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Estaria bien que la continuara, nunca e visto una historia de wind breaker que no sea yaoi, y pues no me gusta, ¿alguien sabe de alguna historia?
Can anyone tell me if this fanfic was abandoned by the author???????????¿?????[img=Cries][img=Cries]🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠
Its great writting quality but a few flaws the story is about the same as weak hero gray even won against wolf which IMO shouldn't happen in this verse, another thing the interaction seem rather plain and mc ain't interacting with other characters making it seem like a loading screen where it cuts to the next part( in this novel a fight scene or game) hope author can fix these mistakes and as of now no romance in the story but i'll its 6-7/10 as of now just because the only diffrence is stephans alive and mc fighting the higher people and mc meets the main cast is like a best friends already like next day its like they been friends for years.
As its the early part of this novel, I would like to suggest making the chapters longer. And just imo, it is quite boring till now my man, I can't wait for it to be as exciting as the previous fic.
I so wish there was a good wid breaker fic in this webnovel😭😭[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]
This story is one of my favorite stories,I've been waiting for this story to be continued for a long time since the author decided to go on hiatus approximately 2 years ago more or less,I wasn't disappointed because the author has returned again, and whether it's from the development of the story and characters, this story is very good....It's rare to find a well-written manhwa fanfic story.
Welcome back.Both of your stories were good and there aren't many good fanfics about manhwa stories. I hope both stories continue regularly.By the way, what will be the update frequency?
Estaria bien que la continuara, nunca e visto una historia de wind breaker que no sea yaoi, y pues no me gusta, ¿alguien sabe de alguna historia?
Can anyone tell me if this fanfic was abandoned by the author???????????¿?????[img=Cries][img=Cries]🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠🫠
Its great writting quality but a few flaws the story is about the same as weak hero gray even won against wolf which IMO shouldn't happen in this verse, another thing the interaction seem rather plain and mc ain't interacting with other characters making it seem like a loading screen where it cuts to the next part( in this novel a fight scene or game) hope author can fix these mistakes and as of now no romance in the story but i'll its 6-7/10 as of now just because the only diffrence is stephans alive and mc fighting the higher people and mc meets the main cast is like a best friends already like next day its like they been friends for years.
As its the early part of this novel, I would like to suggest making the chapters longer. And just imo, it is quite boring till now my man, I can't wait for it to be as exciting as the previous fic.
I so wish there was a good wid breaker fic in this webnovel😭😭[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]
This story is one of my favorite stories,I've been waiting for this story to be continued for a long time since the author decided to go on hiatus approximately 2 years ago more or less,I wasn't disappointed because the author has returned again, and whether it's from the development of the story and characters, this story is very good....It's rare to find a well-written manhwa fanfic story.
Welcome back.Both of your stories were good and there aren't many good fanfics about manhwa stories. I hope both stories continue regularly.By the way, what will be the update frequency?
came from the old version. Loved it. Is this dropped?