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This is a great novel with many great characters and an intriguing story, but there's quite a bit of "technically not" cheating/ntr that's just to much for me. I hoped I would get used to it but I didn't. If you think you can handle it then this is a must read in my humble, unbiased and totally not Futa obsessed opinion. And if you can't, trust me and get out. I wish the author the best of luck. Long af review out. ps. Dragongirl best girl
I loved this so much, I got caught up in less than a day. I love the story, the characters, the way the author describes things, the smut…all in all, it’s an amazing story. I really enjoyed how you didn’t make Melisa the only love interest.(the scene with Armia and Isabella😭 was so good) The only thing I hate is how I now have to let it marinate for a while
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Hello, I just want to ask a question before reading this. Is the female lead a futa?
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Super amazing story so far. Her internal struggles for what she wants to do leads a very good development in the story, and the characters' personalities and how they develop are astonishing. Great book, great author. The character design is of course a little cliche, but that doesn't change on how good the story is.
Hello, Author loving the work, and as of writing this, im currently completely caught up. Now im making this review to inform you of a mistake that a friend of mine caught who also enjoys your work. (Tad spoiler for those that haven't read the story yet) So im chapter 30 Syux part Seven you actually mention Javir having a Wand. She shouldn't have a wand then since you later establish the fact that wands do not exist. Figured I should mention this continuity detail. Do with this information as you will. I didn't notice the at first till it was pointed out. I even checked and confirmed that this information is true. Have a great day. I hope you continue writing. Maybe I'll write a real review someday. (This technically counts as my first review on this sight ever, so there's that) Alright, bye, Im rambling now.
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This is a great novel with many great characters and an intriguing story, but there's quite a bit of "technically not" cheating/ntr that's just to much for me. I hoped I would get used to it but I didn't. If you think you can handle it then this is a must read in my humble, unbiased and totally not Futa obsessed opinion. And if you can't, trust me and get out. I wish the author the best of luck. Long af review out. ps. Dragongirl best girl
I loved this so much, I got caught up in less than a day. I love the story, the characters, the way the author describes things, the smut…all in all, it’s an amazing story. I really enjoyed how you didn’t make Melisa the only love interest.(the scene with Armia and Isabella😭 was so good) The only thing I hate is how I now have to let it marinate for a while
Spoiler de révélation Hello, I just want to ask a question before reading this. Is the female lead a futa?
Spoiler de révélation discord.gg/yazarlaransiklopedisi Hello🌺 I'm here on behalf of a writer and reader community with over 2000 members. We invite you to join our almost always active Discord server named "Encyclopedia of Writers," where we have chat, entertainment, books, criticism, and vote-based discussions. We would be delighted to see you among the carefully selected writers and readers in our server. Our community consists of undiscovered and developing writers and qualified readers. Every week, we read and comment on three chapters of a writer's book in turn, five days a week. In our server, there are two optional rounds: "criticism" and "support." During the criticism round, we make an effort to point out where the writer lacks and where they excel. The support round is for members who don't have much time, and reading is not mandatory in this round. We organize competitions on our server and give rewards such as comments and votes to the winners. We also hold a "writer of the month" competition. Currently, in our ever-active server with over 2000 members, we have writers aged 13 to 45, with the majority being between 13 and 30 years old. In our game channels, we play group games like mafia, vampire villager, murder mystery role-play, theater, and various bot games. Every night, members listen to music in the voice channels. To join our server, write down to copy the link above (discord.gg/yazarlaransiklopedisi), paste it on Google, and click on it. If you don't understand how to do it, just ask. Remember, this link never expires, and you can join anytime. You can also click the link from my clipboard.
Spoiler de révélation Super amazing story so far. Her internal struggles for what she wants to do leads a very good development in the story, and the characters' personalities and how they develop are astonishing. Great book, great author. The character design is of course a little cliche, but that doesn't change on how good the story is.
Hello, Author loving the work, and as of writing this, im currently completely caught up. Now im making this review to inform you of a mistake that a friend of mine caught who also enjoys your work. (Tad spoiler for those that haven't read the story yet) So im chapter 30 Syux part Seven you actually mention Javir having a Wand. She shouldn't have a wand then since you later establish the fact that wands do not exist. Figured I should mention this continuity detail. Do with this information as you will. I didn't notice the at first till it was pointed out. I even checked and confirmed that this information is true. Have a great day. I hope you continue writing. Maybe I'll write a real review someday. (This technically counts as my first review on this sight ever, so there's that) Alright, bye, Im rambling now.
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couldn't get past page 2 wishes that weren't worth wishing.