4Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Muito bom... Enredo ótimo, creio de conteúdo e com suspense. Meio tóxico, mas dá pra ler e entender a trama. As personagens principais são muito envolventes e te prende. Gosto do relacionamento que tá se desenvolvendo.
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Good story I like how the transition of the story flows. Can't wait to read more chapters and see how it unfolds 👌.
You have a good story going here. I've only read the first nineteen chapters and I'm digging the world building. Sera is a character with high anxiety in the worst situation possible. I can tell this is going to be one hell of a ride. This is good so far and can't wait to read more when I get a chance.
Muito bom... Enredo ótimo, creio de conteúdo e com suspense. Meio tóxico, mas dá pra ler e entender a trama. As personagens principais são muito envolventes e te prende. Gosto do relacionamento que tá se desenvolvendo.
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Good story I like how the transition of the story flows. Can't wait to read more chapters and see how it unfolds 👌.
You have a good story going here. I've only read the first nineteen chapters and I'm digging the world building. Sera is a character with high anxiety in the worst situation possible. I can tell this is going to be one hell of a ride. This is good so far and can't wait to read more when I get a chance.