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2.65% World Evolution! Awakening Limit Grade Talent! / Chapter 5: Goddess Frustration (edited)

Chapitre 5: Goddess Frustration (edited)

Chapter 5: Goddess Frustration

[A/N: Hello guys, This is the author of the novel. All I wanted to say is that this is a fictional story, and the events in this novel are purely fictional. So do not relate them to the real world. Well, crazy stuff happens in purely fictional fantasy novels please don't relate them to the real world; that's it.]

Aiden suddenly sees a barrage of messages in front of his eyes and thinks, 'Well, I think I have cursed my own luck' as he focuses on the messages in front of him.

He feels hopeless as he has seen awakening fail more than five times already, but suddenly Aiden's eyes bulge as he starts feeling the most painful feeling he has experienced in his life he bites his own lips to endure pain as blood starts to flow out of his bitten lips, just as Aiden thinks he can endure the pain.

Suddenly all the bones in his body started breaking, his muscles started tearing, and his blood began to boil as his body began to break and heal itself again and again.

Aiden, who had never experienced something so painful in his life, began to wither on the ground, tears and snot leaking from his face as he started yelling at the top of his lungs. 

"Aaaagggghhhh!" Aiden has only one thought in his mind: to let go and rest in deep slumber, As darkness clouded his mind as he began to lose consciousness, suddenly the image of his smiling sister and his mother's dead body entered his mind.

As darkness clouded, his mind began to clear away, and he remembered the pain of seeing his mother's dead body, with a new profound light in his deep black eyes, he lay on the ground while gritting his teeth, trying his best not to make any sound, but an occasional "ugh." sound escaped his mouth due to overwhelming pain.

After 5 minutes of suffering, the pain subsided as he struggled to keep his eyes open.

[ TALENT-AWAKENING SUCCESSFUL ]

[ Successfully Awakened Talent: Celestial (Unknown) ]

Aiden, on the verge of losing consciousness, saw a message about the successful awakening of the talent, finally lost consciousness, and entered a deep slumber.

Aiden, who didn't notice the change in his body as his body seemed to have increased in height with his cute appearance as an 11-year-old boy, became cuter and handsome, along with his hair which was originally short black hair, changing to beautiful black hair with a mix of white in it, and his eyes changing from deep black to a majestic golden-yellow color.

His body became more toned with a little bit of muscle on it, which didn't affect the beauty of his lean body and seemed to enhance it more, but currently, he is covered in blood without any clothes as it was burned to ashes during his awakening.

The goddess, who was sitting on her usual majestic white throne with golden designs, had beads of sweat forming her beautiful face. She seems very exhausted, which makes her look like a frail beauty.

Anyone who sees her right now will only have the thought of protecting her.

The goddess, who was currently seeing Aiden from her throne, had a rare smile on her beautiful face as she said to herself, "I knew my choice was not wrong, and the remaining depended on the child himself. Hehehehe when those arrogant beings see him, a lowly human child with the potential to become @#$%^@#, but until then, I have to oversee this child not to make too much noise to attract the attention of those beings because he is too weak right now, and with this shameless nature, I didn't know how much trouble this kid brings." 

After saying this, her body began to materialize in front of Aiden, who was currently naked and covered in blood, lying on the ice-covered ground.

This didn't seem to be her real body, because if it were her real body, this world would get destroyed by the sheer pressure emanating from her body.

With a wave of her hand, all the dirt and blood covering Aiden's body vanishes and reveals his well-toned body with an extremely handsome face. While looking at his face, the goddess said to herself.

"This child might challenge me for beauty if his physique is completed, hmph!" She seemed pretty annoyed while looking at his face and remembering his shameless behavior. 

"How dare he challenge me, stupid child?" After seeing his cute pouting face, she was pretty annoyed by him and his behavior, but she still acknowledged his tenacity and will and praised him genuinely.

"You did a good job, child." The goddess said in her majestic voice 

The goddess, who had just praised Aiden for his successful awakening while he was unconscious.

She might never praise him because of his shameless behavior in front of him.

After a few seconds, the goddess began to check his naked body for any problems after his talent awakening. As an unknown aura began to envelop his body after successfully checking, there seemed to be no problem with his body.

Her eyes drifted to certain things between his legs, as the size of that thing is not normal for his age, she stared for a whole minute while curiously peaked at his shaft as she crouched down in front of it, she began to gently touch his flaccid shaft with her delicate fingers, which seemed not to hurt him. Just as she touched him for a few seconds, suddenly his shaft began to grow rapidly, standing proudly.

The goddess, who was startled by the sudden increase in his rod, backed away as her perky ass hit the ground. "Ouch! Stupid child" as she sat back up only to see a 6-inch-long thick rod in front of her, and it was twitching slightly as if it might burst at any moment. She stared at it for a couple of seconds.

A deep red blush appeared on her beautiful face. She had lived for millions of years and knew what type of thing these stupid mortals do.

She only wanted to check if it was due to his physique because it was the first time in the universe that someone had gotten this physique, so his penis is abnormal for his age. She wanted to find out if it was really due to his physique and to do that, she had to touch it with her clone for better analysis.

The result she found out is that this shameless penis was abnormal from the start and only affected a little by the physique at the cost of the humiliation she had never experienced before.

In her mind, she took note that she would not forget this and make sure to teach him a proper lesson for this humiliation, even if he was not conscious. It's a natural reaction, and she still wouldn't forgive thinking that he is an 11-year-old child.

Thinking about him being 11 years old, she finds it hard to believe as he is very smart and his mind doesn't work like that of an 11-year-old normal human child, but she doesn't think too much about it as there are many geniuses in the universe who are far more talented than him.

But she still felt good knowing that the one who gets this talent and physique is not someone who is irrational and immature who does things on whims and is actually a smart child who thinks with logic and is actually very cautious.

While interacting with him previously, she actually liked the fact that he didn't trust her and had doubts in his mind, so she liked his mentality other than him lusting over her.

Well, she could tell he didn't like the way she talked with him, but only natural, as she couldn't talk to someone with respect, knowing how weak they were. Her natural way of interacting was always at the pinnacle, so she didn't respect anyone other than those who were equal to him or someone who had earned her respect, as only the strong had the right to demand and the weak would only get devoured in this cruel universe.

Coming out of her thought, she focuses on what's in front of her, seeing him lying naked on the ground covered in blood and filth, and with his erect, 6-inch-long penis, she still felt angry and wanted to beat him a little, but she had her own pride that she wouldn't attack a weak, unconscious child.

She decided to do one more check on his body for confirmation as she moved her delicate hand this time she didn't want to touch his filthy shaft which is fully erect and twitching slightly from time to time knowing that it was like that by her touch a blush appeared on her face and frustrated sound escape from her beautiful mouth "Arggh!"

She took a few deep breaths for a couple of seconds to calm herself down and focused on the task on front touched his chest and found out everything about his body in more detail than the previous time.

She can tell he had to take a short nap to release the stress from his body, and thinking about the nap, she remembers that she had to go into hibernation for the large amount of energy she had to spend during his awakening.

She once again waved her hand, but this time something different happened as his completely naked body was now magically covered in ragged clothes, she started thinking, 'Well, everything is done now. I had to go and recover my energy

As her clone dispersed from her plane, her soul fell into hibernation, and no one knew exactly when she would wake up.

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