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The author looks only forward, without looking back, I have seen many writers like you who have stopped Now about fan fiction, the plot is interesting, I have never read anything, I am waiting for the continuation
I don't write reviews offten, but this has to be one of the best ffs i found in a while. It's using a pretty original idea and not the mere 'kill stuff and get stronger' repetitive system, it might need some polishing but otherwise there really isn't much to criticise, keep up the good work my guy.
It's good! Very Good! But OG Author conveniently forgot Natlan in later chapters. He keeps saying 7 Archons and 7 Nations but didnt include the Pyro Archon and Natlan.
Im not very good at articulating what i like about novels and whatnot but i will say this is fantastic
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Very good book with the potential.to be very long however it is severely impacted by the Very slow releases overall I have to take 2 points away for the release and so this book is an 8/10 (relative to other webnovels)
I dont know why i waited to read thos for so long. Loved every single chapter. Though there are some small mistakes and the story is way more worth than that! READ IT! ITS GOOD!
solid fic, the plot is interesting, full of potential and excitement, dont drop please.. 👍👍
Gracias por tu esfuerzo, me encanta tu novela y no puedo esperar por más, , 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Спасибо за интересную книгу ропрпрпопарптгрнмгинмогпплрдплр щьснтщгптщмгтдсгдившпдвопшырсл заебыла ты со своими " отзыв не должен быть короче 140 символов "
Well, Indra started a very interesting story, I'm looking forward to the panic of the Demons, Demon slayers, aristocracy . I don’t even know what else to write.
Elle est bien , intéressante, on à hâte de lire la suite """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""××××××+++++""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
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Gran novela y buena tracción. Espero que continue.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . ..
Each chapter is still better than the last, it always takes the right time with each issue and the only thing you can ask for would be more chapters because quality has
Not gonna lie at first I was skeptical about the concept presented in this novel, but I'm glad I read on. the mc has an enjoyable attitude and doesn't act like a young master despite being the heavenly principles. not only that but the annexing worlds is a unique concept that I haven't came across for a while, and even though it is something with the potential to ruin the book the author wrote it in such a way that it actually compliments the story instead of taking away from it l. on a side note another reason to read this is because lumine is the traveler, and while I'll admit aether is good, search up some lumine art and you'll see why I like her more than aether. Ultimately, I think this book is definitely a good read and would encourage others to read it
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The fanfiction is good, I read the original with Google translator and I can say that it is very interesting about the development of the multiverse, the laws of the world and the conquest of worlds. The only thing I didn’t like was that the author enhances the world too much from several worlds and forgets to mention how mortals live and develop. (just know "god" is the most repeated word)
"Wonderful, great story and fantastic, very interesting, and I expect a lot from this great story." . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
me encanta.......................................................................................................................................
Great story, I must say. I'm quite intrigued. Good writing and an interesting plot. Keep it up, Mr./Ms. Author. The story is fantastic. . . . . .
Great novel there is a far more complete version on mtl nation but this one is translated to English better.
The author looks only forward, without looking back, I have seen many writers like you who have stopped Now about fan fiction, the plot is interesting, I have never read anything, I am waiting for the continuation
I don't write reviews offten, but this has to be one of the best ffs i found in a while. It's using a pretty original idea and not the mere 'kill stuff and get stronger' repetitive system, it might need some polishing but otherwise there really isn't much to criticise, keep up the good work my guy.
It's good! Very Good! But OG Author conveniently forgot Natlan in later chapters. He keeps saying 7 Archons and 7 Nations but didnt include the Pyro Archon and Natlan.
Im not very good at articulating what i like about novels and whatnot but i will say this is fantastic
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌🌌❤️🌌🌌🌌❤️🌌❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🌌🌌🌌❤️🌌🌌❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌🌌🌌🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🤩😍🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌❤️🌌🌌❤️❤️🌌❤️❤️🌌🌌
Very good book with the potential.to be very long however it is severely impacted by the Very slow releases overall I have to take 2 points away for the release and so this book is an 8/10 (relative to other webnovels)
I dont know why i waited to read thos for so long. Loved every single chapter. Though there are some small mistakes and the story is way more worth than that! READ IT! ITS GOOD!
solid fic, the plot is interesting, full of potential and excitement, dont drop please.. 👍👍
Gracias por tu esfuerzo, me encanta tu novela y no puedo esperar por más, , 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Спасибо за интересную книгу ропрпрпопарптгрнмгинмогпплрдплр щьснтщгптщмгтдсгдившпдвопшырсл заебыла ты со своими " отзыв не должен быть короче 140 символов "
Well, Indra started a very interesting story, I'm looking forward to the panic of the Demons, Demon slayers, aristocracy . I don’t even know what else to write.
Elle est bien , intéressante, on à hâte de lire la suite """""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""××××××+++++""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ................ ............... ............. ........... ........ .... ... .. .
Gran novela y buena tracción. Espero que continue.. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . ..
Each chapter is still better than the last, it always takes the right time with each issue and the only thing you can ask for would be more chapters because quality has
Not gonna lie at first I was skeptical about the concept presented in this novel, but I'm glad I read on. the mc has an enjoyable attitude and doesn't act like a young master despite being the heavenly principles. not only that but the annexing worlds is a unique concept that I haven't came across for a while, and even though it is something with the potential to ruin the book the author wrote it in such a way that it actually compliments the story instead of taking away from it l. on a side note another reason to read this is because lumine is the traveler, and while I'll admit aether is good, search up some lumine art and you'll see why I like her more than aether. Ultimately, I think this book is definitely a good read and would encourage others to read it
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The fanfiction is good, I read the original with Google translator and I can say that it is very interesting about the development of the multiverse, the laws of the world and the conquest of worlds. The only thing I didn’t like was that the author enhances the world too much from several worlds and forgets to mention how mortals live and develop. (just know "god" is the most repeated word)
"Wonderful, great story and fantastic, very interesting, and I expect a lot from this great story." . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
me encanta.......................................................................................................................................
Great story, I must say. I'm quite intrigued. Good writing and an interesting plot. Keep it up, Mr./Ms. Author. The story is fantastic. . . . . .
Great novel there is a far more complete version on mtl nation but this one is translated to English better.
5 Star for this absolute fantastic banger.