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Those who write that the hero has softened and turned into a rag, are you guys serious? Don't you have enough fanfiction about the super-strong main character who blows up everyone and everything with one snap of the fingers of one hand and solves the problems of the other? Stop the planet, I'll leave. Author don't listen to the haters, keep going
It started off good, but mid story the mc started losing brain cells, the mc started forgiving betrayals multiple times simply because they’re his friends and they’re also females, he could’ve solve a lot of problems early on but he’s too in love and stupid, the author also drags the drama wayyy too long, and it just gets frustrating with the mc being a simp and dumb, also never even think about buying the P.A.T.R.E.O.N, chapters might seem a lot but 10 chapters is basically 1 chapter, nothing happens, just drama veing dragged for no reason.
muy bueno, sin duda harem y muy buen r18, pero lastima, son muy pocos capítulos... el mc repoblara la tierra?? hará su mujer a la linde enemiga?
I absolutely enjoy reading this, I only wish there were more of it. Perhaps more building and working on the surrounding background characters as well
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I love this fanfic, the MC is human it's normal that he lets himself be guided by his emotions at the beginning but then he learns from his mistakes, I can't wait to see the rest and I pray that the author doesn't abandon this fanfic. And maybe more chapters please. 🙏
I enjoy this story very much. Thank you for writing it! There is not that many 100 fanfic I have found, so this is truly a gem for me :-)! If I have to mention something to improve an excellent story it would be1. There is abit of grammar, but the story makes up for it for sure. 2. MC gets so many skills and items I loose track, I wish he had less and instead used his current skill set to its fullest and in interesting ways. But nvm. love the story thank you so much !
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The grammar is al I have to say, I read to chapter 4 btw. It's alright if not sloppy due to the writers lack of knowledge in areas that don't regard the show itself.
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Good job. Despite the presence of sometimes illogical moments and the killed progression of mc forces, it is very interesting to read. I will look forward to continuing.
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Thanks for writing this. I take it as one of my favorite fan fics so again I appreciate you writing this. But I have a problem with the update stability and I'm losing my mind waiting.
honestly started out good but then finn came along and Clark and raven and the story started going down hill very fast honestly I don't remember where it started but if you want to check it I think it was around chapter 60 more or less and you can see how the author starts destroying the fic.
Started pretty cool but once he starts trying to get Clarke and raven, the story takes a cliff dive, 3-6 chapters where only 5 min in the plot has moved because he does something dumb, acknowledges how it’s dumb, justifies the dumbness, then carries on doing that same thing and blame Finn or grounders for his bad decisions
The novel started off good but overall after chapter 30ish it went downhill fast
I don't care anymore, the MC sucks. He has the power to manipulate plants and only uses it in secret, he fears being ostracized because he has powers but when he becomes inseparable from the settlement as all but a king he still won't use his powers. Now he faces a strong and more numerous army and he still doesn't use his powers. And this is only one complaint that every active reader has.
Muito bom, não sei pq a avaliação é baixa, quer dizer, imagino o pq, ele simplesmente é lv100 quando o mais forte aí é no nível máximo 50, ent vendo ele passando por tudo isso pode ser meio desconfortável, acho que vc "errou "só na parte de dar muito poder muito rápido, mas eu particularmente não ligo, na vdd ponhando as estrelas agr vi pq está baixa kkkk, é oq é
this was a really good fic people love it me including but the author wants people to hate him with the constant let down after let down just read at your own pace be prepared for disappointment is all I can say
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Dude loved your work. And I request you to start the other "100" (drafted) show; it is awesome. And please continue your work. After a day of hectic work, I need something to read.
Though sure It might not be the perfect ff, But I don't really understand the people who hate on it lol. Its a fine read. that's all. Hope the author didn't drop it.
The plot? Too immediate. The protagonist is an idiot. It dragged on too long. And that happened to him because he was stupid. Good character story. Good drama. Good writing. It's going well. But they're going to keep calling him too much of an idiot. I don’t know. I hope the author improves as they keep writing. Because it doesn’t really deserve the four stars I'm going to give it.
Stop worrying about the haters. You can never please everyone. Thank you for the story, I look forward to more 👍
its getting good again but i'll say this beginning perfect and then past chp 28-62 it was so bad untill now the next 4 chapter redemption so be worn. its great now not perfect but its good again
Literal garbage, just go watch the original show as it's vastly better than this fic. 1.2/5
Those who write that the hero has softened and turned into a rag, are you guys serious? Don't you have enough fanfiction about the super-strong main character who blows up everyone and everything with one snap of the fingers of one hand and solves the problems of the other? Stop the planet, I'll leave. Author don't listen to the haters, keep going
It started off good, but mid story the mc started losing brain cells, the mc started forgiving betrayals multiple times simply because they’re his friends and they’re also females, he could’ve solve a lot of problems early on but he’s too in love and stupid, the author also drags the drama wayyy too long, and it just gets frustrating with the mc being a simp and dumb, also never even think about buying the P.A.T.R.E.O.N, chapters might seem a lot but 10 chapters is basically 1 chapter, nothing happens, just drama veing dragged for no reason.
muy bueno, sin duda harem y muy buen r18, pero lastima, son muy pocos capítulos... el mc repoblara la tierra?? hará su mujer a la linde enemiga?
I absolutely enjoy reading this, I only wish there were more of it. Perhaps more building and working on the surrounding background characters as well
Bon c bon. Ça part trop loin 😂😂😂😂😂😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌[img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
I love this fanfic, the MC is human it's normal that he lets himself be guided by his emotions at the beginning but then he learns from his mistakes, I can't wait to see the rest and I pray that the author doesn't abandon this fanfic. And maybe more chapters please. 🙏
I enjoy this story very much. Thank you for writing it! There is not that many 100 fanfic I have found, so this is truly a gem for me :-)! If I have to mention something to improve an excellent story it would be1. There is abit of grammar, but the story makes up for it for sure. 2. MC gets so many skills and items I loose track, I wish he had less and instead used his current skill set to its fullest and in interesting ways. But nvm. love the story thank you so much !
Mmmmmmmmmmsmssdidjdbbdbdjdosoosieuendndbduddyhsjsksododidiidjfbdbdmsnsmkahahsyeyeieeoorjdndndbdddvgdhdusieoeorodosuskaoaosjsnsbzbzysuebsbsbsnanaksisusyshshbebdnsnssoisieuejdndndbdhduebdbdbdhdjsjsnaosodjdj
The grammar is al I have to say, I read to chapter 4 btw. It's alright if not sloppy due to the writers lack of knowledge in areas that don't regard the show itself.
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Good job. Despite the presence of sometimes illogical moments and the killed progression of mc forces, it is very interesting to read. I will look forward to continuing.
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Thanks for writing this. I take it as one of my favorite fan fics so again I appreciate you writing this. But I have a problem with the update stability and I'm losing my mind waiting.
honestly started out good but then finn came along and Clark and raven and the story started going down hill very fast honestly I don't remember where it started but if you want to check it I think it was around chapter 60 more or less and you can see how the author starts destroying the fic.
Started pretty cool but once he starts trying to get Clarke and raven, the story takes a cliff dive, 3-6 chapters where only 5 min in the plot has moved because he does something dumb, acknowledges how it’s dumb, justifies the dumbness, then carries on doing that same thing and blame Finn or grounders for his bad decisions
The novel started off good but overall after chapter 30ish it went downhill fast
I don't care anymore, the MC sucks. He has the power to manipulate plants and only uses it in secret, he fears being ostracized because he has powers but when he becomes inseparable from the settlement as all but a king he still won't use his powers. Now he faces a strong and more numerous army and he still doesn't use his powers. And this is only one complaint that every active reader has.
Muito bom, não sei pq a avaliação é baixa, quer dizer, imagino o pq, ele simplesmente é lv100 quando o mais forte aí é no nível máximo 50, ent vendo ele passando por tudo isso pode ser meio desconfortável, acho que vc "errou "só na parte de dar muito poder muito rápido, mas eu particularmente não ligo, na vdd ponhando as estrelas agr vi pq está baixa kkkk, é oq é
this was a really good fic people love it me including but the author wants people to hate him with the constant let down after let down just read at your own pace be prepared for disappointment is all I can say
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Dude loved your work. And I request you to start the other "100" (drafted) show; it is awesome. And please continue your work. After a day of hectic work, I need something to read.
Though sure It might not be the perfect ff, But I don't really understand the people who hate on it lol. Its a fine read. that's all. Hope the author didn't drop it.
The plot? Too immediate. The protagonist is an idiot. It dragged on too long. And that happened to him because he was stupid. Good character story. Good drama. Good writing. It's going well. But they're going to keep calling him too much of an idiot. I don’t know. I hope the author improves as they keep writing. Because it doesn’t really deserve the four stars I'm going to give it.
Stop worrying about the haters. You can never please everyone. Thank you for the story, I look forward to more 👍
its getting good again but i'll say this beginning perfect and then past chp 28-62 it was so bad untill now the next 4 chapter redemption so be worn. its great now not perfect but its good again
Literal garbage, just go watch the original show as it's vastly better than this fic. 1.2/5