Reviews of What? System Wants Me To Steal MILFs To Become Stronger! by MOONshadow_ - Webnovel

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MOONshadow_

If you have any questions, you can ask me here😴

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5mth
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MOONshadow_

Author's 2nd review after 100 chapters 1. WRITING QUALITY - The first 40 or so chapters contain some dialogue inconsistencies, and in a few places, I was unable to fully express what I truly wanted to say. So please bear with it as it does get better in the later chapters. And I'll slowly edit few such part, so please do "paragraph comments" to let me know. 2. STORY DEVELOPMENT - So far, there are only Seggs parts with little bit story. However, the story is still developing, so it is too early to make any judge. 3. CHARACTER DESIGN - Most I took ideas from adult industry. So I guess it's quite good. 4. WORLD BACKGROUND - It'll be a huge spoiler to reveal that so soon. So let it unfolds step by step. THANKS FOR READING. 🙌

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2mth
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Asher_Sarion

hey author good story. by the way can you post the new discord link. the one given is expired.

10d
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Imperial77

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28d
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HiroKoya

So the first few chapters are just smut and the real plot starts at Ch40. System unlocks around Ch78. It’s kinda funny reading author’s skills get better with each chapter.

1mth
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EntropyF

Phew🥂 I'm reviewing because author promised to show us something intriguing👀 I new one that has never been seen before, also 🤭 I have never seen lucí get bested, Bro is a hungry wolf

1mth
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firestorm_2nd

Novel is pretty good so far looking forward to seeing what the rest of the chapters will be like Wish the discord link worked

1mth
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Cainbros

The author censors words with asterisks. It completely breaks immersion when trying to read or listen to it. I was hopeful that it would change in the later chapters but it is still occurring in the later ones.

2mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Mont_LeBlanc

Simply one of the best. Amazing smut scenes, great mc (and im really picky here), good story and concept, writing quality is also on a high level. If I had to find a fault then that would be the fact that sometimes there are singular words missing in sentences, not a big inconvenience but something author could pay more attention to. Also adding more character pictures would be a welcomed plus, but yeah, its just an addition. Overall its insanely good and definitely worth the read. Good job author and keep it up.

2mth
Voir 1 Réponses
RizzDaoist

the only thing that i would like to say to this story is

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2mth
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Great_Alexander

This novel is a great one with amazing smut scenes. The story building till now is great. The writing quality makes the novel very alive. So, I really recommend it.

3mth
Voir 2 Réponses
_Adam
LV 1 Badge

This is a great novel. I really like the development and the writing of the novel. Waiting to see more of this novel and looking forward to seeing how the world and characters evolve further.

3mth
Voir 2 Réponses
mohamedgabr

This novel is really amazing so far. The way of writing makes the novel very vivid. The characters are also amazing and world building so far is great. Looking forward to see more smut scenes, more of the world building and character development.

3mth
Voir 2 Réponses
MK_Infinity

I was searching for some good stuff and stumbled upon this. Considering that this novel is quite spicy, I recommend giving it a read

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3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
FallenAngeI

It's well written, with good smut scenes. From what I've seen there isn't romance so the novel isn't for me, but for those that don't care about romance and only about well-written smut harem story than you should read this one.

4mth
Voir 1 Réponses
DaoistIkPSGA

Well the novel is good one , seggs scene are well written(not monotonous where it like a summary) , story and character development is not bad either ,ai has been used properly unlike many new novels where whole story is written by ai . The only problems was during seggs scene it become confusing like he was using finger (you know where)then all of a sudden he started using tongue, it become confusing imagining it overall good i would advice imagining scene in your head then executing

4mth
Voir 3 Réponses
badboyz999

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5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
MOONshadow_

If you have any questions, you can ask me here😴

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5mth
Voir 48 Réponses
MOONshadow_

Author's 2nd review after 100 chapters 1. WRITING QUALITY - The first 40 or so chapters contain some dialogue inconsistencies, and in a few places, I was unable to fully express what I truly wanted to say. So please bear with it as it does get better in the later chapters. And I'll slowly edit few such part, so please do "paragraph comments" to let me know. 2. STORY DEVELOPMENT - So far, there are only Seggs parts with little bit story. However, the story is still developing, so it is too early to make any judge. 3. CHARACTER DESIGN - Most I took ideas from adult industry. So I guess it's quite good. 4. WORLD BACKGROUND - It'll be a huge spoiler to reveal that so soon. So let it unfolds step by step. THANKS FOR READING. 🙌

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2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Asher_Sarion

hey author good story. by the way can you post the new discord link. the one given is expired.

10d
Voir 1 Réponses
Imperial77

Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.Trash, mais um lixo.

28d
Voir 1 Réponses
HiroKoya

So the first few chapters are just smut and the real plot starts at Ch40. System unlocks around Ch78. It’s kinda funny reading author’s skills get better with each chapter.

1mth
Voir 3 Réponses
EntropyF

Phew🥂 I'm reviewing because author promised to show us something intriguing👀 I new one that has never been seen before, also 🤭 I have never seen lucí get bested, Bro is a hungry wolf

1mth
Voir 2 Réponses
firestorm_2nd

Novel is pretty good so far looking forward to seeing what the rest of the chapters will be like Wish the discord link worked

1mth
Voir 4 Réponses
Cainbros

The author censors words with asterisks. It completely breaks immersion when trying to read or listen to it. I was hopeful that it would change in the later chapters but it is still occurring in the later ones.

2mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Mont_LeBlanc

Simply one of the best. Amazing smut scenes, great mc (and im really picky here), good story and concept, writing quality is also on a high level. If I had to find a fault then that would be the fact that sometimes there are singular words missing in sentences, not a big inconvenience but something author could pay more attention to. Also adding more character pictures would be a welcomed plus, but yeah, its just an addition. Overall its insanely good and definitely worth the read. Good job author and keep it up.

2mth
Voir 1 Réponses
RizzDaoist

the only thing that i would like to say to this story is

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2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Great_Alexander

This novel is a great one with amazing smut scenes. The story building till now is great. The writing quality makes the novel very alive. So, I really recommend it.

3mth
Voir 2 Réponses
_Adam
LV 1 Badge

This is a great novel. I really like the development and the writing of the novel. Waiting to see more of this novel and looking forward to seeing how the world and characters evolve further.

3mth
Voir 2 Réponses
mohamedgabr

This novel is really amazing so far. The way of writing makes the novel very vivid. The characters are also amazing and world building so far is great. Looking forward to see more smut scenes, more of the world building and character development.

3mth
Voir 2 Réponses
MK_Infinity

I was searching for some good stuff and stumbled upon this. Considering that this novel is quite spicy, I recommend giving it a read

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3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
FallenAngeI

It's well written, with good smut scenes. From what I've seen there isn't romance so the novel isn't for me, but for those that don't care about romance and only about well-written smut harem story than you should read this one.

4mth
Voir 1 Réponses
DaoistIkPSGA

Well the novel is good one , seggs scene are well written(not monotonous where it like a summary) , story and character development is not bad either ,ai has been used properly unlike many new novels where whole story is written by ai . The only problems was during seggs scene it become confusing like he was using finger (you know where)then all of a sudden he started using tongue, it become confusing imagining it overall good i would advice imagining scene in your head then executing

4mth
Voir 3 Réponses
badboyz999

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5mth
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