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In the name of the almighty, please do a mass release. I check this story every 6 hours to see if there's an update, I'm going to die, please, please, please
Excellent, I'll say it again, the era of warring clans is the most interesting and underused period of the Ninja World, the best thing is that all the interesting clans are still strong, numerous and alive. Beyond the very good theme, this story is well-constructed and believable, it's much more in-depth and extensive than what we know of the lore, which increases the believability of the story and makes for much more gripping reading. Translator, please increase the speed of translation, and don't be like all those Western translators who remove elements of the original story because they don't agree with the original author, it's unfair and stupid.
its goods, plus its warring state fic with a mc that aint uchiha or senju. also the translation is good except with a few pharses or sentences that are translated weirdly.
this is the most fantastic fanfiction i've read in a long time. If anyone is wondering if this story is good or bad due to it being a translation, than, worry not; because, this story is the best.
interesting to follow the story of new character and fights between different clan and what the future may be will they join konoha or a different village
decent, but the translator or author needs to kink out some grammatical issues. for instance, the most obvious mistake was when the shinobi were attacking they would yell "go dead" as if to say "Die!" to their enemy, a small but obvious mistake that breaks immersion. other than that, its pretty good.
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i am saying ooooooooo you are back BooBoo-boo yeah so please not go away again
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Spoiler de révélation In the name of the almighty, please do a mass release. I check this story every 6 hours to see if there's an update, I'm going to die, please, please, please
Excellent, I'll say it again, the era of warring clans is the most interesting and underused period of the Ninja World, the best thing is that all the interesting clans are still strong, numerous and alive. Beyond the very good theme, this story is well-constructed and believable, it's much more in-depth and extensive than what we know of the lore, which increases the believability of the story and makes for much more gripping reading. Translator, please increase the speed of translation, and don't be like all those Western translators who remove elements of the original story because they don't agree with the original author, it's unfair and stupid.
its goods, plus its warring state fic with a mc that aint uchiha or senju. also the translation is good except with a few pharses or sentences that are translated weirdly.
this is the most fantastic fanfiction i've read in a long time. If anyone is wondering if this story is good or bad due to it being a translation, than, worry not; because, this story is the best.
interesting to follow the story of new character and fights between different clan and what the future may be will they join konoha or a different village
decent, but the translator or author needs to kink out some grammatical issues. for instance, the most obvious mistake was when the shinobi were attacking they would yell "go dead" as if to say "Die!" to their enemy, a small but obvious mistake that breaks immersion. other than that, its pretty good.
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i am saying ooooooooo you are back BooBoo-boo yeah so please not go away again