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can you add harem please you think about it yourself and if you were put in the shoes of the protagonist would you not want a harem so please🙏
pure slop fic, plot moves way to fast little time for anything to develop, first threat immediately can counter the limitless, mc only survives from getting rct. everybody knows who he is and what he can do and all want him in thier organization, no coherence just arrogant villains getting beat and killed with no thoughts about it.
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Definiton of disapointment, the stroy could have been much more, the devlopement of the MC is one of the worst i have ever seen, just a killer then he turned into a mind controller who rapes girls ( Agent Hill) and after that he starts dreaming of controlling the universe while he first stated that he doesn’t wanna rule anything at all. Could have been a great story
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Es una historia bastante entretenida apoyado por una buena gramática y traducción fluida, el desarrollo de la fuerza del MC es sólido y escalonado y por no decirlo muy fluido, su actitud puede no ser la mejor pero es lo que hay y se pone mucho mejor cuando empieza a viajar a otros universos solo espero que introduzcan más villanos acordé a su nivel de poder si no se volvería aburrido
wouldn’t recommend spending your time on this. I’ve read through the first ten chapters, hoping it would improve, but unfortunately, it doesn’t get any better. The story remains disappointing, and continuing further feels like a waste of time.
Con el capítulo 138 acabas de cagar la historia, el protagonista en el inicio de la historia tenía un comportamiento frívolo pero carismático, ahora es un patan petulante nomas por que tiene algo de poder, el personaje acabó de perder su esencia. Así que para no decepcionarme voy a abandonar la historia ya que en un inicio estaba bien, pero acabas de cagar la historia y esta horrible el destino que le ampara a la historia, verás que al final el protagonista se comportará como un dragón celestial que tanto aborrece, así que les recomiendo que no lean la historia.
Reseña basada en 74 capítulos Calidad de escritura: No esperaba que un fanfic tuviera tanta calidad de escritura. Está a la par con autores experimentados en webnovel. Estabilidad de actualización: No puedo decir más que se actualiza regularmente. Desarrollo de la historia: Una de las desventajas de este fanfic. Es la historia de un MC que solo quiere hacerse más fuerte usando su sistema de plantillas. No es un héroe ni un antivillano. Él es 'EL VILLANO'. Su único impulso es hacerse más fuerte. Diseño de personajes: En su mayoría intenta ser similar a Gojo Satoru, pero es un villano completo. Su personalidad es retorcida. Es totalmente inestable mentalmente. Trasfondo mundial: Estos fanfics que viajan por el universo tienen un potencial inmenso, por lo que lo califico alto. De lo contrario, son alrededor de 4 estrellas.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
l am only dropping this because there are other recarnated popping up which l did not sign up for
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Tiene algunos problemas como las interacciones entre personajes pero aun así disfrute bastante de la historia espero que el autor no lo deje [img=update][img=update]
Up to DC universe it was good. But right when the mc got to DC it felt like the a completely different writer took over and the mc went full on Chinese mode, the skills that took weeks to level up after continuing practice, now it just takes an instant to level and even comes with the exact ability the mc needs.
Muy historia autor, hasta el momento me preguntó cuando veremos una pelea de Mc contra Sukuna o Saturu, bueno eso ya queda al desarrollo de la historia y de la trama
Es un excelente capitulo, por lo que veo este Alex se nos va ir bien de Parranda, a dónde ira después de ésto? O será que ira al mundo del Jujutsu no kaisen?
I hate how mc gets reborn and then they act like a robot like let’s be real yeah you can be god there but ugh
The mc is chaotic evil. He causes chaos cause he wants to and has no restrains. I like the powers. The story itself is pretty intresting overall and the interactions are quite funny at times.
I had to change my bad review man. THIS IS PEAK !!!!! ( I mean some things aren't exactly accurate ) but still , incredibly entertaining
A great work, this piece is the reason i keep openning webnovel each day is this novel. thank you for the stable updates and i hope the writer will have many more inspirations to keep writing at this quality
This f**k author makes the mc somewhat brain dead because he doesnt think logically lika a typical human and super cringe worthy dialogues 🙏
The story is incredibly well written and the way the system works is pretty logical. However, the big problem with the story is the mc is THE VILLAIN he just goes around slaughtering people and now (ch 60) he is mind controlling and r*ping people.
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The MC is a pure psychopath, he killed everyone without remorse like... what the hell!!! The story and concept is good, but the execution is poor.
i only read till chapter 42ish and it's just a cliche and boring repeat of a path through marvel cinematic movies and with a little bit of mutants touch that didn't make it any better, marvel is kinda large in world design i just had hoped it was a different vibe to it ...
the protagonist just goes on killing everyone that icks him, that is highly edgy and emo character and offers little to no character building 🥲
Sinceramente história possui boa prenuncia e começo é bem agradável mas desenvolvimento personagem é zero ele não tem vontade,sonhos, personalidade,laços ,conexões, nem parece humano,corta esse papo anti-heroi personagem não é diferente sukuna da vida so faz coisas por que sim e deu vontade fazer. Fora que história é muito rápida apenas tá rush eventos Marvel, se você realmente está querendo interessante profundo e rica você está perdendo seu tempo
the premise, narration and story development are good BUT the dialogue?? it's absolute shit! cringe and stupid. I powered through 30 chapters but I just cant continue reading this, it gets stupider and stupider the more I read .
el protagonista no tiene moral y es el peor tipo de hombre e la historia se pone aburrida desde que consigue la gema de la mente
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Great story. Although there were occasions where mc could have made better suitable decisions, overall the story is entertaining. Mc did not unlock any domain or domain related techniques. Perhaps that would come later ? Also eagerly waiting for what character template he would get next. Hopefully something that would make the mc much more powerful and dangerous
i wonder what will happened if he meets darwin and use energy abortion on him does darwin adapter ability just make him have more energy if yes don't that mean that with enough time and level of the ability to absorb he can make darwin a energy source powerful enough to rival or even more energy than infinite stone of power?
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Review based on 74 chapters Writing Quality: I didn't expect a fanfic to have such writing quality. It's on par with experienced authors on webnovel. Updating Stability: Can't say more than it's updated regularly. Story Development: One of the downsides of this fanfic. It's story about a MC who just wants to grow stronger using his Template System. He is no hero or anti villain. He is 'THE VILLAIN'. His only drive is getting stronger. Character Design: Mostly tries to be similar to Gojo Satoru, but is a complete villain. His personality is twisted. He is totally mentally unstable. World Background: These universe traveling fanfics have immense potential, so I rated it high. Otherwise it's about 4 Stars.
can you add harem please you think about it yourself and if you were put in the shoes of the protagonist would you not want a harem so please🙏
pure slop fic, plot moves way to fast little time for anything to develop, first threat immediately can counter the limitless, mc only survives from getting rct. everybody knows who he is and what he can do and all want him in thier organization, no coherence just arrogant villains getting beat and killed with no thoughts about it.
Spoiler de révélation Definiton of disapointment, the stroy could have been much more, the devlopement of the MC is one of the worst i have ever seen, just a killer then he turned into a mind controller who rapes girls ( Agent Hill) and after that he starts dreaming of controlling the universe while he first stated that he doesn’t wanna rule anything at all. Could have been a great story
Spoiler de révélation Es una historia bastante entretenida apoyado por una buena gramática y traducción fluida, el desarrollo de la fuerza del MC es sólido y escalonado y por no decirlo muy fluido, su actitud puede no ser la mejor pero es lo que hay y se pone mucho mejor cuando empieza a viajar a otros universos solo espero que introduzcan más villanos acordé a su nivel de poder si no se volvería aburrido
wouldn’t recommend spending your time on this. I’ve read through the first ten chapters, hoping it would improve, but unfortunately, it doesn’t get any better. The story remains disappointing, and continuing further feels like a waste of time.
Con el capítulo 138 acabas de cagar la historia, el protagonista en el inicio de la historia tenía un comportamiento frívolo pero carismático, ahora es un patan petulante nomas por que tiene algo de poder, el personaje acabó de perder su esencia. Así que para no decepcionarme voy a abandonar la historia ya que en un inicio estaba bien, pero acabas de cagar la historia y esta horrible el destino que le ampara a la historia, verás que al final el protagonista se comportará como un dragón celestial que tanto aborrece, así que les recomiendo que no lean la historia.
Reseña basada en 74 capítulos Calidad de escritura: No esperaba que un fanfic tuviera tanta calidad de escritura. Está a la par con autores experimentados en webnovel. Estabilidad de actualización: No puedo decir más que se actualiza regularmente. Desarrollo de la historia: Una de las desventajas de este fanfic. Es la historia de un MC que solo quiere hacerse más fuerte usando su sistema de plantillas. No es un héroe ni un antivillano. Él es 'EL VILLANO'. Su único impulso es hacerse más fuerte. Diseño de personajes: En su mayoría intenta ser similar a Gojo Satoru, pero es un villano completo. Su personalidad es retorcida. Es totalmente inestable mentalmente. Trasfondo mundial: Estos fanfics que viajan por el universo tienen un potencial inmenso, por lo que lo califico alto. De lo contrario, son alrededor de 4 estrellas.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
l am only dropping this because there are other recarnated popping up which l did not sign up for
Spoiler de révélation Tiene algunos problemas como las interacciones entre personajes pero aun así disfrute bastante de la historia espero que el autor no lo deje [img=update][img=update]
Up to DC universe it was good. But right when the mc got to DC it felt like the a completely different writer took over and the mc went full on Chinese mode, the skills that took weeks to level up after continuing practice, now it just takes an instant to level and even comes with the exact ability the mc needs.
Muy historia autor, hasta el momento me preguntó cuando veremos una pelea de Mc contra Sukuna o Saturu, bueno eso ya queda al desarrollo de la historia y de la trama
Es un excelente capitulo, por lo que veo este Alex se nos va ir bien de Parranda, a dónde ira después de ésto? O será que ira al mundo del Jujutsu no kaisen?
I hate how mc gets reborn and then they act like a robot like let’s be real yeah you can be god there but ugh
The mc is chaotic evil. He causes chaos cause he wants to and has no restrains. I like the powers. The story itself is pretty intresting overall and the interactions are quite funny at times.
I had to change my bad review man. THIS IS PEAK !!!!! ( I mean some things aren't exactly accurate ) but still , incredibly entertaining
A great work, this piece is the reason i keep openning webnovel each day is this novel. thank you for the stable updates and i hope the writer will have many more inspirations to keep writing at this quality
This f**k author makes the mc somewhat brain dead because he doesnt think logically lika a typical human and super cringe worthy dialogues 🙏
The story is incredibly well written and the way the system works is pretty logical. However, the big problem with the story is the mc is THE VILLAIN he just goes around slaughtering people and now (ch 60) he is mind controlling and r*ping people.
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The MC is a pure psychopath, he killed everyone without remorse like... what the hell!!! The story and concept is good, but the execution is poor.
i only read till chapter 42ish and it's just a cliche and boring repeat of a path through marvel cinematic movies and with a little bit of mutants touch that didn't make it any better, marvel is kinda large in world design i just had hoped it was a different vibe to it ...
the protagonist just goes on killing everyone that icks him, that is highly edgy and emo character and offers little to no character building 🥲
Sinceramente história possui boa prenuncia e começo é bem agradável mas desenvolvimento personagem é zero ele não tem vontade,sonhos, personalidade,laços ,conexões, nem parece humano,corta esse papo anti-heroi personagem não é diferente sukuna da vida so faz coisas por que sim e deu vontade fazer. Fora que história é muito rápida apenas tá rush eventos Marvel, se você realmente está querendo interessante profundo e rica você está perdendo seu tempo
the premise, narration and story development are good BUT the dialogue?? it's absolute shit! cringe and stupid. I powered through 30 chapters but I just cant continue reading this, it gets stupider and stupider the more I read .
el protagonista no tiene moral y es el peor tipo de hombre e la historia se pone aburrida desde que consigue la gema de la mente
Spoiler de révélation Great story. Although there were occasions where mc could have made better suitable decisions, overall the story is entertaining. Mc did not unlock any domain or domain related techniques. Perhaps that would come later ? Also eagerly waiting for what character template he would get next. Hopefully something that would make the mc much more powerful and dangerous
i wonder what will happened if he meets darwin and use energy abortion on him does darwin adapter ability just make him have more energy if yes don't that mean that with enough time and level of the ability to absorb he can make darwin a energy source powerful enough to rival or even more energy than infinite stone of power?
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Review based on 74 chapters Writing Quality: I didn't expect a fanfic to have such writing quality. It's on par with experienced authors on webnovel. Updating Stability: Can't say more than it's updated regularly. Story Development: One of the downsides of this fanfic. It's story about a MC who just wants to grow stronger using his Template System. He is no hero or anti villain. He is 'THE VILLAIN'. His only drive is getting stronger. Character Design: Mostly tries to be similar to Gojo Satoru, but is a complete villain. His personality is twisted. He is totally mentally unstable. World Background: These universe traveling fanfics have immense potential, so I rated it high. Otherwise it's about 4 Stars.