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The story has great potential but I'm not sure, maybe it's the pacing, feels like it's a bit slow or very little is happening Hope it gets better moving on
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
Oh, I loved the suspense this story is giving me. The character of Dan was somewhat rebellious yet smart-willed. I loved the way the plot moves from the description of the setting, to the thrill it was heading. A great start for me after reading the piloting chapters. Good job, Sir.
Yo! 🙂 Shameless author review here I'll give a brief explanation on everything starting from the character down to the world itself. And by the way you all can use this section as a Q&A section What's the story about? The story talks about a boy named Dan who has a strong will to find his mother. Along the line he experienced lots of tragic moments that ended up changing his goals, dreams and his personality, but regardless he still has the strong desire to find his missing mother What kind of person is Dan? Dan is a charismatic character who just finds a way to surround himself with power houses, it isn't luck but fate. He is slow and dumb when it comes to stuff like romance, although that was due to the kind of childhood he had. He avoids getting to close to people, a trauma he got while growing. And lastly his hunger for strength is eminent. Will Dan be overpowered? No he will not be overpowered but he will be strong. If you read the first chapter (Understanding Ryo) you should know how the power system works, and in order to be overpowered in this world you have to learn at least three types of Ryo control and remembered Dan is a Catalyst so it's close to impossible, Nothing is impossible. Will there be Romance or Harem? There won't be Harem, but as for Romance yes but not just for Dan, you can blame him he is a loyal Mf. What kind of world is this? The current time is around the early modern era. They are not much technologies, at the same time they are not that back in time. And lastly, you should read this novel, it might have some depressing moments but believe me you won't regret it
The story has great potential but I'm not sure, maybe it's the pacing, feels like it's a bit slow or very little is happening Hope it gets better moving on
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
Oh, I loved the suspense this story is giving me. The character of Dan was somewhat rebellious yet smart-willed. I loved the way the plot moves from the description of the setting, to the thrill it was heading. A great start for me after reading the piloting chapters. Good job, Sir.
Yo! 🙂 Shameless author review here I'll give a brief explanation on everything starting from the character down to the world itself. And by the way you all can use this section as a Q&A section What's the story about? The story talks about a boy named Dan who has a strong will to find his mother. Along the line he experienced lots of tragic moments that ended up changing his goals, dreams and his personality, but regardless he still has the strong desire to find his missing mother What kind of person is Dan? Dan is a charismatic character who just finds a way to surround himself with power houses, it isn't luck but fate. He is slow and dumb when it comes to stuff like romance, although that was due to the kind of childhood he had. He avoids getting to close to people, a trauma he got while growing. And lastly his hunger for strength is eminent. Will Dan be overpowered? No he will not be overpowered but he will be strong. If you read the first chapter (Understanding Ryo) you should know how the power system works, and in order to be overpowered in this world you have to learn at least three types of Ryo control and remembered Dan is a Catalyst so it's close to impossible, Nothing is impossible. Will there be Romance or Harem? There won't be Harem, but as for Romance yes but not just for Dan, you can blame him he is a loyal Mf. What kind of world is this? The current time is around the early modern era. They are not much technologies, at the same time they are not that back in time. And lastly, you should read this novel, it might have some depressing moments but believe me you won't regret it