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Eu gosto do rumo da história, a hora divertido a forma como o Lan trabalha, é cruel na medida certa e tudo se desenvolve de maneira bem interessante
Bueno, hay muchos capítulos, la historia no está mal escrita, pero leer esta historia es exactamente lo mismo que verme el anime... No hay diferencias, el mc es temido y respetado, pero aunque sus acciones deberían cambiar mucho el futuro, todo sucede exactamente igual, simplemente agrega unas cuantas oraciones extra de los personajes, las recompensas del sistema también son ridículas, cosas como esferas del dragón o la espinaca de Popeye... En fin, la historia es aburrida, no puedo obligarme a darle 5 estrellas, aunque la traducción está bien hecha, no hay lógica, ni cambio respecto a la historia original, simplemente mc remplaza a ciertos personajes, o simplemente actúa por si mismo, pero sus acciones no afectan la historia en absoluto, además, a mc le encanta actuar de forma misteriosa, dando palabras cripticas a personajes irrelevantes, solo para lucirse o sentirse bien consigo mismo, en fin, el resultado final es que la historia es demasiado aburrida.
surely one of the most beautiful hxh stories i have read [img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=In a daze]
So far it has a pretty good plot, a lot of the mc words and actions don’t make sense but that’s just because he is changing how he acts to fit the situation. However, the translation is definitely not the best, it’s not awful but they could do with a beta reader. Overall decent, I hope the quality of translating improves as it goes on.
it started out fine, making you think you would see the character grow, but a few chapters in, the MC becomes stronger than meruem just by meeting Netero. the main character is thoroughly unlikeable. You've got under characters bending over backwards to glaze him, but he still keeps acting like some sort of wise old master handing out spoilers to other characters like candy. Oh, and of course he's completely unreasonable and won't let the slightest thing go, even when he's already obtained what he wanted
Good fanfic. Little knowledge of Mc’s appearance. Great translation quality
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I can't tell you how excited I was when I looked at your other novels and saw that you wrote the Monster Pirates novel, it is one of my favorite fanfics.!😱
Trash should just stop translating this garbage fanfic already. If I was any of the strong people the mic meet already I would kill him as soon as possible with all the knowledge he seems to have.
empezó bien pero como todo fanfic en que el mc se hace fuerte rápidamente se arruino todo, ahora solo porque es poderoso se volvió super arrogante y creído. El piensa que por ser fuerte puede decidir que esta bien y que mal, en la prueba de cocina en ves de seguir las reglas para pasar tranquilamente la prueba decidió ignorar a Menchi y complico todo el examen pero después habla como si fuera la victima que todo lo demás esta mal
I have a question I see the harem tag I don’t usually like harem and but since this is in the Hxh I feel like there aren’t that many options so I want to read this can someone explain why this has harem and to what degree
After main story starts 😬🙄🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………… ……………………… …………………… 😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱😴😴🥱🥱😴🥱🥱😴🥱
Good translation of a chinese ff. There are no pronouns mixups and the names and skills acquired are properly translated to english. Although there are chinese expressions here and there it is minimal. The mc is a typical chinese man reincarnator.
Uma historinha envolvente cativante precisa de mais enredo fora do mundo também preciso desenvolvimento de protagonista personalidade e a confiança sugiro também adicionar outros personagens de acompanhamento sempre seguindo o enredo do mundo
Another bland story with an absolutely unbalanced main character. Over the 80 chapters I've read, MC is already stronger than most of the Verse characters - right down to individual members of the Spider Troupe. And I would have accepted this fact if the Main Character "Deserved" his abilities, but... no. He won them in gacha. The number of golden fingers in the wrong place on MC increases with every tenth chapter. In general, the MC is a typical Mary Sue. All his plans go well or even better. All his opponents are obviously weaker and stupider than him. The rest of the characters in the story simply bend under his will, unable to make their own decisions - or simply deprived of this privilege. (I might have gone a bit overboard here, but in general this is my personal subjective opinion) Also, over all the past chapters, the only thing that is reported about the main Character is that his name is Lan. That's all. Well, he's also kind of thin and sometimes handsome? There were no other descriptions besides this. In the end, I simply cannot accept such a high rating for this fanfic. It is simply tasteless with a main character who is more of a function than a person. I consider further ranting unnecessary - that's all.
Sol ví 10 capitulos, hasta ahora, mc prefiere simplemente eliminar a los que son débiles, escapar de los que son fuertes, es un poco cobarde, de la misma manera, era una persona normal que cruza, pero en su primer día, elimina a un par de personas sin dudar ni temblar ni un poco, como si fuera una acción básica, admito que no me gusta cuando exageran demaciado la primera muerte, pero es imposible que una persona normal, mate a otra persona sin razón aparente, y sin siquiera pestañear un ojo, en fin, un fanfic chinos clásico, solo apaga tu cerebro y lee sin prestar atención a los detalles, talvez entonces la historia sea decente.
Read 56 chapters and it was 56 chapters of mid, literally just kind of meh. The translation is alright, but the overall story and main character are just kinda meh. There's no real moment that hooks you in, it feels like you're a few chapters from the mc getting a cool power or something interesting but it never really happens, even with getting roshi's experience it was just lame and didn't have to pull a moment like that should have. Overall 5/10 literally the most indifferent I've been about a novel, cool concept poor execution.
Siempre doy recomendaciones de 5 estrellas a cualquier historia, antes de leerlas, si la historia es buena, mantiene las estrellas, si no, las bajo, he visto los comentarios, y parece interesante, el hecho de que hubiera pocas batallas no es un problema, aunque prefiero mucho el romance, lo único que me preguntó, la historia tomara el continente oscuro? He visto lamentablemente pocas historias de HXH, y sin excepción, ninguna a sido especialmente buena y exitante, recuerdo hasta hoy, mientras miraba el anime, lo mucho que me sorprendió la revelación del continente oscuro, y de que todo el mundo conocido no era más que una pequeña isla en un lago, las grandes calamidades conocidas, y el hecho de que los tres cazadores más capaces del mundo apenas salieron con vida, esos tres tenían la capacidad de evitar cualquier amenaza eliminar cualquier vida y sobrevivir a cualquier ataque, y aún así, pudiendo esos tres acabar a meruen con relativa facilidad, no consideraban permanecer en el continente oscuro, incluso tomamos en cuenta, la reina hormiga, una especie del continente oscuro, en dónde podría crecer con facilidad, y donde seguramente habra muchas criaturas de clase rey que son incluso mejores que meruen, huyo con miedo al mundo conocido, imagínar lo increíble que sería un arco de exploración total del continente oscuro, en donde existencias no diferentes a dioses estan al rededor, seria genial encontrar esl en esta historia. Hay varias historias en las que el mc viaja al continente oscuro, simplemente es tonto, los mc llegan, crean ciudades como si nada, y luego derrotan a un par de monstruos peligrosos, no tiene esencia ninguna, después de todo, el continente oscuro es tan peligroso, que sin la capacidad de ver el futuro, netero no habría salido con vida, y las demás expediciones no habrían fracasado todas, desde monstruos horribles que matan con una simple mirada, virus extraños que convierten a sus portadores en monstruos, plagas voraces que arrasan Miles de kilómetros en minutos, o bestias tan fuertes, que el rey quimera parece solo una hormiga, el continente oscuro es un lugar en dónde no puedes luchar, solo sobrevivir, y esa es mi parte más interesante de HXH.
CH 118. So far MC has a definite goal and meets some interesting characters in HxH. I enjoyed this story even though it wasn't as complex as the original HxH and how the character interactions were quite good. But... but the concept of Nen MC is unclear with various unreasonable gifts breaking the balance of the world. I mean, wait CH 300+ maybe MC is the strongest character in DC with creatures beyond the brain's reasoning. Hah... basically this is good, not serious enough to be a Masterpiece but it is quite entertaining.
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great translation but the raw source could be a lot better. Like how the OG author include every wiki detail on every character introduced, it just bogs down the pacing. The dialogue is too crude as well. MC's nen is OP but still controlled to be progressive strengthening so it's still fun to read. The story is still canon compliant.
This is a great story. I have fun reading your story. I will journey lan in HxH world. Waiting for the next adventure from Lan with Gon and Friend. This story is good
finally good cover picture Lol. i just forgot to review this fic. good story with smart mc while its just slow pace and not canon time yet.
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Your work is very interesting and from the good review score of the novel, I would like to ask for your permission to translate your work into my country's language. If it's not too much trouble, please reply. (I must say that the language to be translated is Thai because I'm Thai.)
Eu gosto do rumo da história, a hora divertido a forma como o Lan trabalha, é cruel na medida certa e tudo se desenvolve de maneira bem interessante
Bueno, hay muchos capítulos, la historia no está mal escrita, pero leer esta historia es exactamente lo mismo que verme el anime... No hay diferencias, el mc es temido y respetado, pero aunque sus acciones deberían cambiar mucho el futuro, todo sucede exactamente igual, simplemente agrega unas cuantas oraciones extra de los personajes, las recompensas del sistema también son ridículas, cosas como esferas del dragón o la espinaca de Popeye... En fin, la historia es aburrida, no puedo obligarme a darle 5 estrellas, aunque la traducción está bien hecha, no hay lógica, ni cambio respecto a la historia original, simplemente mc remplaza a ciertos personajes, o simplemente actúa por si mismo, pero sus acciones no afectan la historia en absoluto, además, a mc le encanta actuar de forma misteriosa, dando palabras cripticas a personajes irrelevantes, solo para lucirse o sentirse bien consigo mismo, en fin, el resultado final es que la historia es demasiado aburrida.
surely one of the most beautiful hxh stories i have read [img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=In a daze][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=In a daze]
So far it has a pretty good plot, a lot of the mc words and actions don’t make sense but that’s just because he is changing how he acts to fit the situation. However, the translation is definitely not the best, it’s not awful but they could do with a beta reader. Overall decent, I hope the quality of translating improves as it goes on.
it started out fine, making you think you would see the character grow, but a few chapters in, the MC becomes stronger than meruem just by meeting Netero. the main character is thoroughly unlikeable. You've got under characters bending over backwards to glaze him, but he still keeps acting like some sort of wise old master handing out spoilers to other characters like candy. Oh, and of course he's completely unreasonable and won't let the slightest thing go, even when he's already obtained what he wanted
Good fanfic. Little knowledge of Mc’s appearance. Great translation quality
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I can't tell you how excited I was when I looked at your other novels and saw that you wrote the Monster Pirates novel, it is one of my favorite fanfics.!😱
Trash should just stop translating this garbage fanfic already. If I was any of the strong people the mic meet already I would kill him as soon as possible with all the knowledge he seems to have.
empezó bien pero como todo fanfic en que el mc se hace fuerte rápidamente se arruino todo, ahora solo porque es poderoso se volvió super arrogante y creído. El piensa que por ser fuerte puede decidir que esta bien y que mal, en la prueba de cocina en ves de seguir las reglas para pasar tranquilamente la prueba decidió ignorar a Menchi y complico todo el examen pero después habla como si fuera la victima que todo lo demás esta mal
I have a question I see the harem tag I don’t usually like harem and but since this is in the Hxh I feel like there aren’t that many options so I want to read this can someone explain why this has harem and to what degree
After main story starts 😬🙄🤢🤢🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………… ……………………… …………………… 😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱😴😴😴😴🥱🥱🥱😴😴🥱🥱😴🥱🥱😴🥱
Good translation of a chinese ff. There are no pronouns mixups and the names and skills acquired are properly translated to english. Although there are chinese expressions here and there it is minimal. The mc is a typical chinese man reincarnator.
Uma historinha envolvente cativante precisa de mais enredo fora do mundo também preciso desenvolvimento de protagonista personalidade e a confiança sugiro também adicionar outros personagens de acompanhamento sempre seguindo o enredo do mundo
Another bland story with an absolutely unbalanced main character. Over the 80 chapters I've read, MC is already stronger than most of the Verse characters - right down to individual members of the Spider Troupe. And I would have accepted this fact if the Main Character "Deserved" his abilities, but... no. He won them in gacha. The number of golden fingers in the wrong place on MC increases with every tenth chapter. In general, the MC is a typical Mary Sue. All his plans go well or even better. All his opponents are obviously weaker and stupider than him. The rest of the characters in the story simply bend under his will, unable to make their own decisions - or simply deprived of this privilege. (I might have gone a bit overboard here, but in general this is my personal subjective opinion) Also, over all the past chapters, the only thing that is reported about the main Character is that his name is Lan. That's all. Well, he's also kind of thin and sometimes handsome? There were no other descriptions besides this. In the end, I simply cannot accept such a high rating for this fanfic. It is simply tasteless with a main character who is more of a function than a person. I consider further ranting unnecessary - that's all.
Sol ví 10 capitulos, hasta ahora, mc prefiere simplemente eliminar a los que son débiles, escapar de los que son fuertes, es un poco cobarde, de la misma manera, era una persona normal que cruza, pero en su primer día, elimina a un par de personas sin dudar ni temblar ni un poco, como si fuera una acción básica, admito que no me gusta cuando exageran demaciado la primera muerte, pero es imposible que una persona normal, mate a otra persona sin razón aparente, y sin siquiera pestañear un ojo, en fin, un fanfic chinos clásico, solo apaga tu cerebro y lee sin prestar atención a los detalles, talvez entonces la historia sea decente.
Read 56 chapters and it was 56 chapters of mid, literally just kind of meh. The translation is alright, but the overall story and main character are just kinda meh. There's no real moment that hooks you in, it feels like you're a few chapters from the mc getting a cool power or something interesting but it never really happens, even with getting roshi's experience it was just lame and didn't have to pull a moment like that should have. Overall 5/10 literally the most indifferent I've been about a novel, cool concept poor execution.
Siempre doy recomendaciones de 5 estrellas a cualquier historia, antes de leerlas, si la historia es buena, mantiene las estrellas, si no, las bajo, he visto los comentarios, y parece interesante, el hecho de que hubiera pocas batallas no es un problema, aunque prefiero mucho el romance, lo único que me preguntó, la historia tomara el continente oscuro? He visto lamentablemente pocas historias de HXH, y sin excepción, ninguna a sido especialmente buena y exitante, recuerdo hasta hoy, mientras miraba el anime, lo mucho que me sorprendió la revelación del continente oscuro, y de que todo el mundo conocido no era más que una pequeña isla en un lago, las grandes calamidades conocidas, y el hecho de que los tres cazadores más capaces del mundo apenas salieron con vida, esos tres tenían la capacidad de evitar cualquier amenaza eliminar cualquier vida y sobrevivir a cualquier ataque, y aún así, pudiendo esos tres acabar a meruen con relativa facilidad, no consideraban permanecer en el continente oscuro, incluso tomamos en cuenta, la reina hormiga, una especie del continente oscuro, en dónde podría crecer con facilidad, y donde seguramente habra muchas criaturas de clase rey que son incluso mejores que meruen, huyo con miedo al mundo conocido, imagínar lo increíble que sería un arco de exploración total del continente oscuro, en donde existencias no diferentes a dioses estan al rededor, seria genial encontrar esl en esta historia. Hay varias historias en las que el mc viaja al continente oscuro, simplemente es tonto, los mc llegan, crean ciudades como si nada, y luego derrotan a un par de monstruos peligrosos, no tiene esencia ninguna, después de todo, el continente oscuro es tan peligroso, que sin la capacidad de ver el futuro, netero no habría salido con vida, y las demás expediciones no habrían fracasado todas, desde monstruos horribles que matan con una simple mirada, virus extraños que convierten a sus portadores en monstruos, plagas voraces que arrasan Miles de kilómetros en minutos, o bestias tan fuertes, que el rey quimera parece solo una hormiga, el continente oscuro es un lugar en dónde no puedes luchar, solo sobrevivir, y esa es mi parte más interesante de HXH.
CH 118. So far MC has a definite goal and meets some interesting characters in HxH. I enjoyed this story even though it wasn't as complex as the original HxH and how the character interactions were quite good. But... but the concept of Nen MC is unclear with various unreasonable gifts breaking the balance of the world. I mean, wait CH 300+ maybe MC is the strongest character in DC with creatures beyond the brain's reasoning. Hah... basically this is good, not serious enough to be a Masterpiece but it is quite entertaining.
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great translation but the raw source could be a lot better. Like how the OG author include every wiki detail on every character introduced, it just bogs down the pacing. The dialogue is too crude as well. MC's nen is OP but still controlled to be progressive strengthening so it's still fun to read. The story is still canon compliant.
This is a great story. I have fun reading your story. I will journey lan in HxH world. Waiting for the next adventure from Lan with Gon and Friend. This story is good
finally good cover picture Lol. i just forgot to review this fic. good story with smart mc while its just slow pace and not canon time yet.
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Your work is very interesting and from the good review score of the novel, I would like to ask for your permission to translate your work into my country's language. If it's not too much trouble, please reply. (I must say that the language to be translated is Thai because I'm Thai.)