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I wasn’t sure about this when it started as a baby, but it skipped past that fairly quickly and I was pleasantly surprised with the creativity shown in every chapter over read so far (77 of them)
Love it so far almost at privledge- but in dire need of a new discord link please😵💫
I’d say it’s pretty good but as I read this I just don’t feel hooked I don’t get that feeling where I must read the next chapter I just gotta know what’s next or what our mc is gonna do, as well as author if you by chance read this I noticed through the comments people complaining about the mc having a dagger as a main weapon and said a sword was better I don’t know how long you have been on Webnovel but there’s like thousands of novels where the mc has a sword thousands of shows animes where the mc chooses a sword why does it gotta be a sword or a spear (usually always these two weapon selection) what I would say on this is that don’t feel pressured by your readers to have things like a sword you can selfishly say hey I can understand where your coming from or all that but mention that you would like the mc to have a dagger.
I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped
Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.
Enjoying the novel so far but my only concern is that the MC is going to be way to powerful compared to his peers. For example, He has just joined the academy and is already talking about leaving because he is to strong. Hopefully this changes slightly because I want to see him grow during his time in the academy, not coast monotonously during the arc.
⭐⭐⭐ 5 star.............................⭐⭐⭐...................................................................................................⭐⭐⭐...⭐⭐⭐
i accidentally bought the most premium tier and paid for all the chapters. i’m mad asf. i’m bout to dispute tf outta this charge. i’ve never even heard of this novel before idek how i got here
Wohhh a breath of fresh air for me lol. Hopefully this keeps up the good writing
elle débute très bien .j'espère que ça sera toujours aussi bien [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.
Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO
Story is really good, so good that I bought the most expensive privilege tier both last month and at the beginning of this month. There have been 4 chapters put out since I bought privilege again. Unfortunately I can’t access any of them and only have access up to chapter 83/97. I don’t know why this is. Idk if the author is trying to stockpile more chapters for the next privilege tier so every “new” chapter is just going towards the next tier. Whatever it is if I don’t get any chapters this month because of it I probably won’t purchase privilege again. If you like the story I’d hold off on purchasing privilege until such a thing is resolved.
great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍
The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.
I wasn’t sure about this when it started as a baby, but it skipped past that fairly quickly and I was pleasantly surprised with the creativity shown in every chapter over read so far (77 of them)
Love it so far almost at privledge- but in dire need of a new discord link please😵💫
I’d say it’s pretty good but as I read this I just don’t feel hooked I don’t get that feeling where I must read the next chapter I just gotta know what’s next or what our mc is gonna do, as well as author if you by chance read this I noticed through the comments people complaining about the mc having a dagger as a main weapon and said a sword was better I don’t know how long you have been on Webnovel but there’s like thousands of novels where the mc has a sword thousands of shows animes where the mc chooses a sword why does it gotta be a sword or a spear (usually always these two weapon selection) what I would say on this is that don’t feel pressured by your readers to have things like a sword you can selfishly say hey I can understand where your coming from or all that but mention that you would like the mc to have a dagger.
I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped
Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.
Enjoying the novel so far but my only concern is that the MC is going to be way to powerful compared to his peers. For example, He has just joined the academy and is already talking about leaving because he is to strong. Hopefully this changes slightly because I want to see him grow during his time in the academy, not coast monotonously during the arc.
⭐⭐⭐ 5 star.............................⭐⭐⭐...................................................................................................⭐⭐⭐...⭐⭐⭐
i accidentally bought the most premium tier and paid for all the chapters. i’m mad asf. i’m bout to dispute tf outta this charge. i’ve never even heard of this novel before idek how i got here
Wohhh a breath of fresh air for me lol. Hopefully this keeps up the good writing
elle débute très bien .j'espère que ça sera toujours aussi bien [img=recommend][img=recommend]
This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.
Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO
Story is really good, so good that I bought the most expensive privilege tier both last month and at the beginning of this month. There have been 4 chapters put out since I bought privilege again. Unfortunately I can’t access any of them and only have access up to chapter 83/97. I don’t know why this is. Idk if the author is trying to stockpile more chapters for the next privilege tier so every “new” chapter is just going towards the next tier. Whatever it is if I don’t get any chapters this month because of it I probably won’t purchase privilege again. If you like the story I’d hold off on purchasing privilege until such a thing is resolved.
great book tbh , enjoyable mc and side characters , i really hope the author does not drop it 👍
The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.