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I started reading this with a smile, as the story was fun, the character not too OP and the world setting was fine. However, after 30 chapters, the writing quality has suffered quite a bit. Apart from the typical wrong treatment of strong verbs, usage of single/plural and current/past tense, the author uses the wrong name for the MC! Several times! That's sacrilegious! That's also when I got more and more cringed by the repeated usage of "but", "once again", "on the other hand" and the over usage of "some time later" for each time lap! My suggestion for author: get somebody to proofread your content, and learn from their feedback. If you already have a proofreader, smack them and then fire them. It's better for the both of you. Let me know if things get better after ch30...
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Enjoying the book so far. Just read all that was available. I like the world building, and the mc's golden finger is different. Not too op so far, but is extremely helpful. The only problem so far is just the quality of the writing. But as the author says English isn't their first Language, it will improve with time. Looking forward to more chapters!
So far the plot is interesting. MC goldenfinger is not so OP and super usefull. Can make money and grow stronger. Power system is a bit vague, warriors can use magic. World Background is good, it felt it go to world building. Named characters are relatable. non name are lol, brushed off. Like it, hope for more chapters to come. 😆😆😆
Hey everyone, I hope you enjoy this novel. English is not my first language, but I am working on improving my english. Feel free to share any suggestions with me.
I started reading this with a smile, as the story was fun, the character not too OP and the world setting was fine. However, after 30 chapters, the writing quality has suffered quite a bit. Apart from the typical wrong treatment of strong verbs, usage of single/plural and current/past tense, the author uses the wrong name for the MC! Several times! That's sacrilegious! That's also when I got more and more cringed by the repeated usage of "but", "once again", "on the other hand" and the over usage of "some time later" for each time lap! My suggestion for author: get somebody to proofread your content, and learn from their feedback. If you already have a proofreader, smack them and then fire them. It's better for the both of you. Let me know if things get better after ch30...
Spoiler de révélation Enjoying the book so far. Just read all that was available. I like the world building, and the mc's golden finger is different. Not too op so far, but is extremely helpful. The only problem so far is just the quality of the writing. But as the author says English isn't their first Language, it will improve with time. Looking forward to more chapters!
So far the plot is interesting. MC goldenfinger is not so OP and super usefull. Can make money and grow stronger. Power system is a bit vague, warriors can use magic. World Background is good, it felt it go to world building. Named characters are relatable. non name are lol, brushed off. Like it, hope for more chapters to come. 😆😆😆
Hey everyone, I hope you enjoy this novel. English is not my first language, but I am working on improving my english. Feel free to share any suggestions with me.