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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I like the character he is smart and strong and handsome story is good and I like the pure love between mc is greater than obito 😭❤️ [img=coins][img=faceslap]
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translator couldn't you elaborate more of the erotic situations ? it was somewhat turn off . pla in your other works explain more , its's not like you can't add few more words as you have some experience while translating
update more add so erotic taming of the fm and . maintain the MC character development
The plot is well-developed; however, further elaboration on the concluding chapter and subsequent events is desired, as the current ending feels abrupt.
I like the character he is smart and strong and handsome story is good and I like the pure love between mc is greater than obito 😭❤️ [img=coins][img=faceslap]
Spoiler de révélation translator couldn't you elaborate more of the erotic situations ? it was somewhat turn off . pla in your other works explain more , its's not like you can't add few more words as you have some experience while translating
update more add so erotic taming of the fm and . maintain the MC character development
The plot is well-developed; however, further elaboration on the concluding chapter and subsequent events is desired, as the current ending feels abrupt.