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Wow really good writing, I loved it but I wish you would give interaction with Cassie too she is my favorite character and thank you from the bottom of my heart
The story is going well, I hope you continue writing. If you increase the update frequency, I'm sure it will rank and get more people to read it.
Please don't drop this novel. If there's going to be romance, it shouldn't be with Nephis or Cassie.
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The beginning is interesting, I hope there will be a romance(Better with Nefis). ...........................................................................
Well guys i am back but this time their are a lot of changes in the stories and i have created a lot of different character, that will appeared in the story too. So make sure to leave comment and your thought too.
Wow really good writing, I loved it but I wish you would give interaction with Cassie too she is my favorite character and thank you from the bottom of my heart
The story is going well, I hope you continue writing. If you increase the update frequency, I'm sure it will rank and get more people to read it.
Please don't drop this novel. If there's going to be romance, it shouldn't be with Nephis or Cassie.
[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
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"Great, I loved it! I hope you continue.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️❄️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The beginning is interesting, I hope there will be a romance(Better with Nefis). ...........................................................................
Well guys i am back but this time their are a lot of changes in the stories and i have created a lot of different character, that will appeared in the story too. So make sure to leave comment and your thought too.