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The overall plot and the character gets better over time. definitely give the novel a chance
A nice start to a part of the characters development, I like how the author depicts the difficulty, and how even the protagonist must put in the concerted effort to move forward in his own progress.
A good story that slowly develops its protagonist in a way that shows the struggle and persverance needed. I look forward to reading more of the story the author writes up
I like to read on the computer, so my hours aren't counted, which is sad, but I truly appreciate this author! I definitely recommend reading it, mainly because of the world-building!
This author really works hard to bring out something of high quality! Well done, mister RVN, keep bringing great original novels! [img=proud]
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I wanted to find the right words for how much I like this author and teammate, I recommend you read everything as quickly as possible, a beautiful work
Happy to see the Author with a new book. My hopes are set high because of his previous work.
Sounds promising, knowing that the author rarely disappoints ! I will wait until there are at least 50 chapters to binge-read them.
I have read RVN_1998 novels for years now so this young master can safely guarantee the quality of this new book.
So, it’s been a month since I started this novel and now I have a clearer picture of what’s happening. This is a story about a careful character. He won’t always take the best path, ‘cause we don’t always have that choice. But he’ll carefully consider each step. He knows exactly what he wants and what he needs to do, even if it means going through a tough path. There will be no NTR or any form of betrayal among the women in the MC’s harem, but understand that the harem won’t form instantly. It will take some time. However, there will be plenty of spicy chapters before that happens. We’ll slowly uncover some mysteries and explore the advantages of his reincarnation and past life memories as the story progresses. I suggest checking out the first 20 chapters before jumping to conclusions about this story. That’s the bare minimum to understand what this story is about, I think. If you have questions, feel free to ask them directly in the chapters or paragraphs of the novel. Additionally, if you need any representation of the characters or have any requests for representation, I encourage you to join our community on Disc*rd. You can find the invitation link on my profile.
Spoiler de révélation The overall plot and the character gets better over time. definitely give the novel a chance
A nice start to a part of the characters development, I like how the author depicts the difficulty, and how even the protagonist must put in the concerted effort to move forward in his own progress.
A good story that slowly develops its protagonist in a way that shows the struggle and persverance needed. I look forward to reading more of the story the author writes up
I like to read on the computer, so my hours aren't counted, which is sad, but I truly appreciate this author! I definitely recommend reading it, mainly because of the world-building!
This author really works hard to bring out something of high quality! Well done, mister RVN, keep bringing great original novels! [img=proud]
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I wanted to find the right words for how much I like this author and teammate, I recommend you read everything as quickly as possible, a beautiful work
Happy to see the Author with a new book. My hopes are set high because of his previous work.
Sounds promising, knowing that the author rarely disappoints ! I will wait until there are at least 50 chapters to binge-read them.
I have read RVN_1998 novels for years now so this young master can safely guarantee the quality of this new book.
So, it’s been a month since I started this novel and now I have a clearer picture of what’s happening. This is a story about a careful character. He won’t always take the best path, ‘cause we don’t always have that choice. But he’ll carefully consider each step. He knows exactly what he wants and what he needs to do, even if it means going through a tough path. There will be no NTR or any form of betrayal among the women in the MC’s harem, but understand that the harem won’t form instantly. It will take some time. However, there will be plenty of spicy chapters before that happens. We’ll slowly uncover some mysteries and explore the advantages of his reincarnation and past life memories as the story progresses. I suggest checking out the first 20 chapters before jumping to conclusions about this story. That’s the bare minimum to understand what this story is about, I think. If you have questions, feel free to ask them directly in the chapters or paragraphs of the novel. Additionally, if you need any representation of the characters or have any requests for representation, I encourage you to join our community on Disc*rd. You can find the invitation link on my profile.
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