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Amazing start by showing enough mysteries and deep characters' personalities to hooked me. The comedy, story paces, characteristics of every characters, the plot development, all are connecting smoothly. I can't wait to read what would happen to FL and ML. Please update more!
Goosebump everywhere, fanstastic writing skill and the story is so vivid that it bring me into the story and i feel like i am standing right beside the scene, cant wait to read more novel from this writer
I love the writing quality and depth of each character, main and supporting roles alike. I find it interesting that side characters don't just look like cannon fodders or dumb. And there isn 't too much of plot armour for the main leads. The main leads' chemistry development is steady and not rushed. Overall a very good novel. I totally recommend it.
Wow, another book from my favorite author!! Can't wait to dive into the story! [img=recommend][img=update]
Spoiler de révélation
It's time to stock more chapters for this new book before start reading any~~~~~~
am all in:) other book is the only Novel am following now and i know this will be another hit.
I truly can't wait to read more! She's the first author I followed on this app and I expect to be fully engrossed in this story, just like her first one!
I never thought to find Dawn's second book now when in what seemed forever she only has her Cannon Fodder book 🤣 I wonder what kind of story she will tell her beloved readers next Come forward, everyone! You won't be disappointed in the author's storytelling craft!
Hooked only after reading a few chapters. The mysteries, tensions, comedy, characters personalities, show a very good potential of this book. Please update more chapters, Author. 😆😆
Hello, my lovely readers~ This is your shameless author who rated her book with 5 stars. xD This is my second book and my first attempt to write an urban romance story without transmigration or reborn. While the story might not be perfect, I hope everyone can enjoy the story. I would love to read the comments, so please leave lots of it! This book joins WSA 2024, so please support me by leaving a review, or voting with power stones, or golden tickets. Thank you in advance for your support, Dear! <3
Amazing start by showing enough mysteries and deep characters' personalities to hooked me. The comedy, story paces, characteristics of every characters, the plot development, all are connecting smoothly. I can't wait to read what would happen to FL and ML. Please update more!
Goosebump everywhere, fanstastic writing skill and the story is so vivid that it bring me into the story and i feel like i am standing right beside the scene, cant wait to read more novel from this writer
I love the writing quality and depth of each character, main and supporting roles alike. I find it interesting that side characters don't just look like cannon fodders or dumb. And there isn 't too much of plot armour for the main leads. The main leads' chemistry development is steady and not rushed. Overall a very good novel. I totally recommend it.
Wow, another book from my favorite author!! Can't wait to dive into the story! [img=recommend][img=update]
Spoiler de révélation It's time to stock more chapters for this new book before start reading any~~~~~~
am all in:) other book is the only Novel am following now and i know this will be another hit.
I truly can't wait to read more! She's the first author I followed on this app and I expect to be fully engrossed in this story, just like her first one!
I never thought to find Dawn's second book now when in what seemed forever she only has her Cannon Fodder book 🤣 I wonder what kind of story she will tell her beloved readers next Come forward, everyone! You won't be disappointed in the author's storytelling craft!
Hooked only after reading a few chapters. The mysteries, tensions, comedy, characters personalities, show a very good potential of this book. Please update more chapters, Author. 😆😆
Hello, my lovely readers~ This is your shameless author who rated her book with 5 stars. xD This is my second book and my first attempt to write an urban romance story without transmigration or reborn. While the story might not be perfect, I hope everyone can enjoy the story. I would love to read the comments, so please leave lots of it! This book joins WSA 2024, so please support me by leaving a review, or voting with power stones, or golden tickets. Thank you in advance for your support, Dear! <3