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storia davvero interessante , soprattutto la crescita del personaggio esplorando varie realtà ... legami non scontati e idee innovative
uma novel de harry potter, onde o protagonista foca em ser um bardo, tendo o poder de entrar em mundos de tempos em tempos e coletar presentes entre outros, ele é selecionado para soncerina e o modo de evolução as pouco está desenvolvendo a personalidade dele e parando de ser apenas um observador, os parceiros deles e a relação com a casa foi bem feita
I was initially interested in the music aspect with how it fits into wizarding world. But this author focuses on the storytelling aspect of a bard rather than the music so i got bored. The world traveling was interesting but the worlds he traveled to where rather boring for me. If he went to more interesting worlds i would have stayed. Im dropping from c152.
Completely unremarkable, it has decent dialogue but everything else is disappointing. For a translation it’s pretty good which is the only reason I’m giving it 3 stars instead of 1. I recommend the first 20 or so chapters so you can decide for yourself if it’s worth more of your time. Ps. The main characters animagus form is a swan wich is just as boring as the rest of the story and the author completely overstates a swans ability which is where I decided to drop it. Mainly because so far the story doesn’t seem to be going anywhere interesting. But for the translators sake I hope it gets better so his work can get more attention because he or she has done a great job with translation and editing and I would rather have more translations be like this in terms westernizing them to be a more enjoyable read without having to correct every sentence in your head.
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I rarely give 5 stars, but this deserves it. Great translation, great writing and I like the MC.
I read around 60 chapters, and my honest opinion about the story would be something around 3.2/5 But I'm giving it a 5 to encourage the continuation of the translation and because it's a good story. About the story itself, we have an MC who flirts between being an EDGYLORD and a GOOD GUY, at least that was my interpretation of him, though I might have misunderstood. There are two main plots: the common storyline at hogwarts and his magic life, there’s no hard protagonist stealing. Harry Potter mantain its main story, the MC just minds his own business, and that’s it. The MC sometimes try be an nice guy helping others, sometimes indiferent and cold. It feels more like he’s a Slytherin pretending to be a good guy at the end of the day. Then there’s the other plot about his journeys through other fantasy stories. In my opinion, they are generally plot ruiners, as nothing really relevant has come from them so far. It gives me the feeling of watching Naruto filler episodes or something like that. I just find it boring. As for the writing or rather the translation, it's fine. Besides that, expect a Chinese romance; it has a slower pace with a lot of environmental detail, variations in points of view, and constant reaffirmations of personalities. In other words, it’s a naturally denser and slower story. That's it. I'll keep reading, and if my view on the story changes, I'll update my feedback.
Yeah, that was amazing, I read it all at once. It's been a while since a fanfic hooked me like that, I simply loved it!! Besides, of course, having great character development, the world-building is also very well done. So far, it hasn't disappointed me.
Probably one of the best translated Chinese novels got rid of all most all Chinese problems with webnovels only found 1 in all 120 chapters I have read so far.
Author, please continue writing this fanfic to its end. Rarely, does one come across such a fascinating and thought provoking Harry Potter story. It’s sense of mystery is what I find the most amazing aspect about it.☺️😊
4.4 MC is smart, though not cunning and cruel, he's your typical MC who does not want to change the storyline as much. The cons for me though are the extra stories of MC going to different worlds, it really turns me off when a fanfic really uses other world/universes and visit them. I rather approve of only using abilities from the other world or universe. But I hope this fan fic will see through its end and not be the same as those unfinished fanfics
Ma encanta esta historias, no es aburrida y te dan ganas de seguir leyendo. La historia del mc como un bardo es muy entretenido , me gusta leer sobre sus cuentos , canciones y aventuras. Espero con ansias el próximo capituló.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
this novel even if its a translate from another fic its good and the translation is good + just asking i wanna know is theres a female lead?
finally, some good fkin food. You won't even know that the original is chinese.
Whoever was the person that said this translation quality is terrible, is way out of pocket. The pacing of the story is good, the character himself is intriguing, though my only criticism in regards to the web novel so far is the main protagonist journeys into these different other fantasy worlds. Like Narnia that seem a bit short/underwhelming.
I honestly cant criticize this story at all, the only thing I would say is that, if you are not comfortable with an MC that really has no particular direction they want to go in, as in, happy to go with the flow and simply let things play out as they would then this novel is not for you. Take this story as more of a slice of life Iseki, lots of introspection with a sprinkling of action here and there. Great work to the Author, and Fantastic work to the Translator, you've done amazing!
man I need more of this one it makes me joyful for the storys and songs are bard tells and sings
a beautifully written story, the word play is quite charming, and the storyline is well crafted, the character is quite good too, Mc is his own personal and not someone changing things to benefit himself, overall it's a good story. not for the author: in the second year try to add some conversations with Luna Lovegood. her role in the story is truly of a background character and with her personality she is a good match for our mc, it can also turn into love later in the story. i would love to see them together. thanks for the great experience of reading this well crafted novel. Raven out.[img=More pls][img=Smug]
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Excellent book always has me asking for more,personally I liked the mc personality quite a bit
It’s a poorly translated and edited chinese novel that has terrible dialogue and decent descriptions. You’re going to be treated like you don’t know Harry Potter as the translation goes into believing your a first time reader of it, pointing out things that are excrutiatungly simple and obvious at wvery turn.
What is the original name? Also your disclaimer means F all when you failed to provide the source.....................................................
Loved It >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...............................................................................
storia davvero interessante , soprattutto la crescita del personaggio esplorando varie realtà ... legami non scontati e idee innovative
uma novel de harry potter, onde o protagonista foca em ser um bardo, tendo o poder de entrar em mundos de tempos em tempos e coletar presentes entre outros, ele é selecionado para soncerina e o modo de evolução as pouco está desenvolvendo a personalidade dele e parando de ser apenas um observador, os parceiros deles e a relação com a casa foi bem feita
I was initially interested in the music aspect with how it fits into wizarding world. But this author focuses on the storytelling aspect of a bard rather than the music so i got bored. The world traveling was interesting but the worlds he traveled to where rather boring for me. If he went to more interesting worlds i would have stayed. Im dropping from c152.
Completely unremarkable, it has decent dialogue but everything else is disappointing. For a translation it’s pretty good which is the only reason I’m giving it 3 stars instead of 1. I recommend the first 20 or so chapters so you can decide for yourself if it’s worth more of your time. Ps. The main characters animagus form is a swan wich is just as boring as the rest of the story and the author completely overstates a swans ability which is where I decided to drop it. Mainly because so far the story doesn’t seem to be going anywhere interesting. But for the translators sake I hope it gets better so his work can get more attention because he or she has done a great job with translation and editing and I would rather have more translations be like this in terms westernizing them to be a more enjoyable read without having to correct every sentence in your head.
Spoiler de révélation I rarely give 5 stars, but this deserves it. Great translation, great writing and I like the MC.
I read around 60 chapters, and my honest opinion about the story would be something around 3.2/5 But I'm giving it a 5 to encourage the continuation of the translation and because it's a good story. About the story itself, we have an MC who flirts between being an EDGYLORD and a GOOD GUY, at least that was my interpretation of him, though I might have misunderstood. There are two main plots: the common storyline at hogwarts and his magic life, there’s no hard protagonist stealing. Harry Potter mantain its main story, the MC just minds his own business, and that’s it. The MC sometimes try be an nice guy helping others, sometimes indiferent and cold. It feels more like he’s a Slytherin pretending to be a good guy at the end of the day. Then there’s the other plot about his journeys through other fantasy stories. In my opinion, they are generally plot ruiners, as nothing really relevant has come from them so far. It gives me the feeling of watching Naruto filler episodes or something like that. I just find it boring. As for the writing or rather the translation, it's fine. Besides that, expect a Chinese romance; it has a slower pace with a lot of environmental detail, variations in points of view, and constant reaffirmations of personalities. In other words, it’s a naturally denser and slower story. That's it. I'll keep reading, and if my view on the story changes, I'll update my feedback.
Yeah, that was amazing, I read it all at once. It's been a while since a fanfic hooked me like that, I simply loved it!! Besides, of course, having great character development, the world-building is also very well done. So far, it hasn't disappointed me.
Probably one of the best translated Chinese novels got rid of all most all Chinese problems with webnovels only found 1 in all 120 chapters I have read so far.
Author, please continue writing this fanfic to its end. Rarely, does one come across such a fascinating and thought provoking Harry Potter story. It’s sense of mystery is what I find the most amazing aspect about it.☺️😊
4.4 MC is smart, though not cunning and cruel, he's your typical MC who does not want to change the storyline as much. The cons for me though are the extra stories of MC going to different worlds, it really turns me off when a fanfic really uses other world/universes and visit them. I rather approve of only using abilities from the other world or universe. But I hope this fan fic will see through its end and not be the same as those unfinished fanfics
Ma encanta esta historias, no es aburrida y te dan ganas de seguir leyendo. La historia del mc como un bardo es muy entretenido , me gusta leer sobre sus cuentos , canciones y aventuras. Espero con ansias el próximo capituló.❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥Good translation. Need More.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
this novel even if its a translate from another fic its good and the translation is good + just asking i wanna know is theres a female lead?
finally, some good fkin food. You won't even know that the original is chinese.
Whoever was the person that said this translation quality is terrible, is way out of pocket. The pacing of the story is good, the character himself is intriguing, though my only criticism in regards to the web novel so far is the main protagonist journeys into these different other fantasy worlds. Like Narnia that seem a bit short/underwhelming.
I honestly cant criticize this story at all, the only thing I would say is that, if you are not comfortable with an MC that really has no particular direction they want to go in, as in, happy to go with the flow and simply let things play out as they would then this novel is not for you. Take this story as more of a slice of life Iseki, lots of introspection with a sprinkling of action here and there. Great work to the Author, and Fantastic work to the Translator, you've done amazing!
man I need more of this one it makes me joyful for the storys and songs are bard tells and sings
a beautifully written story, the word play is quite charming, and the storyline is well crafted, the character is quite good too, Mc is his own personal and not someone changing things to benefit himself, overall it's a good story. not for the author: in the second year try to add some conversations with Luna Lovegood. her role in the story is truly of a background character and with her personality she is a good match for our mc, it can also turn into love later in the story. i would love to see them together. thanks for the great experience of reading this well crafted novel. Raven out.[img=More pls][img=Smug]
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Excellent book always has me asking for more,personally I liked the mc personality quite a bit
It’s a poorly translated and edited chinese novel that has terrible dialogue and decent descriptions. You’re going to be treated like you don’t know Harry Potter as the translation goes into believing your a first time reader of it, pointing out things that are excrutiatungly simple and obvious at wvery turn.
What is the original name? Also your disclaimer means F all when you failed to provide the source.....................................................
Loved It >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>...............................................................................