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NecroBin

Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.

5mth
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Hijak
LV 15 Badge

What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.

2mth
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TsukasaSirius

I found this novel by chance, and I was surprised by how good it is! From the very first chapter, it pulled me in with its unique premise and exciting storyline. The story is full of interesting twists and keeps you wanting more. There’s never a dull moment, and every chapter leaves you eager to see what happens next. The characters are very well-written and their relationships as well. The way they interact makes the story even more engaging, and you can really feel their connections grow over time. The pacing is perfect—not too fast, not too slow—keeping the balance between action, character development, and world-building. The writing itself is excellent, with smooth and well-structured sentences that make it easy and enjoyable to read. The grammar is great, which really helps the flow of the story. Overall this Novel is one of my personal favourites and i would re-read it again. I wasn’t expecting much when I started, but it turned out to be an incredible read. If you’re looking for a well-written, exciting, and engaging novel, I highly recommend this one!

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david_trauger

I was told by a friend to give this novel a try and I’m super glad I did. I have honestly not been able to put to it down. The evolution of the main characters thought process and behavior has been spot on and the women are a continuing part of the story, and not just used once and thrown away. Each of these characters has a backstory and a history that is used to flesh out their behavior and why they are who they are now. Great job to the author and keep up the awesome work.

1d
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Black_Reaper160

this is one of the rare few good webnovels on here, everything is great about it. author replies to readers and posts daily consistently. the mc can be a bit annoying at times but thats rare and hes a great mc for the most part.

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GreenHydra

Great stuff, keep up the amazing job. Also a question, how many girls will you have in the harem? like do you intend to take blackfang and all three disciples? what about the scarlet lillies and the princess? thank god that this time the fool recomended a good wn unlike last time LMAO. OneEyedKing you retarded idiot 😭

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Lhyrax
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An incredible novel, great story, amazing characters, great world building and most importantly I really like the protagonist.

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Buff_n_stuff

Overall great novel. I’m about 150 chapters in and nothing really to complain about. Decent somewhat cringey MC. The girls are good, and the developement of relationships is pure and wholesome. I would say the only drawback is the smut can be incredibly cringey at times. MC seems like a virgin version of Christian grey. As such I do skip through some of his dialog/ antics. But if you can overlook the cringe it’s hella good.

8d
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yoven
LV 12 Badge

I have just started reading the book. I like the very idea it’s based on. But the MC is behaving a bit stupidly in the start. He says he wants to be at the top of the world but has thought little about how to go about it. I can let it slide since he’s new to the world. Also I get concept of having slave harem. But what I really don’t understand is why don’t authors in novels like these forget that there are also male slaves available. A good villain or a hero would need subordinates, certain roles are suitable for males and certain are suitable for females. They completely ignore the males in the world. They should be talented too. They could be used as spies or just a front for MC to deal with random shit. Like a carriage driver. But no the MC needs to have a driver or other chores done by someone that’s too beautiful and will definitely be targeted by people. I don’t know how the story will progress, I’ve already read 83 chapters and it’s just day five. I know it’s your first time writing or maybe I’m wrong on this but this is a very slow pace. By the time it’ll be chapter 500 I think it would only be a month that’s passed. Also Ayame is fighting a level 3 boss and doing fancy moves and being on death’s edge but she is level 14. She should have one shot that dude. I get if she’s teaching the MC something but here it looks she’s genuinely fighting him. So the power levels are very messed up. Sorry if i sound a bit negative or complaing but i see a lot of potential in this story.

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GreenHydra

I have heard good stuff about this from a friend. Seems interesting, looking forward to how it progresses. The art for the characters is looking beautiful too

15d
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Nahid_Hasan_8782

Everything was going great....until I saw the name of the hoe innkeeper in MC's harem list...too disgusted to not drop the book

16d
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Bi5228

A villain is an over-statement he looks rather normal to me, anti-hero at best. I read 31 chapters before the review. Story is ok, read if you want, I am getting the slave-harem in another world vibes at least at the start.

17d
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Veller_Cruz

Don't get carried away by the bad reviews, those idiots who hate the harem but you are going to see them watching a novel with a harem label just to say that it is rubbish, it is the stupidest thing you can see

17d
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Oakley_Tallent

First off, The characters in this book are by far the best written I have ever read. Their initial personalities, and their growth, and their differences, have all been created wonderfully. I can't believe how well done they are. Not every single person, but the main cast if you will, with some extras thrown in. I don't like how some things get changed on a whim just to suit the authors agenda at that moment in time. This doesn't exactly happen all the time, but it's happened enough to be irritating for me. With some tweaks it can still work out, but they need to sound plausible at the very least. Lava should not have a gravitational pull by default🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ I can't believe the author did that🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ (also, it's lava, not magma🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️) Next pet peeve, thunder is a sound, not electricity. Lightning is the electrical part🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ Why do so few writers realize this?🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ By all means, make "thunder" a sound attack, or a secondary effect of creating Lightning, but don't call the electricity part "thunder" for God's sakes!!🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ The story is interesting and fun to read, but mostly because of the characters that the author has created. In my opinion, that is where most authors fail. They are not able to create this many characters, with this much depth and variety and growth. Sadly, the "system" is where the author fails the most. When I say that, I mean everything included in it like classes and skills. If you have never read a system book before, you may not notice any issues, but if you have read many like me, you will be confused and aggravated at this "system" setup. Overall, it's a good book to read and enjoy. I have caught myself laughing my a$$ off many times while reading it because of the quirky characters and their shenanigans.

17d
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Killer4501737738

A great story , an awesome potential with three kingdoms to explore as far as the author has introduced , various races,unknown continents with lotsss and a lots of possible subplots which can be merged into the main line..although i sometimes feel that the author writes with a somewhat rushed timeline and urgency..with the worldbuilding that u have created u have the potential to write one of the most intriguing stories in this genre

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Tasmanian_Devil_1546

I have only read to like 123 but I am loving the book but could u please get ur XP right. like when he killed one of the bosses in the labyrinth (lv 2-5) he got like 150xp but he then kills a lv 13 orc outside the labyrinth and got only 150 like what this isn't mathing right.

21d
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1_EyedKing

Hmmmmmmmmm this is interesting…..I can post another review? 🗿

24d
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Celestial_Pages

I really enjoyed this novel overall. Although the beginning was slow and a bit hard to get through, it’s clear how much the author has grown as a writer since then. Once the action started, the pacing improved significantly, and I had an absolute blast reading it. The R-18 scenes were well-executed and contributed to the story's appeal. To the author: I’m really looking forward to future chapters! I’m especially excited to see more of the world you’ve built—different continents, and maybe even other worlds, if you have that in mind for future chapters. It’s amazing to see your growth as a writer, and I’m excited to follow your journey as an author. I hope you continue to enjoy the process. Please take care not to overdo it and risk burning yourself out—we all want to see this story continue at its best. Thank you for your hard work and for giving us such an enjoyable read!

26d
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1_EyedKing

Hold up I can review this again? Did my previous one get taken down? Coz I checked another new WebNovel and couldn’t post another review

27d
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Black_Reaper160

This is some real good stuff….do give it a read for sure. The characters are interesting, there is a good storyline. The author loves making us readers happy…especially with those cliffhangers 👀

1mth
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micherlle_sian

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1mth
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roshan3756

i am thinking about starting this novel after reading some comment i don't mind many girls i just don't want to read many R18 chapter i mean some are okay after long chapter but i truly don't want to read a porn i dont't read it so I will change my review after reading it

1mth
Voir 2 Réponses
YanderesHunter

Amazing story with a more "realistic" transmigration, which escapes the most well-known clichés. I see the potential for it to have thousands of chapters, something I honestly hope for, since we are still on just one continent and there is the possibility of expanding to different worlds... maybe? Note: I hope they add a yandere to the harem...

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
BloddWedd

It is not the best piece of literature I have ever seen, but as far as this site goes, it's a 5/5 rare to see such writing quality and development of both story and characters.

1mth
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Arcane_Milf_Poker

best novel i have read in a long time.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

1mth
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Relex_2935

The novel is really good. Author, I would like to know how many girls are in the harem? I am talking about the last chapters, if it is not a secret. I do not care about spoilers

1mth
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Marvin_L_2467

good world building very good story progression (not to slow but also not to fast) Nice characters (but a few could use a little more depth sooner ore later <3 )

1mth
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Laurent_Jerry

This is worth reading, its enjoyable, the world background is well built and the story is good develops at a good pace, fights have about the right presence and its not a simple leveling slugfest like most novels here. The characters are interresting, although their speach might be a bit akward and too lengthy a tad cringy at times, especially in the first chapters, but the author clearly improves fast chapter after chapter. The MC is a bit shaky with the 'submit to me stuff' being a bit out of place, but overall its interresting and the type of villain angle imagined by the author is a good choice

1mth
Voir 1 Réponses
1_EyedKing

Ok so for the people looking to see if you should red this, I’m going to be very honest…the starting is kinda off coz the author just behave writing and he takes a while to get into his flow, but once he does the novel quality improves greatly…the main character is relatable, and the BEST part is that none of the Harem members are forgotten and each get equal screen time and interactions with the main character and the story in general. Every character is really well done, there have even been characters who first came off as obnoxious and arrogant, but they go through great character development and grow on you. So please do give it a try. It’s a great slice of life harem story, the main character is a villain who does what’s needed for himself, but he has morals he doesn’t go after innocent people and just slaughter cities for fun he is willing to rob and kill if they help him reach his goals, he mostly kills bad guys but he’s not one to be a hero for no reason especially when him and his loved ones could be in danger.

1mth
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Umm
LV 15 Badge

The world is a bit discordant. The power of field mobs and dungeon mobs is wildly disproportionate, for instance, and the level scaling feels multiplicative even when it's supposedly additive. A level 2 boss destroying a stone environment, for instance, which is greater than a level 22 field mob who didn't cause much damage to trees. A level 5 boss being quite capable of beating said level 22 field mob. The cost/benefit of things is also strange, the cost of armor against the destructive potential of mobs would make tanks almost impossible, especially with how little vitality as a stat means in comparison to the rest, but many of the humans encountered are tanks. And armor is prevalent, which is good because it looks awesome, but not effective in any real way while being quite expensive despite that. I get that writing maintenance isn't sexy, but it feels like a waste to spend a chapter gushing on how awesome the armor is and then focus entirely on dodging because one hit will scrap it. Otherwise it's really good. The people feel real, the interactions between them are fun to read, and the story is solid. My only complaint is the world, really, otherwise it'd be awesome.

1mth
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Devon_Weems_0762

I just have a question about the MC physical description or if there is any?

2mth
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Abc_Xyz_8200

one of the best starts of any novel ive read. I loved this very much up until about chapter 220 where the ntr of inn keeper lady phase starts. the story was going all good and fine what was the need of adding ntr. tried reading ahead but it just puts me off. just add the NTR tag so people like me aren't disappointed

2mth
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NecroBin

Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.

5mth
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Hijak
LV 15 Badge

What a gem. Great MC development Great story Great Harem design and development My favorite part is the back story of the characters and how it explains how most villians are created and not born. Watching good people turn to the dark side based on the happenstance is truly enjoyable.

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
TsukasaSirius

I found this novel by chance, and I was surprised by how good it is! From the very first chapter, it pulled me in with its unique premise and exciting storyline. The story is full of interesting twists and keeps you wanting more. There’s never a dull moment, and every chapter leaves you eager to see what happens next. The characters are very well-written and their relationships as well. The way they interact makes the story even more engaging, and you can really feel their connections grow over time. The pacing is perfect—not too fast, not too slow—keeping the balance between action, character development, and world-building. The writing itself is excellent, with smooth and well-structured sentences that make it easy and enjoyable to read. The grammar is great, which really helps the flow of the story. Overall this Novel is one of my personal favourites and i would re-read it again. I wasn’t expecting much when I started, but it turned out to be an incredible read. If you’re looking for a well-written, exciting, and engaging novel, I highly recommend this one!

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david_trauger

I was told by a friend to give this novel a try and I’m super glad I did. I have honestly not been able to put to it down. The evolution of the main characters thought process and behavior has been spot on and the women are a continuing part of the story, and not just used once and thrown away. Each of these characters has a backstory and a history that is used to flesh out their behavior and why they are who they are now. Great job to the author and keep up the awesome work.

1d
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Black_Reaper160

this is one of the rare few good webnovels on here, everything is great about it. author replies to readers and posts daily consistently. the mc can be a bit annoying at times but thats rare and hes a great mc for the most part.

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GreenHydra

Great stuff, keep up the amazing job. Also a question, how many girls will you have in the harem? like do you intend to take blackfang and all three disciples? what about the scarlet lillies and the princess? thank god that this time the fool recomended a good wn unlike last time LMAO. OneEyedKing you retarded idiot 😭

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Lhyrax
LV 13 Badge

An incredible novel, great story, amazing characters, great world building and most importantly I really like the protagonist.

4d
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Buff_n_stuff

Overall great novel. I’m about 150 chapters in and nothing really to complain about. Decent somewhat cringey MC. The girls are good, and the developement of relationships is pure and wholesome. I would say the only drawback is the smut can be incredibly cringey at times. MC seems like a virgin version of Christian grey. As such I do skip through some of his dialog/ antics. But if you can overlook the cringe it’s hella good.

8d
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yoven
LV 12 Badge

I have just started reading the book. I like the very idea it’s based on. But the MC is behaving a bit stupidly in the start. He says he wants to be at the top of the world but has thought little about how to go about it. I can let it slide since he’s new to the world. Also I get concept of having slave harem. But what I really don’t understand is why don’t authors in novels like these forget that there are also male slaves available. A good villain or a hero would need subordinates, certain roles are suitable for males and certain are suitable for females. They completely ignore the males in the world. They should be talented too. They could be used as spies or just a front for MC to deal with random shit. Like a carriage driver. But no the MC needs to have a driver or other chores done by someone that’s too beautiful and will definitely be targeted by people. I don’t know how the story will progress, I’ve already read 83 chapters and it’s just day five. I know it’s your first time writing or maybe I’m wrong on this but this is a very slow pace. By the time it’ll be chapter 500 I think it would only be a month that’s passed. Also Ayame is fighting a level 3 boss and doing fancy moves and being on death’s edge but she is level 14. She should have one shot that dude. I get if she’s teaching the MC something but here it looks she’s genuinely fighting him. So the power levels are very messed up. Sorry if i sound a bit negative or complaing but i see a lot of potential in this story.

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GreenHydra

I have heard good stuff about this from a friend. Seems interesting, looking forward to how it progresses. The art for the characters is looking beautiful too

15d
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Nahid_Hasan_8782

Everything was going great....until I saw the name of the hoe innkeeper in MC's harem list...too disgusted to not drop the book

16d
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Bi5228

A villain is an over-statement he looks rather normal to me, anti-hero at best. I read 31 chapters before the review. Story is ok, read if you want, I am getting the slave-harem in another world vibes at least at the start.

17d
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Veller_Cruz

Don't get carried away by the bad reviews, those idiots who hate the harem but you are going to see them watching a novel with a harem label just to say that it is rubbish, it is the stupidest thing you can see

17d
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Oakley_Tallent

First off, The characters in this book are by far the best written I have ever read. Their initial personalities, and their growth, and their differences, have all been created wonderfully. I can't believe how well done they are. Not every single person, but the main cast if you will, with some extras thrown in. I don't like how some things get changed on a whim just to suit the authors agenda at that moment in time. This doesn't exactly happen all the time, but it's happened enough to be irritating for me. With some tweaks it can still work out, but they need to sound plausible at the very least. Lava should not have a gravitational pull by default🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ I can't believe the author did that🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ (also, it's lava, not magma🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️) Next pet peeve, thunder is a sound, not electricity. Lightning is the electrical part🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ Why do so few writers realize this?🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ By all means, make "thunder" a sound attack, or a secondary effect of creating Lightning, but don't call the electricity part "thunder" for God's sakes!!🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️🤦‍♂️ The story is interesting and fun to read, but mostly because of the characters that the author has created. In my opinion, that is where most authors fail. They are not able to create this many characters, with this much depth and variety and growth. Sadly, the "system" is where the author fails the most. When I say that, I mean everything included in it like classes and skills. If you have never read a system book before, you may not notice any issues, but if you have read many like me, you will be confused and aggravated at this "system" setup. Overall, it's a good book to read and enjoy. I have caught myself laughing my a$$ off many times while reading it because of the quirky characters and their shenanigans.

17d
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Killer4501737738

A great story , an awesome potential with three kingdoms to explore as far as the author has introduced , various races,unknown continents with lotsss and a lots of possible subplots which can be merged into the main line..although i sometimes feel that the author writes with a somewhat rushed timeline and urgency..with the worldbuilding that u have created u have the potential to write one of the most intriguing stories in this genre

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Tasmanian_Devil_1546

I have only read to like 123 but I am loving the book but could u please get ur XP right. like when he killed one of the bosses in the labyrinth (lv 2-5) he got like 150xp but he then kills a lv 13 orc outside the labyrinth and got only 150 like what this isn't mathing right.

21d
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1_EyedKing

Hmmmmmmmmm this is interesting…..I can post another review? 🗿

24d
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Celestial_Pages

I really enjoyed this novel overall. Although the beginning was slow and a bit hard to get through, it’s clear how much the author has grown as a writer since then. Once the action started, the pacing improved significantly, and I had an absolute blast reading it. The R-18 scenes were well-executed and contributed to the story's appeal. To the author: I’m really looking forward to future chapters! I’m especially excited to see more of the world you’ve built—different continents, and maybe even other worlds, if you have that in mind for future chapters. It’s amazing to see your growth as a writer, and I’m excited to follow your journey as an author. I hope you continue to enjoy the process. Please take care not to overdo it and risk burning yourself out—we all want to see this story continue at its best. Thank you for your hard work and for giving us such an enjoyable read!

26d
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1_EyedKing

Hold up I can review this again? Did my previous one get taken down? Coz I checked another new WebNovel and couldn’t post another review

27d
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Black_Reaper160

This is some real good stuff….do give it a read for sure. The characters are interesting, there is a good storyline. The author loves making us readers happy…especially with those cliffhangers 👀

1mth
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micherlle_sian

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1mth
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roshan3756

i am thinking about starting this novel after reading some comment i don't mind many girls i just don't want to read many R18 chapter i mean some are okay after long chapter but i truly don't want to read a porn i dont't read it so I will change my review after reading it

1mth
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YanderesHunter

Amazing story with a more "realistic" transmigration, which escapes the most well-known clichés. I see the potential for it to have thousands of chapters, something I honestly hope for, since we are still on just one continent and there is the possibility of expanding to different worlds... maybe? Note: I hope they add a yandere to the harem...

1mth
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BloddWedd

It is not the best piece of literature I have ever seen, but as far as this site goes, it's a 5/5 rare to see such writing quality and development of both story and characters.

1mth
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Arcane_Milf_Poker

best novel i have read in a long time.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

1mth
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Relex_2935

The novel is really good. Author, I would like to know how many girls are in the harem? I am talking about the last chapters, if it is not a secret. I do not care about spoilers

1mth
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Marvin_L_2467

good world building very good story progression (not to slow but also not to fast) Nice characters (but a few could use a little more depth sooner ore later <3 )

1mth
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Laurent_Jerry

This is worth reading, its enjoyable, the world background is well built and the story is good develops at a good pace, fights have about the right presence and its not a simple leveling slugfest like most novels here. The characters are interresting, although their speach might be a bit akward and too lengthy a tad cringy at times, especially in the first chapters, but the author clearly improves fast chapter after chapter. The MC is a bit shaky with the 'submit to me stuff' being a bit out of place, but overall its interresting and the type of villain angle imagined by the author is a good choice

1mth
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1_EyedKing

Ok so for the people looking to see if you should red this, I’m going to be very honest…the starting is kinda off coz the author just behave writing and he takes a while to get into his flow, but once he does the novel quality improves greatly…the main character is relatable, and the BEST part is that none of the Harem members are forgotten and each get equal screen time and interactions with the main character and the story in general. Every character is really well done, there have even been characters who first came off as obnoxious and arrogant, but they go through great character development and grow on you. So please do give it a try. It’s a great slice of life harem story, the main character is a villain who does what’s needed for himself, but he has morals he doesn’t go after innocent people and just slaughter cities for fun he is willing to rob and kill if they help him reach his goals, he mostly kills bad guys but he’s not one to be a hero for no reason especially when him and his loved ones could be in danger.

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Umm
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The world is a bit discordant. The power of field mobs and dungeon mobs is wildly disproportionate, for instance, and the level scaling feels multiplicative even when it's supposedly additive. A level 2 boss destroying a stone environment, for instance, which is greater than a level 22 field mob who didn't cause much damage to trees. A level 5 boss being quite capable of beating said level 22 field mob. The cost/benefit of things is also strange, the cost of armor against the destructive potential of mobs would make tanks almost impossible, especially with how little vitality as a stat means in comparison to the rest, but many of the humans encountered are tanks. And armor is prevalent, which is good because it looks awesome, but not effective in any real way while being quite expensive despite that. I get that writing maintenance isn't sexy, but it feels like a waste to spend a chapter gushing on how awesome the armor is and then focus entirely on dodging because one hit will scrap it. Otherwise it's really good. The people feel real, the interactions between them are fun to read, and the story is solid. My only complaint is the world, really, otherwise it'd be awesome.

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Devon_Weems_0762

I just have a question about the MC physical description or if there is any?

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Abc_Xyz_8200

one of the best starts of any novel ive read. I loved this very much up until about chapter 220 where the ntr of inn keeper lady phase starts. the story was going all good and fine what was the need of adding ntr. tried reading ahead but it just puts me off. just add the NTR tag so people like me aren't disappointed

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