3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Really like this story but it gets really REALLY bogged down in the history it becomes a lecture that takes up more than half the chapters. At this point the story has ground to a halt and it feels like nothing is really happening.
Interesting, this is to motivate you, if possible have me create toilet paper, to avoid deaths due to poor hygiene of the time.........................
me gusta mucho gracias por crear esta novela me encanta estas novelas de encarnadores en la historia si alguien sabe de otras parecidas aviseme disfruto mucho esto
Really like this story but it gets really REALLY bogged down in the history it becomes a lecture that takes up more than half the chapters. At this point the story has ground to a halt and it feels like nothing is really happening.
Interesting, this is to motivate you, if possible have me create toilet paper, to avoid deaths due to poor hygiene of the time.........................
me gusta mucho gracias por crear esta novela me encanta estas novelas de encarnadores en la historia si alguien sabe de otras parecidas aviseme disfruto mucho esto