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After reading 125 chapters, I feel I can adequately say the summary of this story is somewhat misleading. If you also got the impression that gunslinging MC was being thrown into a magical world without (or hardly any) guns, then that's a mistake. Guns (magical or otherwise) appear to be a pretty common choice of weapon for normies and the magically quipped. Also, MC doesn't have a solid presence or character in the story so far, he has quite literally been going with the flow without knowing what he wants. Those are my only two criticisms, otherwise, this novel is solid.
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This is literally my first review of any novel since joining this app. Honestly, I've been looking for a gunslinger-type novel for the longest, and this novel here hits everything good I would desire from it. The pacing and flow of the story are great.. the characters are properly fleshed out to the point that they stick enough in my memory. The actual writing is great, and I don't feel like I'm losing brain cells with each and every chapter. Thank you so much for the good read so far and keep up the stellar work.
very much like red dead redemption 2... the leader character like duch and dovan something ? like micha? but still enjoying this very much[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Overall just a fanfiction of rdr2 with magic, the development is junk in the purest way. The fact that the guns are plain useless is totally a call for drop for a novel with a Gunslinger as MC, the Mc is another issue, he's been carry for the others chars and can't see the previous live personality. The lack of ingenuity to much the genres are the big issue about this novel, hit that take 7 dmg in the shoulder or hits that put the mc in 1of35 hp just ruins the constance and logic of a plot, is more than obvious that the author is an amateur that don't put the points where has to be. Disappointing at least.
Great potential, some loop hole here and there thought. and lack of comon sens on some points. like horses that can travel 1000 KIloMETERs in an hour. 277m/s horses is WILLLLD
After reading 76 chapters, i feel like it’s a good point to leave a review. From the premise, story building, character development, grammar and world building. I can say that it‘s one of the better ones i‘ve read on this platform. There‘s virtually no filler or info dumping, the story is going on an optimal pace and the mc is likeable. The dynamics between mc and side characters are fleshed out and make for a more vivid picture. Although i was doubtful about guns in a magical world, the way it was implemented just works and make the story and setting believable. All in all, it’s a novel i can highly recommend and hope the quality will prevail in the coming chapters.
You know I read the synopsis and title, then I was instantly hooked and knew this book was gonna be good!!
nice book overall writing style is perfect! if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return.'
Really enjoying so far. The potential is high for this novel. Curious to see how this will play out for the MC. Interesting parallel world with Wild West views with magic. Recommend giving this novel a shot as the author has made solid work before. The only thing I want more of it is more world building and MC character development but this will take time to develop. Otherwise, worth the read so far.
Haven’t read yet but excited to do so hope it’s good and that you stick with it I always enjoy novels about guns in fantasy worlds
I personally feel this story has enough potential too be better than cosmic emperor & I haven’t seen any gunslinger novels & even better this mc is an criminal that just makes me love it even more, I hope you keep going!!
Just because I love cosmic emperor. Nice to see you aren't done writing author sama
I’m really enjoying this story please keep this one going!! Also, more frequent updates would be great, this story has only just begun it seems but it’s great so far!
After reading 125 chapters, I feel I can adequately say the summary of this story is somewhat misleading. If you also got the impression that gunslinging MC was being thrown into a magical world without (or hardly any) guns, then that's a mistake. Guns (magical or otherwise) appear to be a pretty common choice of weapon for normies and the magically quipped. Also, MC doesn't have a solid presence or character in the story so far, he has quite literally been going with the flow without knowing what he wants. Those are my only two criticisms, otherwise, this novel is solid.
Spoiler de révélation This is literally my first review of any novel since joining this app. Honestly, I've been looking for a gunslinger-type novel for the longest, and this novel here hits everything good I would desire from it. The pacing and flow of the story are great.. the characters are properly fleshed out to the point that they stick enough in my memory. The actual writing is great, and I don't feel like I'm losing brain cells with each and every chapter. Thank you so much for the good read so far and keep up the stellar work.
very much like red dead redemption 2... the leader character like duch and dovan something ? like micha? but still enjoying this very much[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Spoiler de révélation Overall just a fanfiction of rdr2 with magic, the development is junk in the purest way. The fact that the guns are plain useless is totally a call for drop for a novel with a Gunslinger as MC, the Mc is another issue, he's been carry for the others chars and can't see the previous live personality. The lack of ingenuity to much the genres are the big issue about this novel, hit that take 7 dmg in the shoulder or hits that put the mc in 1of35 hp just ruins the constance and logic of a plot, is more than obvious that the author is an amateur that don't put the points where has to be. Disappointing at least.
Great potential, some loop hole here and there thought. and lack of comon sens on some points. like horses that can travel 1000 KIloMETERs in an hour. 277m/s horses is WILLLLD
After reading 76 chapters, i feel like it’s a good point to leave a review. From the premise, story building, character development, grammar and world building. I can say that it‘s one of the better ones i‘ve read on this platform. There‘s virtually no filler or info dumping, the story is going on an optimal pace and the mc is likeable. The dynamics between mc and side characters are fleshed out and make for a more vivid picture. Although i was doubtful about guns in a magical world, the way it was implemented just works and make the story and setting believable. All in all, it’s a novel i can highly recommend and hope the quality will prevail in the coming chapters.
You know I read the synopsis and title, then I was instantly hooked and knew this book was gonna be good!!
nice book overall writing style is perfect! if you're looking for another fantastic read check out 'paradox of being ancient sukani's Return.'
Really enjoying so far. The potential is high for this novel. Curious to see how this will play out for the MC. Interesting parallel world with Wild West views with magic. Recommend giving this novel a shot as the author has made solid work before. The only thing I want more of it is more world building and MC character development but this will take time to develop. Otherwise, worth the read so far.
Haven’t read yet but excited to do so hope it’s good and that you stick with it I always enjoy novels about guns in fantasy worlds
I personally feel this story has enough potential too be better than cosmic emperor & I haven’t seen any gunslinger novels & even better this mc is an criminal that just makes me love it even more, I hope you keep going!!
Just because I love cosmic emperor. Nice to see you aren't done writing author sama
I’m really enjoying this story please keep this one going!! Also, more frequent updates would be great, this story has only just begun it seems but it’s great so far!