei, recomendo, infelizmente tem poucos capítulos, esperando lançar mais para maratonar tudo
5 stars because I like stories with copy skills Perfect -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is very entertaining. The mc is becoming more and more powerful after each fight. The system is a fairly good one as well. But there are also many inconsistencies as well. The fight against Kakuzu ended too fast. Kakuzu would not have gone down that easily. There are parts of the story that feels very rushed. But overall the story is good. Expecting more soonish
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Love it so far ~ ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Let's start with what I like. The system is cool if not a bit overused but not a huge deal. The MC is level-headed. I like that in a protagonist. But what I don't like is the world background. Yes, it is Canon-accurate. But after reading countless other Naruto works it gets stale. I want to see some more depth and a little bit of AU lore mixed in. Some things that are not Canon-accurate but would work well in the world of Naruto. As much as I love Naruto, the story has flaws and I want to read authors who try to correct those flaws in their own way. The story in itself isn't bad, just not for me. If you do like Naruto and want to see an op mc I would recommend d this to you.
**⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️** This book is an absolute gem! The author has done a phenomenal job of crafting a story that is thought-provoking. The pacing is perfect, with just the right balance of action, suspense, and introspection. The writing is elegant and immersive, making it easy to lose yourself in the world the author has created. Overall, this book is a must-read for anyone who loves a well-told story with depth and heart. I highly recommend it and can't wait to read more from this author!
I like the concept a route of improvement for the mc. But the manner of which the short “time skip” was mentioned was a little lacking and implies the mc doesn’t train even though his abilities copied should include talent. Also question on since the abilities stockpile does that mean if the mc stole two might guy level physiques would his body muscles shape to Might guys body with denser muscles or would they grow beyond that?
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I like the story, but it's strange that he wasn't discovered during his trips to the cemetery or stealing the forbidden scroll. ................................... ......... ....................... .........................
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I love how there’s an update every day and the writing is top tier and I love the cheats and the character not 100% evil but not a saint either thanks again drwright
i'm liking it so far good work..........................................................................................................................
The Author's writing is fairly consistent. I just hope he finishes the story this time. This concept is enjoyable, so there's a higher possibility he does.
I'd say this is going to be my most enjoyable story yet. If it is well received I'll continue it. If you enjoy it support by giving powerstones. Reviews are always appreciated.
Like this story it's a boom babyyyyyyyyyyy keep it up fam 💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥 💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥 💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥 💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥 💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥 💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥 💯💯💯💯💯🔥🔥🔥
In over 80 chapters the only bad written chapter was going back to village so will say it's a very good fanfic barely any mistakes or none at all
The system is too OP. Would have been better if he gets a single random jutsu, stat, or % towards each release type for a small boost from each corpse. Why does it arbitrarily allow him to skip hand-signs without having to do any training to master/perfect each jutsu. The jutsu creation system is ridiculous, seemingly able to do anything without clearly defined limits or caveats. For example if it was limited to combining jutsu components for jutsu he already knows it would be less OP. MC is very arrogant and goes about things in a super obvious manner. He simultaneously doesn't care about the village allowing normal cannon plots while willing to desert yet expose himself to arbitrarily help the village without any reason/goal in mind. Why did he break out of prison instead of simply leaving a clone behind and using earth escape? The MC should have simply learned/created jutsu to help him in his primary means of gaining power, staying in contact with corpses while undetected. He could have infiltrated the various hidden villages and farmed skills without causing any stir or worked as an undertaker.
Spoiler de révélation This shit is good, just a question, do u have patreon? Or anywhere that i can support ur work?
I just wanted to have a good review😘 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech" 'Thoughts' "Speech"
I really like this story. Chapter could be a little longer, but the story development is nice and new. It’s not only about a powerhungry mc and with nice and funny plot twists
Very good story. Fights are well written. Emotions displayed very well. The system is good and helps keep track of everything because it would be a lot without it. The writing has almost zero mistakes and the transitions are smooth. The only thing that could potentially ruin this story is if it turns into politics.
It's a good fanfic, hence I gave a high rating. But it's not for everyone. MC uses his powers to help Ino grow, which ticked me off. So I will not be continuing further. I am ticked off because MC himself isn't very capable. It's his system helping him with everything. And seeing him helping others with low potential instead of someone with higher potential ticked me off.
Eu gostei, recomendo, infelizmente tem poucos capítulos, esperando lançar mais para maratonar tudo
5 stars because I like stories with copy skills Perfect -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The story is very entertaining. The mc is becoming more and more powerful after each fight. The system is a fairly good one as well. But there are also many inconsistencies as well. The fight against Kakuzu ended too fast. Kakuzu would not have gone down that easily. There are parts of the story that feels very rushed. But overall the story is good. Expecting more soonish
Spoiler de révélation Love it so far ~ ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Let's start with what I like. The system is cool if not a bit overused but not a huge deal. The MC is level-headed. I like that in a protagonist. But what I don't like is the world background. Yes, it is Canon-accurate. But after reading countless other Naruto works it gets stale. I want to see some more depth and a little bit of AU lore mixed in. Some things that are not Canon-accurate but would work well in the world of Naruto. As much as I love Naruto, the story has flaws and I want to read authors who try to correct those flaws in their own way. The story in itself isn't bad, just not for me. If you do like Naruto and want to see an op mc I would recommend d this to you.
**⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️** This book is an absolute gem! The author has done a phenomenal job of crafting a story that is thought-provoking. The pacing is perfect, with just the right balance of action, suspense, and introspection. The writing is elegant and immersive, making it easy to lose yourself in the world the author has created. Overall, this book is a must-read for anyone who loves a well-told story with depth and heart. I highly recommend it and can't wait to read more from this author!
I like the concept a route of improvement for the mc. But the manner of which the short “time skip” was mentioned was a little lacking and implies the mc doesn’t train even though his abilities copied should include talent. Also question on since the abilities stockpile does that mean if the mc stole two might guy level physiques would his body muscles shape to Might guys body with denser muscles or would they grow beyond that?
Spoiler de révélation I like the story, but it's strange that he wasn't discovered during his trips to the cemetery or stealing the forbidden scroll. ................................... ......... ....................... .........................
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I love how there’s an update every day and the writing is top tier and I love the cheats and the character not 100% evil but not a saint either thanks again drwright
i'm liking it so far good work..........................................................................................................................
The Author's writing is fairly consistent. I just hope he finishes the story this time. This concept is enjoyable, so there's a higher possibility he does.
I'd say this is going to be my most enjoyable story yet. If it is well received I'll continue it. If you enjoy it support by giving powerstones. Reviews are always appreciated.