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It was a great read til around chapter 250. After that it’s like the author forgot the title of the novel and what was mentioned previously. I can let small things slide like gender mix ups and name mix ups here n there slip. But adding content that wasn’t even discussed in previous chapters and making it seem like it’s important is really stupid. Go back and rewrite the novel from beginning with a new title if your gonna do that. Seriously it went from goddess secretly gave me triplets to twins so fast and poor mengmeng was forgotten. Bring back Mengmeng! Poor baby :(
The genders always flip, names always mixed up, content forgotten it was already written it’s just garbage don’t waste your time
it was good up to chapter 200 but after that I don't even know what is happening,they now only have 2 children and the little girl is erased,it's reading a new book mid story without any context
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Everything was going well till Chapter 250, it's like the author had an amnesia and started changed everything from the story. The triplets were suddenly gone and only twins remained, the mc's parents, the three nannies, aunt Wang, Fleads mother disappeared, mc's cousin that he was close to suddenly were not talking as much. Just imagine that the story is over after 250, the rest of the chapters are trash after it. Too many inconsistencies.
until 250.... It was good after its starts changing... it is a completely different story and you are charging coins for this??? please return me my coins which I spent on chapters above 250/-. I will also take this as a warning and be on caution and never spend coins in webnovel. even if I do never in bulk. who knows I may get scammed again.
good novel the system any person wants to have in real life ....well, good setting
Great story up until the mid 200s. It's almost like the author mixed up their book notes and ended up blending two different stories. However I truly enjoyed the story up until that point.
I really enjoyed the story up to about chapter 200 and stuck around up to 300 hoping for it to get better, seems like the author revised the beginning and made it better and then gave up. after about chapter 200 characters disappeared, the writing went downhill, the kids are suddenly going to kindergarten and talking at less than a year old and the MC and his wife completely changed. timeline makes no sense and the plot is incomprehensible
This is honestly a great story sadly it is not a story for me. The romantic side could use a little more work but all and all it could very easily be 5 stars.
I'm tired of seeing all these cliche face slapping , unnecessarily dialogue from passerby and unnecessary drama overused in Chinese novels . It ruins a book so much for me
I don't understand why the Mc is being quite when he can finish his enemies and just waiting for his family to be scared . Why does the Mc hide his wealth from the world. why does he keep quite when he is being framed .
i have just reading and this one looks quite promising just keep updating author ,dont drop this
Trash mtl. As always the translation isn't good enough. The characters are bland and terribly written. Also the plot is repetitive and boring af. Author had to add cultivation bullshit in the ordinary slice of life action to keep the story floating. But yeah its terrible, no unique ideas [img=faceslap]
It was a great read til around chapter 250. After that it’s like the author forgot the title of the novel and what was mentioned previously. I can let small things slide like gender mix ups and name mix ups here n there slip. But adding content that wasn’t even discussed in previous chapters and making it seem like it’s important is really stupid. Go back and rewrite the novel from beginning with a new title if your gonna do that. Seriously it went from goddess secretly gave me triplets to twins so fast and poor mengmeng was forgotten. Bring back Mengmeng! Poor baby :(
The genders always flip, names always mixed up, content forgotten it was already written it’s just garbage don’t waste your time
it was good up to chapter 200 but after that I don't even know what is happening,they now only have 2 children and the little girl is erased,it's reading a new book mid story without any context
Spoiler de révélation Everything was going well till Chapter 250, it's like the author had an amnesia and started changed everything from the story. The triplets were suddenly gone and only twins remained, the mc's parents, the three nannies, aunt Wang, Fleads mother disappeared, mc's cousin that he was close to suddenly were not talking as much. Just imagine that the story is over after 250, the rest of the chapters are trash after it. Too many inconsistencies.
until 250.... It was good after its starts changing... it is a completely different story and you are charging coins for this??? please return me my coins which I spent on chapters above 250/-. I will also take this as a warning and be on caution and never spend coins in webnovel. even if I do never in bulk. who knows I may get scammed again.
good novel the system any person wants to have in real life ....well, good setting
Great story up until the mid 200s. It's almost like the author mixed up their book notes and ended up blending two different stories. However I truly enjoyed the story up until that point.
I really enjoyed the story up to about chapter 200 and stuck around up to 300 hoping for it to get better, seems like the author revised the beginning and made it better and then gave up. after about chapter 200 characters disappeared, the writing went downhill, the kids are suddenly going to kindergarten and talking at less than a year old and the MC and his wife completely changed. timeline makes no sense and the plot is incomprehensible
This is honestly a great story sadly it is not a story for me. The romantic side could use a little more work but all and all it could very easily be 5 stars.
I'm tired of seeing all these cliche face slapping , unnecessarily dialogue from passerby and unnecessary drama overused in Chinese novels . It ruins a book so much for me
I don't understand why the Mc is being quite when he can finish his enemies and just waiting for his family to be scared . Why does the Mc hide his wealth from the world. why does he keep quite when he is being framed .
i have just reading and this one looks quite promising just keep updating author ,dont drop this
Trash mtl. As always the translation isn't good enough. The characters are bland and terribly written. Also the plot is repetitive and boring af. Author had to add cultivation bullshit in the ordinary slice of life action to keep the story floating. But yeah its terrible, no unique ideas [img=faceslap]