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havent even read douluo but this is very interesting to read , the author is either talented or hard working or maybe both , need more chaps !
amazing lemon more please..................................................................................................................................
Well, I never seen such a true dark character, quite new to me……………………,………………………………………..👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤
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Bro i just loved your work I mean really I have read other fanfic but none of them can be compared to your work. So just keep up the work I was really waiting for your next chapter on this and I'm glad to hear that you are back
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First of all, I'm glad he wasn't hit by a car. Secondly, it is worth noting that the hero is an old man with a traumatic experience, there will most likely be no fundamental development of the character, and there is also a completely reasonable reason why he behaves this way. Thirdly, I'm a little happy for the sexual content, but it's a little more realistic than a 10-12 year old guy who creates an organization under the noses of some of the most powerful figures, in reality it's simply unrealistic to create any organization without the approval of powerful "relatives". I like MC, it would be interesting to watch him in a world like Reverend Madness, about 800k or even a million years before the canon began.
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It is a very logical and selfish mc that plans for the future and makes mistakes but that is the fun part, to see how he navigates through these problems that occur on his journey. I love how determined he is and how cunning and ruthless he can become. Even thought I didn't like the amount of sexual content in the novel it should be lower than 4.8 ⭐ I would like to thank the author for the amount of effort he is putting in this book and I like how he can take criticism on his book 😁😁😁😁
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Awesome MC 😈👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿
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havent even read douluo but this is very interesting to read , the author is either talented or hard working or maybe both , need more chaps !
amazing lemon more please..................................................................................................................................
Well, I never seen such a true dark character, quite new to me……………………,………………………………………..👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤👤
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Bro i just loved your work I mean really I have read other fanfic but none of them can be compared to your work. So just keep up the work I was really waiting for your next chapter on this and I'm glad to hear that you are back
Me gustó. . .........................................................................................................................después me pongo al tanto ajetreo y a muchos que 🤔 🤷 🙄 😐 🙃 🤦 800x600 888888888888888888888888888888888888888888⁸8888888888888888888888888888888888888888898988888888888888888888888888888888888889888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888888 . . . .
First of all, I'm glad he wasn't hit by a car. Secondly, it is worth noting that the hero is an old man with a traumatic experience, there will most likely be no fundamental development of the character, and there is also a completely reasonable reason why he behaves this way. Thirdly, I'm a little happy for the sexual content, but it's a little more realistic than a 10-12 year old guy who creates an organization under the noses of some of the most powerful figures, in reality it's simply unrealistic to create any organization without the approval of powerful "relatives". I like MC, it would be interesting to watch him in a world like Reverend Madness, about 800k or even a million years before the canon began.
Spoiler de révélation It is a very logical and selfish mc that plans for the future and makes mistakes but that is the fun part, to see how he navigates through these problems that occur on his journey. I love how determined he is and how cunning and ruthless he can become. Even thought I didn't like the amount of sexual content in the novel it should be lower than 4.8 ⭐ I would like to thank the author for the amount of effort he is putting in this book and I like how he can take criticism on his book 😁😁😁😁
Spoiler de révélation Mmm........................................... .....................................................................................................................................
Chap49...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation .............. ................. Great, keep up the good work....................................................................... ... ..............
Awesome MC 😈👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿👿
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