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Hey man I loved Rogue Villain but I don't know what you did to this story l. The characters feel emotionless, interaction feels awry and there is no background to any character till 20 chapters man you should give a bit of info about power system about people their family their sob story or whatever that makes the story interesting but there was nothing such in starting 25 chapters there may be later but no one wants to give time to such a dry and stale story. For example the MC's speech felt completely off character as he is shown as a sweet and caring kid in starting but he suddenly flips the switch and Nora's interaction felt completely weird and many more things. It might be good to others it was bad compared to his other works.
i read a few chapters and it is going well till now.. hope it continues in future... author can u make a comment or comment here for simple world background and the mc status in the empire or some basic details
Honestly this is a pretty decent novel overall. (Read up to about 300) Currently confused for several reason World Building and Background info are non-existent, like we know nothing about anything for the most part. I suppose it could be like more focused on a buildup of knowledge but it's like nobody knows anything or doesn't share anything. Second problem is Romance/R-18 I understand that it might be occurring much farther in the novel, but I feel like even the fact we get such minor hints is even odder. Like it doesn't feel like we have either of these tags yet it says that its in this novel? Doesn't that feel somewhat false advertising? Maybe give a heads up to us readers that it would take time to achieve anything? Again this isn't bad, however it has some issues that I wonder if they will get resolved or fixed at all.
Hey man I loved Rogue Villain but I don't know what you did to this story l. The characters feel emotionless, interaction feels awry and there is no background to any character till 20 chapters man you should give a bit of info about power system about people their family their sob story or whatever that makes the story interesting but there was nothing such in starting 25 chapters there may be later but no one wants to give time to such a dry and stale story. For example the MC's speech felt completely off character as he is shown as a sweet and caring kid in starting but he suddenly flips the switch and Nora's interaction felt completely weird and many more things. It might be good to others it was bad compared to his other works.
i read a few chapters and it is going well till now.. hope it continues in future... author can u make a comment or comment here for simple world background and the mc status in the empire or some basic details
Honestly this is a pretty decent novel overall. (Read up to about 300) Currently confused for several reason World Building and Background info are non-existent, like we know nothing about anything for the most part. I suppose it could be like more focused on a buildup of knowledge but it's like nobody knows anything or doesn't share anything. Second problem is Romance/R-18 I understand that it might be occurring much farther in the novel, but I feel like even the fact we get such minor hints is even odder. Like it doesn't feel like we have either of these tags yet it says that its in this novel? Doesn't that feel somewhat false advertising? Maybe give a heads up to us readers that it would take time to achieve anything? Again this isn't bad, however it has some issues that I wonder if they will get resolved or fixed at all.