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I honestly don't usually read novels that haven't reached at least a 100 chapters yet but this one just had me hooked up that I can't have the patience anymore, it's pretty rare to find good novels with villainous characters this days and I can't believe I'm one of the few lucky ones finding it early on haha I have RR to thanks for that though.
It's a great take on a character forsaken by the world with a unique power system. has some intriguing mysteries and character growth. It's also pretty interesting with the faction and gods of the world pretty fascinating overall. Definitely worth a try if you've been bored with a lot of the same systems and forsaken of the world troops.
just finished the introduction to the first volume and can already tell it's going to be a masterpiece.i hope the author won't disappoint.i also hope it's not a harem unless the author is sure he can handle the harem plot.
hey author,just saw that there are no new chapters of late and was wondering if you plan to drop it or will it continue. trying to figure out before i start it.
the plot seems cool, the writing quality is very good, and the development is going well. if I had one thing to criticize would be: why did you dropped the other books, author? please finish this one 😭
A good read, some parts of the plot needs improving and a bit faster pace would be good.
Tags misleading, he isn’t a villain more like an antihero. Second the name of the novel is a lie he isn’t forsaken he pretty much lost fair and square. It would make more sense to call him a loser instead of forsaken like he is a victim. And the author has this problem of justifying anything the mc does instead of making the reader judge for himself. Hypocrisy is a common theme in this novel, instead of owning up to things he does he acts righteous about it.
The title is click bait the MC Wasnt abandoned by god he just lost fair and square and is a hypocrite
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A little bit slow paced in my opinion but I love the story so far. Keep up the great work.
A slow pace story that is rich in world building, author is taking time to build the characters and world - a very good read. Suggested if you are fan of slow pace.
Nice and fresh idea that keeps you coming back for more. The world building so far is solid and the writing quality is impressive. There are only 6 chapters at the time of my review and the MC character is likable... good job
I am genuinely impressed with the author's work. This one was the best version and I know he will still improve. Pacing is slow and was important as to introduce the MCs character and as well as set up the next arcs and beginning of the revolution of the plot. Battles and scenes were having clarity unlike mine lol 😆 anyways good luck. Best wishes.......
Hey Everyone! Author here, No drama, Let’s dive straight into it! If you’re into slow-burn, action-packed stories with intense battles, high stakes, and a protagonist who’s willing to risk everything to survive, then this is the story for you! The story follows Levi, a guy who’s been totally screwed over by the gods and left to fend for himself in a deadly maze filled with monsters. But Levi’s not one to go down easy. He’s clever, desperate, and willing to make some seriously dark deals to get what he wants. And when he finally makes a contract with the Demon King, things get wild! He’s back on Earth, hell-bent on revenge, and tasked with creating a demon sanctuary. It’s gripping, full of tension, and every chapter will leave you craving more. Trust me, this is one you don’t want to miss. Check it out if you’re intrigued! Just a heads-up: this isn’t a harem story. It’s all about the villain’s journey, with plenty of gore. I advise those who aren’t into extreme scenes to steer clear. The tags are based on my vision for the story, giving me the freedom to write what I want—so please go easy on me. If you have any questions, drop them here, and I’ll be sure to answer them!
I honestly don't usually read novels that haven't reached at least a 100 chapters yet but this one just had me hooked up that I can't have the patience anymore, it's pretty rare to find good novels with villainous characters this days and I can't believe I'm one of the few lucky ones finding it early on haha I have RR to thanks for that though.
It's a great take on a character forsaken by the world with a unique power system. has some intriguing mysteries and character growth. It's also pretty interesting with the faction and gods of the world pretty fascinating overall. Definitely worth a try if you've been bored with a lot of the same systems and forsaken of the world troops.
just finished the introduction to the first volume and can already tell it's going to be a masterpiece.i hope the author won't disappoint.i also hope it's not a harem unless the author is sure he can handle the harem plot.
hey author,just saw that there are no new chapters of late and was wondering if you plan to drop it or will it continue. trying to figure out before i start it.
the plot seems cool, the writing quality is very good, and the development is going well. if I had one thing to criticize would be: why did you dropped the other books, author? please finish this one 😭
A good read, some parts of the plot needs improving and a bit faster pace would be good.
Tags misleading, he isn’t a villain more like an antihero. Second the name of the novel is a lie he isn’t forsaken he pretty much lost fair and square. It would make more sense to call him a loser instead of forsaken like he is a victim. And the author has this problem of justifying anything the mc does instead of making the reader judge for himself. Hypocrisy is a common theme in this novel, instead of owning up to things he does he acts righteous about it.
The title is click bait the MC Wasnt abandoned by god he just lost fair and square and is a hypocrite
Spoiler de révélation A little bit slow paced in my opinion but I love the story so far. Keep up the great work.
A slow pace story that is rich in world building, author is taking time to build the characters and world - a very good read. Suggested if you are fan of slow pace.
Nice and fresh idea that keeps you coming back for more. The world building so far is solid and the writing quality is impressive. There are only 6 chapters at the time of my review and the MC character is likable... good job
I am genuinely impressed with the author's work. This one was the best version and I know he will still improve. Pacing is slow and was important as to introduce the MCs character and as well as set up the next arcs and beginning of the revolution of the plot. Battles and scenes were having clarity unlike mine lol 😆 anyways good luck. Best wishes.......
Hey Everyone! Author here, No drama, Let’s dive straight into it! If you’re into slow-burn, action-packed stories with intense battles, high stakes, and a protagonist who’s willing to risk everything to survive, then this is the story for you! The story follows Levi, a guy who’s been totally screwed over by the gods and left to fend for himself in a deadly maze filled with monsters. But Levi’s not one to go down easy. He’s clever, desperate, and willing to make some seriously dark deals to get what he wants. And when he finally makes a contract with the Demon King, things get wild! He’s back on Earth, hell-bent on revenge, and tasked with creating a demon sanctuary. It’s gripping, full of tension, and every chapter will leave you craving more. Trust me, this is one you don’t want to miss. Check it out if you’re intrigued! Just a heads-up: this isn’t a harem story. It’s all about the villain’s journey, with plenty of gore. I advise those who aren’t into extreme scenes to steer clear. The tags are based on my vision for the story, giving me the freedom to write what I want—so please go easy on me. If you have any questions, drop them here, and I’ll be sure to answer them!