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This is one of the best fanfics I’ve read about the Naruto world. Mainly because it's a story that avoids the overused cliché of a OP Uchiha clan protagonist and, instead, gives us a main character who doesn’t even belong to the Naruto world, aside from the videos he makes. The people reacting to the Naruto world stay true to their essence, and although sometimes I feel like their reactions might not be entirely accurate for the characters, I believe it’s ultimately the interpretation of the original Chinese author. There are also things I find a bit illogical, like Tobirama showing the videos to his students after seeing the first review, but in the end, the story wouldn’t be as entertaining if those kinds of things didn’t happen. The only thing I could complain about is that the translator doesn’t seem to have much regard for others’ reading comprehension, but other than that, it’s very entertaining to read. By the way, I’ll add that I don’t usually leave reviews for stories, but it really bothered me to see that this fanfic only has a 4.4 rating when there’s plenty of garbage out there that could easily be categorized as sleep aids, with ratings they don’t deserve. Anyway, I’d like to emphasize that if anyone in the reviews section complains about the grammar or finds it a bit confusing due to the format used by Chinese authors, they have every right to complain. I think the author could have done a better job of adapting it to the language rather than just translating it. In any case, keep going with this translation, translator! I can’t stand the existence of more ninja world stories without an interesting plot twist!
It is a decent idea of a story but to read it you need to just turn your brain off, and if names being correct is really important to you just don’t start reading.
5 out of 5 stars. This has been an enjoyable read so far, and I am very excited for more of this!!! 🎉🎉🎉
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this idea about review video/lightscreen in Konoha for each Hokage.. It can or will change their fate/destiny.. I hope with the 4 video, Danzo in the 61 years Konoha will die quickly.. And will their be video of 4th Hokage a.k.a Minato Namikaze, 5th Hokage a.k.a Tsunade, etc?? Why in the 3rd video there's no talk about destruction in Uzushio and Hiruzen don't do anything?? Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍😍
okay I have to ask is this a translation? if it is not can you please fix the ground because my God I like this thick but it is killing me with how confusing it can be.
long story short it's absolute trash the only reason it's not a 1star review it's coz u ùsed narutos world n u update schedule is stable apart from that TRASH
author San please tell us the raw and this story is absolutely brilliant.
Give us the raw name, please... Or is this your fic ? I want to read more and more. I would be thankful that you gave us the raw name. Nnndndn
raw please, and will the story have chapters about mc doing things other than posting review videos?
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Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
Really! This is a very interesting book, even after I read the synopsis!Please keep updating and keep up the enthusiasm! We readers are waiting for you.💪💪💪😊
this is really great story...! everything is good👍 when reading the 1st 2 chapter i thought this gonna be another boring journal, but with a little bit comedy everything became perfect
Trash novel the plots just don’t make sense as you read more chapters it’s like they keep on changing alternate realities and have no consequences
Hello, guys. please, if it's not difficult for you, tell me similar fanfiction.[img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug][img=Smug]
This is one of the best fanfics I’ve read about the Naruto world. Mainly because it's a story that avoids the overused cliché of a OP Uchiha clan protagonist and, instead, gives us a main character who doesn’t even belong to the Naruto world, aside from the videos he makes. The people reacting to the Naruto world stay true to their essence, and although sometimes I feel like their reactions might not be entirely accurate for the characters, I believe it’s ultimately the interpretation of the original Chinese author. There are also things I find a bit illogical, like Tobirama showing the videos to his students after seeing the first review, but in the end, the story wouldn’t be as entertaining if those kinds of things didn’t happen. The only thing I could complain about is that the translator doesn’t seem to have much regard for others’ reading comprehension, but other than that, it’s very entertaining to read. By the way, I’ll add that I don’t usually leave reviews for stories, but it really bothered me to see that this fanfic only has a 4.4 rating when there’s plenty of garbage out there that could easily be categorized as sleep aids, with ratings they don’t deserve. Anyway, I’d like to emphasize that if anyone in the reviews section complains about the grammar or finds it a bit confusing due to the format used by Chinese authors, they have every right to complain. I think the author could have done a better job of adapting it to the language rather than just translating it. In any case, keep going with this translation, translator! I can’t stand the existence of more ninja world stories without an interesting plot twist!
It is a decent idea of a story but to read it you need to just turn your brain off, and if names being correct is really important to you just don’t start reading.
5 out of 5 stars. This has been an enjoyable read so far, and I am very excited for more of this!!! 🎉🎉🎉
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a great plot/storyline and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too... I like this idea about review video/lightscreen in Konoha for each Hokage.. It can or will change their fate/destiny.. I hope with the 4 video, Danzo in the 61 years Konoha will die quickly.. And will their be video of 4th Hokage a.k.a Minato Namikaze, 5th Hokage a.k.a Tsunade, etc?? Why in the 3rd video there's no talk about destruction in Uzushio and Hiruzen don't do anything?? Love your story author san.. Keep up the good work 😁👍😍😍😍
okay I have to ask is this a translation? if it is not can you please fix the ground because my God I like this thick but it is killing me with how confusing it can be.
long story short it's absolute trash the only reason it's not a 1star review it's coz u ùsed narutos world n u update schedule is stable apart from that TRASH
author San please tell us the raw and this story is absolutely brilliant.
Give us the raw name, please... Or is this your fic ? I want to read more and more. I would be thankful that you gave us the raw name. Nnndndn
raw please, and will the story have chapters about mc doing things other than posting review videos?
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Hello i love your book but it lack followers readers, and rating, am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
Really! This is a very interesting book, even after I read the synopsis!Please keep updating and keep up the enthusiasm! We readers are waiting for you.💪💪💪😊
this is really great story...! everything is good👍 when reading the 1st 2 chapter i thought this gonna be another boring journal, but with a little bit comedy everything became perfect
Trash novel the plots just don’t make sense as you read more chapters it’s like they keep on changing alternate realities and have no consequences