3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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Thrilling story line and nice character development but I think you should work on your update frequency, can't wait for next chapter[img=coins]
I love the story flow, intense action and intriguing plot twists, flawless but I still think the writer should work on his long paragraphs and condense some sentences[img=coins]
It has a great storyline but each chapter is too short. i think author can make changes to that👍👍
Thrilling story line and nice character development but I think you should work on your update frequency, can't wait for next chapter[img=coins]
I love the story flow, intense action and intriguing plot twists, flawless but I still think the writer should work on his long paragraphs and condense some sentences[img=coins]
It has a great storyline but each chapter is too short. i think author can make changes to that👍👍