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shows some potential but it is not currently long enough for a more detailed review
the name of the company and the mc are different "atlas name is not explained" the first name of the mc is also ridiculous. the voice in his head is not pleasant already that a controlling system is annoying there it is worse. finally the elements of other worlds are poorly exploited, resident evil, red dead redemption2 just a character name mentioned quickly then nothing. even the means of going to another universe is shaky, in short nothing is right.
Certified banger fr.. Only thing that annoys me is how sometimes the names of the primarchs are wrong. Either have them take up new names or keep their og names and stick to them.
shows some potential but it is not currently long enough for a more detailed review
the name of the company and the mc are different "atlas name is not explained" the first name of the mc is also ridiculous. the voice in his head is not pleasant already that a controlling system is annoying there it is worse. finally the elements of other worlds are poorly exploited, resident evil, red dead redemption2 just a character name mentioned quickly then nothing. even the means of going to another universe is shaky, in short nothing is right.
Certified banger fr.. Only thing that annoys me is how sometimes the names of the primarchs are wrong. Either have them take up new names or keep their og names and stick to them.