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Author, honestly speaking it is good. But sometimes you forget to write the system totally and you should use small phrases. It will be good if you make an auxiliary chapter for stats and world building
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Author, honestly speaking it is good. But sometimes you forget to write the system totally and you should use small phrases. It will be good if you make an auxiliary chapter for stats and world building
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