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It's generally a pretty interesting fan fic but I find going too ambitious in story ideas a little too quick, I mean the pacing is pretty good but it's getting too ambitious too quickly and BC of that you get some powers having to appear out of seemingly nowhere in order to keep up with the ambition. That said it's still an interesting and good read.
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Good work so far, though I didn't read all the chapters right now, but I will complete it soon. I hope the author didn't drop this fanfiction.
Let me just say the author might be a Gojo d rider by how fast he seems to make gojo so overpowered in the span of the first few chapters look I like gojo as much as the next normal jjk reader, but the amount of power he gets by just landing on a planet where he then ends up summoning World of U which surprised me since I thought this was going to be a Gojo x Starwars universe crossover thing also another thing do actual research on jjk and starwars so it’s accurate. Anyway if you like overpowered characters with no real development and just get it by doing nothing this is the story for you I mean canon gojo almost died before he was able to truly become a unit.
I haven’t even read all the chapters but you deserve a review just for effort👍 well done.
ahh yes my anti drug technique have used them since manual writting era xd ( well the lobotomy kaisen is about to end in 4 weeks or 5 weeks i forgot shame it has to end )
Gotta review again to help the story have good review since someone reviewer is on drugs xd .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Another review just to make sure I made my point clear, I don’t know how to write, but I could do better using ChatGPT as he is. If you want to waste your time on that go ahead
I add another review agaiiiiiiiiiiiin xd also make gojo have sukuna shrine ........................................ ...................................
Can't wait for the next update. Love the multiple Jojo references that Gojo does in these latest chapter. Especially the part of the deal game with the female Hutt in the casino.
It's a funny story that's good for a laugh, especially with how Gojo is portrayed. 😂
so question are we taking inspiration from the books from Star Wars are inspiration from the movies because I heard Yoda in the books is able to destroy mountains and lift them up with his mind and I heard Darth Vader is able to stop a tsunami that can destroy a whole city.
I usually read in fanfic.net and wattpad they lack of jujutsu crossover with movies for example gojo bizzare adventure at galaxy far far away i love this fanfic also andika ask me to help you consider this my ongoing investment
.................................... Add second rating because i really like making 2 reviews also second rating and second ratingggh and second rating rating rating
This was quite the interesting fan fic to read. The writing quality was bad at first, but the author was quick to change it, so he deserves an extra star for his effort. ⭐️⭐️⭐️+⭐️ Update stability is just right, but I hope he slows down a bit and improve the writing quality. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story development is where some things goes wrong, people are too shocked to Gojo’s abilities that it feels unnatural. Like for example, he doesn’t need air to breath in space. The phrase “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space”. If you’re a Star Wars fan, you would definitely know that isn’t the case. ⭐️⭐️⭐️ It’s Gojo…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ World background is the same with the story development, lack of information. ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Let me say as reader you writing is improving just one thing I want to I want you want to improve is world building , character development and one more thing is giving gojo more than just an edgy vibe you know what I say I right but anyway you writing definitely improving so don't give up.
.............................................................................................................................................................................................for the wonder of u fans and seeker fanfic
WHAT THE HELLLLL MAN DID YOU JUST MAKE A COURTING DEATH ON STAR WARS THATS INSANEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE , i like that keep up the good work also gojo satoru in star wars is actually my dreams in 2023
I never thought gojo would be in star wars and have a stand LOL but still being gojo himself with overpowered mentality amazing story keep it up 🔥🔥🔥
I'll make my point clear right here on this review, this writer is goddamn care about the reader, he is improving every single day in all aspects so if you can't appreciate writer's masterpiece.. GET LOST
It's generally a pretty interesting fan fic but I find going too ambitious in story ideas a little too quick, I mean the pacing is pretty good but it's getting too ambitious too quickly and BC of that you get some powers having to appear out of seemingly nowhere in order to keep up with the ambition. That said it's still an interesting and good read.
Spoiler de révélation Good work so far, though I didn't read all the chapters right now, but I will complete it soon. I hope the author didn't drop this fanfiction.
Let me just say the author might be a Gojo d rider by how fast he seems to make gojo so overpowered in the span of the first few chapters look I like gojo as much as the next normal jjk reader, but the amount of power he gets by just landing on a planet where he then ends up summoning World of U which surprised me since I thought this was going to be a Gojo x Starwars universe crossover thing also another thing do actual research on jjk and starwars so it’s accurate. Anyway if you like overpowered characters with no real development and just get it by doing nothing this is the story for you I mean canon gojo almost died before he was able to truly become a unit.
I haven’t even read all the chapters but you deserve a review just for effort👍 well done.
ahh yes my anti drug technique have used them since manual writting era xd ( well the lobotomy kaisen is about to end in 4 weeks or 5 weeks i forgot shame it has to end )
Gotta review again to help the story have good review since someone reviewer is on drugs xd .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Another review just to make sure I made my point clear, I don’t know how to write, but I could do better using ChatGPT as he is. If you want to waste your time on that go ahead
I add another review agaiiiiiiiiiiiin xd also make gojo have sukuna shrine ........................................ ...................................
Can't wait for the next update. Love the multiple Jojo references that Gojo does in these latest chapter. Especially the part of the deal game with the female Hutt in the casino.
It's a funny story that's good for a laugh, especially with how Gojo is portrayed. 😂
so question are we taking inspiration from the books from Star Wars are inspiration from the movies because I heard Yoda in the books is able to destroy mountains and lift them up with his mind and I heard Darth Vader is able to stop a tsunami that can destroy a whole city.
I usually read in fanfic.net and wattpad they lack of jujutsu crossover with movies for example gojo bizzare adventure at galaxy far far away i love this fanfic also andika ask me to help you consider this my ongoing investment
.................................... Add second rating because i really like making 2 reviews also second rating and second ratingggh and second rating rating rating
This was quite the interesting fan fic to read. The writing quality was bad at first, but the author was quick to change it, so he deserves an extra star for his effort. ⭐️⭐️⭐️+⭐️ Update stability is just right, but I hope he slows down a bit and improve the writing quality. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story development is where some things goes wrong, people are too shocked to Gojo’s abilities that it feels unnatural. Like for example, he doesn’t need air to breath in space. The phrase “no one in this galaxy can breath in vacuum space”. If you’re a Star Wars fan, you would definitely know that isn’t the case. ⭐️⭐️⭐️ It’s Gojo…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ World background is the same with the story development, lack of information. ⭐️⭐️⭐️
Let me say as reader you writing is improving just one thing I want to I want you want to improve is world building , character development and one more thing is giving gojo more than just an edgy vibe you know what I say I right but anyway you writing definitely improving so don't give up.
.............................................................................................................................................................................................for the wonder of u fans and seeker fanfic
WHAT THE HELLLLL MAN DID YOU JUST MAKE A COURTING DEATH ON STAR WARS THATS INSANEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE , i like that keep up the good work also gojo satoru in star wars is actually my dreams in 2023
I never thought gojo would be in star wars and have a stand LOL but still being gojo himself with overpowered mentality amazing story keep it up 🔥🔥🔥
I'll make my point clear right here on this review, this writer is goddamn care about the reader, he is improving every single day in all aspects so if you can't appreciate writer's masterpiece.. GET LOST