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change the name of the wolf you cannot disrespect the name of India like I report you if you do not change the name of the wolf in chapter 16
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keep writing, this is actually very interesting and better than my rpg theme novel. I'm looking forward for more chapters, definitely gonna read this again, because I think I will learn a lot from your novel that can also improve my writing as well, kudos to you Author🔥 you're novel is highly recommended
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change the name of the wolf you cannot disrespect the name of India like I report you if you do not change the name of the wolf in chapter 16
keep writing, this is actually very interesting and better than my rpg theme novel. I'm looking forward for more chapters, definitely gonna read this again, because I think I will learn a lot from your novel that can also improve my writing as well, kudos to you Author🔥 you're novel is highly recommended