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The typical 5-star review from writers to their story. We have reached nearly 300 collection and 50k views. Honestly, quiet surprising. I hope you can keep commenting on the chapters. Share your thoughts, memes and waifu pics. That is all for now. Bye.
it's a good story and i hope you keep it going and may you (kiana) the beauty of this world, always shine. ...........................................
The story so far is really good the MC takes smart choices .The Grammer is good and stability of updates with chapters of +1.7k words. I hope this doesn't get dropped 👍
You know what... it was good at the start and i hate when you decide his mom like the true mom have affair with him. that was i hate about this, and you make them just suddenly travel to another world.
Introducing meta essence of power/skill creation really makes it more interesting where the story will be going.
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i just saw this Novel and I'm already hooked on it, so the author, keep updating UmU
in too lazy to write, basically this is a good one to read (a good plot, grammar, and character) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The story has potential and it's pretty good with the use of some abilities, Just in my personal opinion, mc has too much power from the start. For example, I like the skill he chose for the first time use of that golden energy but he uses of those abilities are too diverse and advanced without any training and familiarity. Take the illusion manipulation ability for example, the way he used it is something I would expect from Marlin or other pro illusion users. He is way too good at them in very little time. Otherwise it's a good fanfiction.👍👍❤️😇
a fanfic that has kiana in it is a good civilization, but the huge downside is that it's only 11 chapters, and honestly, at first, I thought this was an mtl, lol can't really trust when a fanfic has douluo dalu in its title
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let's see..what makes this fanfic enjoyable: Mc: .not cringy. not braindead like any op cultivation protagonist. not annoying. writing quality: really really good and the chapters are minimum 2k words without useless info dump or anything. very few grammatic error. updating stability: decent at least one chapter everyday overall for me i am enjoying so far definitely one of the best reads about soul land ff.
----------------------------------------------------The best fanfic I've seen lately!!!--------------------------------------------------------------
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All I need is 2 chapters a day. I'm looking forward to this book, just don't drop it.
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Found a new fic that i like that has Kiana and as a vivid fan of honkai a 5/5 review BOW DOWN TO THE TUNA GODDESS
please don't let us down and make sure Tang family goes underground dead
Looking Forward of your work development for your story and having high expectation for this one too and I hope you won't drop it midways
The typical 5-star review from writers to their story. We have reached nearly 300 collection and 50k views. Honestly, quiet surprising. I hope you can keep commenting on the chapters. Share your thoughts, memes and waifu pics. That is all for now. Bye.
it's a good story and i hope you keep it going and may you (kiana) the beauty of this world, always shine. ...........................................
The story so far is really good the MC takes smart choices .The Grammer is good and stability of updates with chapters of +1.7k words. I hope this doesn't get dropped 👍
You know what... it was good at the start and i hate when you decide his mom like the true mom have affair with him. that was i hate about this, and you make them just suddenly travel to another world.
Introducing meta essence of power/skill creation really makes it more interesting where the story will be going.
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i just saw this Novel and I'm already hooked on it, so the author, keep updating UmU
in too lazy to write, basically this is a good one to read (a good plot, grammar, and character) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The story has potential and it's pretty good with the use of some abilities, Just in my personal opinion, mc has too much power from the start. For example, I like the skill he chose for the first time use of that golden energy but he uses of those abilities are too diverse and advanced without any training and familiarity. Take the illusion manipulation ability for example, the way he used it is something I would expect from Marlin or other pro illusion users. He is way too good at them in very little time. Otherwise it's a good fanfiction.👍👍❤️😇
a fanfic that has kiana in it is a good civilization, but the huge downside is that it's only 11 chapters, and honestly, at first, I thought this was an mtl, lol can't really trust when a fanfic has douluo dalu in its title
[img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать]
let's see..what makes this fanfic enjoyable: Mc: .not cringy. not braindead like any op cultivation protagonist. not annoying. writing quality: really really good and the chapters are minimum 2k words without useless info dump or anything. very few grammatic error. updating stability: decent at least one chapter everyday overall for me i am enjoying so far definitely one of the best reads about soul land ff.
----------------------------------------------------The best fanfic I've seen lately!!!--------------------------------------------------------------
Spoiler de révélation All I need is 2 chapters a day. I'm looking forward to this book, just don't drop it.
……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ……………………… ………………………
Spoiler de révélation Found a new fic that i like that has Kiana and as a vivid fan of honkai a 5/5 review BOW DOWN TO THE TUNA GODDESS
please don't let us down and make sure Tang family goes underground dead
Looking Forward of your work development for your story and having high expectation for this one too and I hope you won't drop it midways