10Critiques
4.58
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
Oh, I'm so outdated it's now over 70 chaps?? Forgive me author , here's the five star rating.... jeez....
I added this novel to my bookmark and I am just curious about the novel does it have smart in it or not?
definitely one of the better simulation stories out there Mc might be cringy af but is still good in other aspects and has a clear goal probably would be a nice story as it goes 100 plus chapters
This story is one of the best stories I have read last month and most likely even in minimum of the top 3 of my favorite novels!!! So keep it up Author!! A beautiful storyline with interesting characters and development of them all! The world background is the enought to puzzle the rest that are missing together. The only thing that I have to criticizes is the chapters where the MC is in the simulation. - Maybe shorten it like the first Simulation that he did.
Till 30 chapters and it is a good novel, if there is anything then the dialogues, like there is repetition and obvious things are said for dumbos, well I hope it gets fixed in later chapter. For me it is a five star!
So far, I'm enjoying the story. The way the world is set up creates interesting plots. 👍
The story seems quite good so far. I like the concept of traveling to worlds through simulation and becoming a god to progress. It's still a bit early to tell how the well the progression will be done and if it keeps this quality so for now my rating is lower. When there are more chapters I will update this. Overall though quite a good novel keep up the work author :) looking forward to how this novel progresses.
Another nice multiverse novel. I'm giving only four stars now cos I want to see more. Let's say......... 20 Chapters will get five star reviews.
nice book overall writing style is perfect! if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return.'
Oh, I'm so outdated it's now over 70 chaps?? Forgive me author , here's the five star rating.... jeez....
I added this novel to my bookmark and I am just curious about the novel does it have smart in it or not?
definitely one of the better simulation stories out there Mc might be cringy af but is still good in other aspects and has a clear goal probably would be a nice story as it goes 100 plus chapters
This story is one of the best stories I have read last month and most likely even in minimum of the top 3 of my favorite novels!!! So keep it up Author!! A beautiful storyline with interesting characters and development of them all! The world background is the enought to puzzle the rest that are missing together. The only thing that I have to criticizes is the chapters where the MC is in the simulation. - Maybe shorten it like the first Simulation that he did.
Till 30 chapters and it is a good novel, if there is anything then the dialogues, like there is repetition and obvious things are said for dumbos, well I hope it gets fixed in later chapter. For me it is a five star!
So far, I'm enjoying the story. The way the world is set up creates interesting plots. 👍
The story seems quite good so far. I like the concept of traveling to worlds through simulation and becoming a god to progress. It's still a bit early to tell how the well the progression will be done and if it keeps this quality so for now my rating is lower. When there are more chapters I will update this. Overall though quite a good novel keep up the work author :) looking forward to how this novel progresses.
Another nice multiverse novel. I'm giving only four stars now cos I want to see more. Let's say......... 20 Chapters will get five star reviews.
nice book overall writing style is perfect! if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return.'