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Pretty good but you should use something like grammarly to fix whatever grammar issues there are.
5 stars to compensate for the rating the guy gave, it's not the writer's fault that the webnovel removed some tags 🫡 strength author!!! KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA
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I don't like genderdend so next time say it in the tags so I can dodge this kind od stories and not waste my time on 3 good chapters for a disastrous fourth chapter
I just wanted to give 3 stars for doing something biologically impossible and give my regards to the author. I would like to understand how can his family be a shellfish and he human. That's all.
Pretty good but you should use something like grammarly to fix whatever grammar issues there are.
5 stars to compensate for the rating the guy gave, it's not the writer's fault that the webnovel removed some tags 🫡 strength author!!! KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA KKKKKKKKKKKKKK CONTAGEM DE PALAVRA
Spoiler de révélation I don't like genderdend so next time say it in the tags so I can dodge this kind od stories and not waste my time on 3 good chapters for a disastrous fourth chapter
I just wanted to give 3 stars for doing something biologically impossible and give my regards to the author. I would like to understand how can his family be a shellfish and he human. That's all.