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una historia de calidad, entretenida y muy bien escrita, facil de leer y una historia perfecta para pasar el tiempo, del tipo que siempre busco pero casi nunca encuentro
This is the BEST pokemon fanfic I've read. The storyline and the characters are all so cute and lovely. This story is so healing and the main character is actually smart amd wholesome. There's not a lot of action but that is exactly why I like it.
I was a bit skeptical to read this as this was a translation as my experience with them is not good, but this not like avg translation you can't even tell it's Chinese without the dialogues overall it's good read.
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Well nice pokemon fan-fic amongst all the existing ones but beware MC is a retard who basically transmigrated into a 20s boy ; was an adult in earth but now has a 12 year brain n thinks alike. As for eg, he went to a farming animal and pokemon shop but was surprised when being told that he was there to buy farm animals for his ranch by shopkeeper without any giveaway clue by mc. When he was searching ways for irrigating his field at large area and was sad not having to effort the machinery despite using the water pokemon. But when he was told abt that he considered that as a great idea. Although it a nice slice of life thingy , farming story upto where i had read but mc being retard and not thinking any straight solutions annoys me a lot . Unfortunately, not my cup of tea. But I would recommend it to read at once, might u bypass his ignorance n really enjoy the farming n slice of life aspects .
I have a complaint about the translator can you please change Dragonite voice sounds?. It's damn frustrating to read 'Ouch' when everytime Naoki ask his Dragonite.
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This is the best pokemon story I've ever read. Most I've seen are those annoying 18+ and harem stories so thank you for making something sweet and heart warming.
So far, seems pretty cozy. Pokemon + Farming, it's hard to find these kinds of stories, even more so the good ones.
One of the best Pokemon fanfics to ever exist and my current favourite i just love it's slow and peaceful vibe 10/10 recc
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the story speak to me, and Im wondering what will happen in the future to this kind of story I also see that many possibilities are possible to know is to see and to see is to go. Ps.. what will the future bring us.
Love it!! Love it!! Love it!!! It's one of the best Pokemon fanfiction I ever read!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is very good too 👍 Slice of life is one of my favourite theme.. It's refreshing, interesting, and unique to see MC/Naoki take care of Pokemon in ranch (usually MC in Pokemon world become a trainer, Gym Leader, etc.. Doing adventure in many regions, become so strong and capture many strong pokemon).. I love his skill to make a awesome and great food with special effect (with a great cooking skill he can make fresh grass into food which give special effect for Grass Pokemon, and rich mineral soil become food with special effect for Rock or Ground Pokemon?)) I like his interaction with his Pokemon (which help in the farm or wild pokemon) and others people (his neighbor, another rancer near his ranch, city mayor, character from scarlet/violet pokemon game, etc).. Maybe someday another character from other regions Pokemon game will come to his farm too.. Can't wait to see your story next author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
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nabibitin ako haha. this pokemon fanfic is good, i feel relax when I'm reading this book. keep it up author, please update more 👍👍
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(@Chapter 6) I like this pokemon fanfic, it's relaxing, wholesome, nice and not idiotic MC. The progress of MC is decent and are taking a turn for the better. Hope to this stays the way it is. No complain so far, keep up the good work author if you are. Thank you for uploading and making this fanfic.
Review: This light-hearted Pokémon farming story is an absolute delight! Set in a serene, countryside environment, it perfectly blends the joy of farming with the excitement of Pokémon. The laid-back narrative allows you to unwind as you follow the protagonist through daily tasks like tending crops, raising Pokémon, and enjoying the small but meaningful moments of life. It's filled with charming interactions, cozy vibes, and a sense of peaceful adventure. Whether you're a Pokémon fan or just looking for a relaxing read, this story will leave you smiling. I can't wait to read more.
a very good fanfic even though it's a translation.......................................... keep up the good work .......................... i hope to read more of it.................
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Attention, potential readers! If you're looking for a fun and unique take on the Pokémon world, check out this fan fiction. It's a translation of a Chinese story that features a culinary twist on Pokémon training. I've personally edited the translation to ensure a smooth and enjoyable reading experience. While the original story may have had some inconsistencies, this version is clean and suitable for all audiences.
una historia de calidad, entretenida y muy bien escrita, facil de leer y una historia perfecta para pasar el tiempo, del tipo que siempre busco pero casi nunca encuentro
This is the BEST pokemon fanfic I've read. The storyline and the characters are all so cute and lovely. This story is so healing and the main character is actually smart amd wholesome. There's not a lot of action but that is exactly why I like it.
I was a bit skeptical to read this as this was a translation as my experience with them is not good, but this not like avg translation you can't even tell it's Chinese without the dialogues overall it's good read.
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Well nice pokemon fan-fic amongst all the existing ones but beware MC is a retard who basically transmigrated into a 20s boy ; was an adult in earth but now has a 12 year brain n thinks alike. As for eg, he went to a farming animal and pokemon shop but was surprised when being told that he was there to buy farm animals for his ranch by shopkeeper without any giveaway clue by mc. When he was searching ways for irrigating his field at large area and was sad not having to effort the machinery despite using the water pokemon. But when he was told abt that he considered that as a great idea. Although it a nice slice of life thingy , farming story upto where i had read but mc being retard and not thinking any straight solutions annoys me a lot . Unfortunately, not my cup of tea. But I would recommend it to read at once, might u bypass his ignorance n really enjoy the farming n slice of life aspects .
I have a complaint about the translator can you please change Dragonite voice sounds?. It's damn frustrating to read 'Ouch' when everytime Naoki ask his Dragonite.
[img=Why][img=Smug][img=In your face][img=Mad][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
This is the best pokemon story I've ever read. Most I've seen are those annoying 18+ and harem stories so thank you for making something sweet and heart warming.
So far, seems pretty cozy. Pokemon + Farming, it's hard to find these kinds of stories, even more so the good ones.
One of the best Pokemon fanfics to ever exist and my current favourite i just love it's slow and peaceful vibe 10/10 recc
Incredible fic of pokemon [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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the story speak to me, and Im wondering what will happen in the future to this kind of story I also see that many possibilities are possible to know is to see and to see is to go. Ps.. what will the future bring us.
Love it!! Love it!! Love it!!! It's one of the best Pokemon fanfiction I ever read!!! 😍😍 It have a great storyline/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is very good too 👍 Slice of life is one of my favourite theme.. It's refreshing, interesting, and unique to see MC/Naoki take care of Pokemon in ranch (usually MC in Pokemon world become a trainer, Gym Leader, etc.. Doing adventure in many regions, become so strong and capture many strong pokemon).. I love his skill to make a awesome and great food with special effect (with a great cooking skill he can make fresh grass into food which give special effect for Grass Pokemon, and rich mineral soil become food with special effect for Rock or Ground Pokemon?)) I like his interaction with his Pokemon (which help in the farm or wild pokemon) and others people (his neighbor, another rancer near his ranch, city mayor, character from scarlet/violet pokemon game, etc).. Maybe someday another character from other regions Pokemon game will come to his farm too.. Can't wait to see your story next author sama.. Keep up the great work 😁👍😍😍😍
Spoiler de révélation [img=nervous][img=golden ticket][img=Sigh][img=Feeling it][img=Good night][img=Unalived][img=nervous][img=Smitten][img=Sigh][img=Feeling it][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=In a daze][img=In your face][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Out of it][img=In your face][img=In a daze]
[img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Sigh][img=Mad][img=Moneybags][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Out of it][img=Relaxed][img=In your face][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Loving it]
nabibitin ako haha. this pokemon fanfic is good, i feel relax when I'm reading this book. keep it up author, please update more 👍👍
Spoiler de révélation (@Chapter 6) I like this pokemon fanfic, it's relaxing, wholesome, nice and not idiotic MC. The progress of MC is decent and are taking a turn for the better. Hope to this stays the way it is. No complain so far, keep up the good work author if you are. Thank you for uploading and making this fanfic.
Review: This light-hearted Pokémon farming story is an absolute delight! Set in a serene, countryside environment, it perfectly blends the joy of farming with the excitement of Pokémon. The laid-back narrative allows you to unwind as you follow the protagonist through daily tasks like tending crops, raising Pokémon, and enjoying the small but meaningful moments of life. It's filled with charming interactions, cozy vibes, and a sense of peaceful adventure. Whether you're a Pokémon fan or just looking for a relaxing read, this story will leave you smiling. I can't wait to read more.
a very good fanfic even though it's a translation.......................................... keep up the good work .......................... i hope to read more of it.................
[img=Out of it][img=More pls][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Mad][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Shocked][img=Loving it]
Attention, potential readers! If you're looking for a fun and unique take on the Pokémon world, check out this fan fiction. It's a translation of a Chinese story that features a culinary twist on Pokémon training. I've personally edited the translation to ensure a smooth and enjoyable reading experience. While the original story may have had some inconsistencies, this version is clean and suitable for all audiences.