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TsukasaSirius

It is a really great mix of Fantasy and Slice of Life This book is really fun to read. It’s a Fantasy Slice of Life story that feels fresh and relaxing. The pacing is just right—not too fast, not too slow—so it never gets boring or overwhelming. I really like how the characters are written. The relationships between the characters feel natural and enjoyable to follow. The world-building is also great, with lots of nice details that make the story more immersive without being too complicated. The writing is clear and easy to read, with no grammar issues. It’s a light and enjoyable novel, which makes it a nice change from other novels. I wish there were more books like this, with the perfect mix of Fantasy and Slice of Life. If you’re looking for a fun and relaxing read, I highly recommend this one!

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Loyfe
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writing quality is bad, author always elaborates way too much every single thing, mc is behaving like a baby when he's not, accepts his family way too quickly, and a lot of things don't add up, only reading because I want to see how the system evolves

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Vengeful_Dragon

hi I would just like to know if you have dropped this novel?

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Juveny
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sa far enjoying this story. This story has a lot of elements that I liked from other novels I've read. i will mention It has a pacing that at times feels slow while at other times it feels slightly rushed. I'm only on ch 42 and get the feeling that the true story starts here. I may come and leave an updated review after another 40 ch or so.

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HYDRASIR_GAMING

hey author! I have a few questions 1. did you drop this novel [ no uploades for many days(almost a month)] 2. how many fmc and going to be in MC's harem 3.if the novel is on hiatus then when will you start uploading again? *thanks for the reply in advance 🙂*

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MonsterGirlHarem

I love this book. it's well written, it's mostly slice of life up to where I'm currently at which I'm perfectly happy with. there's some good spicy chapters. this is one of my favorite books currently and I will definitely keep reading it until it's completed. and if people start complaining about the content then piss off and read something else.

1mth
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Anish_Deshmukh_4989

@Author: I am struck at ch 194 in web novel and I can not read ch 195. Where can I read ch 195?

1mth
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htaed009

tbh i was excited to read this cause i haven't read a novel with an Elf mc and it started off good, then i read chap 81 and it immediately became kinda generic. For example he got a bloodline that's called the elf god's bloodline which has nothing to do with an elf, it's just the usual seven deadly sins powers that I've seen in plenty of other novels. like the system has been great in giving rewards that makes sense to the characters race and this is the first time it gave an award named after an elf yet has nothing to do with one. So already with seven deadly sins powers we can already guess what they're all about and this takes away the elf part from the system cause what's stopping the system from giving for ex a dragon bloodline and names it mythical elf bloodline like that would make no sense no?

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Santy_Melay

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

2mth
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Bruce_Suchman

I wasn’t sure about this when it started as a baby, but it skipped past that fairly quickly and I was pleasantly surprised with the creativity shown in every chapter over read so far (77 of them)

2mth
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Bobby_Gestrich

Love it so far almost at privledge- but in dire need of a new discord link please😵‍💫

2mth
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Sixx069
LV 15 Badge

I’d say it’s pretty good but as I read this I just don’t feel hooked I don’t get that feeling where I must read the next chapter I just gotta know what’s next or what our mc is gonna do, as well as author if you by chance read this I noticed through the comments people complaining about the mc having a dagger as a main weapon and said a sword was better I don’t know how long you have been on Webnovel but there’s like thousands of novels where the mc has a sword thousands of shows animes where the mc chooses a sword why does it gotta be a sword or a spear (usually always these two weapon selection) what I would say on this is that don’t feel pressured by your readers to have things like a sword you can selfishly say hey I can understand where your coming from or all that but mention that you would like the mc to have a dagger.

2mth
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pusan_chowdhury

very good book must read enjoyed very much

2mth
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Magick
LV 13 Badge

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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ULTIMATE_BEING

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

3mth
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Noguenko

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

3mth
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Z_is_for_Zapdos

Enjoying the novel so far but my only concern is that the MC is going to be way to powerful compared to his peers. For example, He has just joined the academy and is already talking about leaving because he is to strong. Hopefully this changes slightly because I want to see him grow during his time in the academy, not coast monotonously during the arc.

3mth
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Yassine_0928

i lost braincells reading this garbage ,

3mth
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SneedandFeed

Came for the world building stayed for the elf mommies.

3mth
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Brij_Patel_2177

I really like story and character with different background story.

3mth
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Haruto17

can give a link to discord server

3mth
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Axl_Rose_8978

awesome 😎 shit mann.....................

3mth
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DaoistIx99N3

⭐⭐⭐ 5 star.............................⭐⭐⭐...................................................................................................⭐⭐⭐...⭐⭐⭐

3mth
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CodeNCreative

i accidentally bought the most premium tier and paid for all the chapters. i’m mad asf. i’m bout to dispute tf outta this charge. i’ve never even heard of this novel before idek how i got here

3mth
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Michael_Yong_5214

Wohhh a breath of fresh air for me lol. Hopefully this keeps up the good writing

4mth
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Rishav_Yadav_8247

please mia mother is in harem I want author preeeetyy please 🙏 😢 😭 😫 😔

4mth
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Bucky_12

It's a really good slice of life novel

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4mth
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DaoistIFALrd

elle débute très bien .j'espère que ça sera toujours aussi bien [img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
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Karen_Bittar

livro na minha opinião é razoável [img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]

4mth
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Layla_Barlavento

Às vezes a história se perde no caminho.

4mth
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TsukasaSirius

It is a really great mix of Fantasy and Slice of Life This book is really fun to read. It’s a Fantasy Slice of Life story that feels fresh and relaxing. The pacing is just right—not too fast, not too slow—so it never gets boring or overwhelming. I really like how the characters are written. The relationships between the characters feel natural and enjoyable to follow. The world-building is also great, with lots of nice details that make the story more immersive without being too complicated. The writing is clear and easy to read, with no grammar issues. It’s a light and enjoyable novel, which makes it a nice change from other novels. I wish there were more books like this, with the perfect mix of Fantasy and Slice of Life. If you’re looking for a fun and relaxing read, I highly recommend this one!

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8d
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Loyfe
LV 3 Badge

writing quality is bad, author always elaborates way too much every single thing, mc is behaving like a baby when he's not, accepts his family way too quickly, and a lot of things don't add up, only reading because I want to see how the system evolves

12d
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Vengeful_Dragon

hi I would just like to know if you have dropped this novel?

12d
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Juveny
LV 15 Badge

sa far enjoying this story. This story has a lot of elements that I liked from other novels I've read. i will mention It has a pacing that at times feels slow while at other times it feels slightly rushed. I'm only on ch 42 and get the feeling that the true story starts here. I may come and leave an updated review after another 40 ch or so.

19d
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HYDRASIR_GAMING

hey author! I have a few questions 1. did you drop this novel [ no uploades for many days(almost a month)] 2. how many fmc and going to be in MC's harem 3.if the novel is on hiatus then when will you start uploading again? *thanks for the reply in advance 🙂*

28d
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MonsterGirlHarem

I love this book. it's well written, it's mostly slice of life up to where I'm currently at which I'm perfectly happy with. there's some good spicy chapters. this is one of my favorite books currently and I will definitely keep reading it until it's completed. and if people start complaining about the content then piss off and read something else.

1mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Anish_Deshmukh_4989

@Author: I am struck at ch 194 in web novel and I can not read ch 195. Where can I read ch 195?

1mth
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htaed009

tbh i was excited to read this cause i haven't read a novel with an Elf mc and it started off good, then i read chap 81 and it immediately became kinda generic. For example he got a bloodline that's called the elf god's bloodline which has nothing to do with an elf, it's just the usual seven deadly sins powers that I've seen in plenty of other novels. like the system has been great in giving rewards that makes sense to the characters race and this is the first time it gave an award named after an elf yet has nothing to do with one. So already with seven deadly sins powers we can already guess what they're all about and this takes away the elf part from the system cause what's stopping the system from giving for ex a dragon bloodline and names it mythical elf bloodline like that would make no sense no?

Spoiler de révélation
1mth
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Santy_Melay

The novel disgusts me, the reason is, I hate seeing a protagonist behave like a child when mentally he is not one, and the fact that he has accepted his family just like that is super illogical and nonsensical.

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Bruce_Suchman

I wasn’t sure about this when it started as a baby, but it skipped past that fairly quickly and I was pleasantly surprised with the creativity shown in every chapter over read so far (77 of them)

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Bobby_Gestrich

Love it so far almost at privledge- but in dire need of a new discord link please😵‍💫

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Sixx069
LV 15 Badge

I’d say it’s pretty good but as I read this I just don’t feel hooked I don’t get that feeling where I must read the next chapter I just gotta know what’s next or what our mc is gonna do, as well as author if you by chance read this I noticed through the comments people complaining about the mc having a dagger as a main weapon and said a sword was better I don’t know how long you have been on Webnovel but there’s like thousands of novels where the mc has a sword thousands of shows animes where the mc chooses a sword why does it gotta be a sword or a spear (usually always these two weapon selection) what I would say on this is that don’t feel pressured by your readers to have things like a sword you can selfishly say hey I can understand where your coming from or all that but mention that you would like the mc to have a dagger.

2mth
Voir 0 Réponses
pusan_chowdhury

very good book must read enjoyed very much

2mth
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Magick
LV 13 Badge

I really hope you don't drop this novel, just started reading this and it's amazing so far, I'll be sad if it gets dropped

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2mth
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ULTIMATE_BEING

author what happened why are you not updating any ch for last 4 days

3mth
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Noguenko

Review after 163 chapters. I think the quality of writing is very good. The author takes care of the details, which is something to be appreciated. Nothing to say about the updates. The world background is acceptable, although I find it generic. The story development is horrible. The novel is very poorly planned. In the first 83 chapters there are two time jumps, the first of ten years and the second of eight years. These time jumps should not have been so abrupt, because events in those years that are interesting have been lost. Although the author has commented that he will do a flashback arc of the eight-year jump, said arc will only be empty chapters because all the interest has already disappeared. I don't understand why such a rush, because it diminishes the quality of a novel. Instead of jumping several years, he jumps weeks or months. Now, in 83 chapters you have an MC who is too powerful, even his time at the academy is useless. The MC system also seems too powerful. In 163 chapters, the MC hasn't had any difficult challenges. He always solves everything too easily. Attention! If the goal is for the novel to only have 300-500 chapters then I think it's justified to empower the MC so quickly. The character design is also horrible. All characters lack personality. Emotions are not transmitted to the reader through actions or conversations. Final words. I'm glad to read a novel with an elf as the protagonist, I really wanted to read a novel like that. Unfortunately this novel has aspects that have been neglected. To the author. I hope this review can help you improve as a writer. Each person has their own preferences and opinions, and it's impossible to write a novel that everyone likes. Not to mention, it seems like this is your first novel. I'm leaving you with power stones.

3mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Z_is_for_Zapdos

Enjoying the novel so far but my only concern is that the MC is going to be way to powerful compared to his peers. For example, He has just joined the academy and is already talking about leaving because he is to strong. Hopefully this changes slightly because I want to see him grow during his time in the academy, not coast monotonously during the arc.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Yassine_0928

i lost braincells reading this garbage ,

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
SneedandFeed

Came for the world building stayed for the elf mommies.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Brij_Patel_2177

I really like story and character with different background story.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Haruto17

can give a link to discord server

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Axl_Rose_8978

awesome 😎 shit mann.....................

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
DaoistIx99N3

⭐⭐⭐ 5 star.............................⭐⭐⭐...................................................................................................⭐⭐⭐...⭐⭐⭐

3mth
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CodeNCreative

i accidentally bought the most premium tier and paid for all the chapters. i’m mad asf. i’m bout to dispute tf outta this charge. i’ve never even heard of this novel before idek how i got here

3mth
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Michael_Yong_5214

Wohhh a breath of fresh air for me lol. Hopefully this keeps up the good writing

4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Rishav_Yadav_8247

please mia mother is in harem I want author preeeetyy please 🙏 😢 😭 😫 😔

4mth
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Bucky_12

It's a really good slice of life novel

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4mth
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DaoistIFALrd

elle débute très bien .j'espère que ça sera toujours aussi bien [img=recommend][img=recommend]

4mth
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Karen_Bittar

livro na minha opinião é razoável [img=Smitten][img=Smitten][img=Smitten]

4mth
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Layla_Barlavento

Às vezes a história se perde no caminho.

4mth
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