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- Développement de l’histoire
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hello I'm going to abandon fanfiction, there are more interesting fanfictions and more work. This one really has nothing going for her. the only thing that was good was the fact that it didn't start at the beginning of the series with rick like most fanfictions. but the writing style is below average although correct I hear. the character has nothing going for him except that he knows what is going to happen which is not what super soldier has, he does not have an inventory system or even just special skills. if I had to reincarnate in such a world I wouldn't want it to be without anything without bonus
Meio lento até agora, mais gosto da abordagens de pegar um personagem diferente do normal. E o fato de começar em lugar diferente da pedreira realmente é bom
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hello I'm going to abandon fanfiction, there are more interesting fanfictions and more work. This one really has nothing going for her. the only thing that was good was the fact that it didn't start at the beginning of the series with rick like most fanfictions. but the writing style is below average although correct I hear. the character has nothing going for him except that he knows what is going to happen which is not what super soldier has, he does not have an inventory system or even just special skills. if I had to reincarnate in such a world I wouldn't want it to be without anything without bonus
Meio lento até agora, mais gosto da abordagens de pegar um personagem diferente do normal. E o fato de começar em lugar diferente da pedreira realmente é bom