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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
OK, so I have read all the way to chapter 87, and all I can say is why. why did the girls have to die just like that? Do they come back? i see the system in the Tage, so maybe through that, but if not, I don't think I can continue. I hope ur story works out, though
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Well,to be honest,early story is good,Its not really that bad in the middle,but i think,this story is good for me.I was hoping you could detail more on certain part.Just my personal review,i think it worth unlock the chapter.By the way,keep up the work.
The starting is good.In the middle,so so,but the more i read,its getting better.I love they way you create a part where his lover dead.And i love how Ryo,your main character become after that.I like it when you make your character become aware on how selfish human can be on the zombie appocalypse.Well i was hoping this story getting better and better.Dont dissapoint me.
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
The start was nice, the background was actually interesting for me but the chapters were so short, and most of them were like fillers that you could skip and it won’t affect the story. The dialog of the characters were boring. Sorry but this is not for me. I wish you good luck author. I hope you improve and if possible you can rewrite the novel when that time comes.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
Hard to read. I sense chat gpt or some grammar AI. Not enough dialogue that brings any life to the story. I literally skimmed several chapters and only found the MC slightly talking to himself. Story itself may be good but it needs dialogue and edits. Also a ton of repeated information thats annoying to read. Honest thoughts.
Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
OK, so I have read all the way to chapter 87, and all I can say is why. why did the girls have to die just like that? Do they come back? i see the system in the Tage, so maybe through that, but if not, I don't think I can continue. I hope ur story works out, though
Spoiler de révélation Well,to be honest,early story is good,Its not really that bad in the middle,but i think,this story is good for me.I was hoping you could detail more on certain part.Just my personal review,i think it worth unlock the chapter.By the way,keep up the work.
The starting is good.In the middle,so so,but the more i read,its getting better.I love they way you create a part where his lover dead.And i love how Ryo,your main character become after that.I like it when you make your character become aware on how selfish human can be on the zombie appocalypse.Well i was hoping this story getting better and better.Dont dissapoint me.
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
The start was nice, the background was actually interesting for me but the chapters were so short, and most of them were like fillers that you could skip and it won’t affect the story. The dialog of the characters were boring. Sorry but this is not for me. I wish you good luck author. I hope you improve and if possible you can rewrite the novel when that time comes.
I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~
Hard to read. I sense chat gpt or some grammar AI. Not enough dialogue that brings any life to the story. I literally skimmed several chapters and only found the MC slightly talking to himself. Story itself may be good but it needs dialogue and edits. Also a ton of repeated information thats annoying to read. Honest thoughts.