A Skeptical Slytherins Revolution

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lobsxz

a good idea. I only have one problem the paragraph are to full, so it's hard to focus. I advise to to shortening it like instead of making it the for the same amount of word's

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NxSyth

The author has introduced some creative ideas into this fanfiction mainly about magic, that has been very interesting to read although the charactors all sound nearly the same, the author should try changing how he/she words things in every charactors perspective, also I think the author's portrayal of Dumbledore is faulty, in this fanfiction Dumbledore sounds like a middle aged man without any of the usual Dumbledore wisdom, the use of ai is destroying the story, the wording is terribly redundant in some areas and reading this awfully bland writing style makes me want to tear out my hair.

Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book 📚📚📖

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ReadinSomeShit

I really enjoy your development, characters, and grammar but it’s gotten really really weird to continually remind myself this is STILL about someone barely a toddler. Seriously, please age her up.

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ChanceofRice

Fun and insightful. Hopefully, this story does not go the way of most fanfics. I wish the author great success if only for the fact that the story they are writing is a great read.

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_Wessix4Ever

the English is good but the character is already doing things the most full grown wizards wouldnt even try like If you think turning into an animal is dangerous try messing with ur brain mcgonagall. it leaves me concerned that the character will be so ridiculously overpowered that any problems or conflict they encounter will be redundant since they'll solve it easily

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Anmortis

Will there be romance? If so, will it be F/M or yuri?

I probably read every hp fanfic and this one can be placed first 30 easily don't think too low there's more than 100 hp fanfic in the list . Only thing I worry is mc being overpowered in later chapters but with time skips and creativity.

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Neoalgas

the story has started a bit slow but has great potential looking forward to how it develops

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Fat_Elf

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Red_panther

Really good fanfictions, I enjoyed reading it and am still looking forward to seeing where it's going to go.

Falls into the trap of some Reincarnation stories fall into of having the super smart baby cliche when the genius MC is remaking magic as a 1 year old. Please, just let the store flow with some time skips. Give the character some room to breath.

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Daoist7KkCzm

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