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I like the story so far great imagination and execution of the characters and great grammar
I have not quit my other novel. They are at more than 150 K chapter each with one of Naruto at 100 K, just that I am deciding the sequence in which I will release them for a reason. I cooking something, and finally decided to do it just fine. Also I have a GOT fic in cooker. Want it, then comment it here with a review.
Sorry but how is this about your main character if the first VOLUME is about everyone but the main character..... thats not a MAIN character. I would understand if the first one or 2 chapters are about world building or building the people that live in his town into believable characters. But and ENTIRE VOLUME. At the very beginning of the fanfic. It just a very poor choice the immediately sidelines your MC into a side character.
I like the story so far great imagination and execution of the characters and great grammar
I have not quit my other novel. They are at more than 150 K chapter each with one of Naruto at 100 K, just that I am deciding the sequence in which I will release them for a reason. I cooking something, and finally decided to do it just fine. Also I have a GOT fic in cooker. Want it, then comment it here with a review.
Sorry but how is this about your main character if the first VOLUME is about everyone but the main character..... thats not a MAIN character. I would understand if the first one or 2 chapters are about world building or building the people that live in his town into believable characters. But and ENTIRE VOLUME. At the very beginning of the fanfic. It just a very poor choice the immediately sidelines your MC into a side character.