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ParodyGirl

If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.

8mth
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Ivan_C_4233

Really tried getting into this story but main goddess (Hestia) is very OCC and not in a good way unfortunately. It just keeps distracting from the story everytime she acts out of character which has been everytime she is on screen.

9d
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Ruan_Gabriel_8927

I wonder if the protagonist will also have a cool lore in this world literally to be able to explain the powersI could make him a succubus, you know?it would be fucking awesome

22d
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Zarion116

It’s good. If you want smutty danmachi fanfic with all spice you need. Then you found it.

3mth
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Elvenerable

If I'm honest the only good thing is the lemon scenes, the rest like character development and so on in general is short, damn it, I've seen better ones, if you want an example, read Marvel's impregnation system, I won't say that this one has potential or something is good In reality, the only good thing it has is that the protagonist is not an idiot and knows what he wants, besides that, nothing

3mth
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Zarion116

I need 1000 more chapters of this. Please please please please. This fanfic hits the spot. It’s got a decent protagonist. Used the source material well…in my opinion.

4mth
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Igronaft

I like everything, I’ve read up to 40 chapters, just please add sperm control to the main character’s system, more precisely pregnancy control.)

5mth
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NanoLOA

Letting it marinate some more, if it’s anything like the last version I don’t doubt it’ll be a good read.

5mth
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Drunk_Hermit

Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute

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5mth
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Raja_Sihir

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6mth
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Aris82
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this danmanchi fanfiction is very good. even without the smut part. so try this one to thoose interested.

6mth
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_elensar_

If you are a fan of Danmachi and like to read an alternative version, this is your story :)

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Nova255

before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea

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7mth
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Katanexy

I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)

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7mth
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Lord_Azathoth

Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅

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7mth
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Kronos_
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A great story with good development, I guarantee you won't regret it hehe

7mth
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Railson_Mateus

Bem melhor que a versao anterior. Nao que fosse ruim, mas realmente a parada de controle da mente e chato pra caralho. Ansioso pra quando aisha descobri a gravidez.

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
applo43
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okay let's see what we got here...........

8mth
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Kyaa_
LV 4 Badge

You know what would be funny? If he bangs Bell’s Aunt

8mth
Voir 5 Réponses
SoloMorn

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8mth
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MajiSeason2

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8mth
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Insert_Here

I mean it is kind of mandatory to give this 5 stars 💯💯💯[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

8mth
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IgorRSAWs

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8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Artoriapendraragon

way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺

8mth
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LORD_SHADOOW

Why did i give a five?? Because its an obligation 😤

8mth
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Arnab_Panday

A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?

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8mth
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Takumoto

Thanks for the re-writing!!

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
ParodyGirl

If you liked the previous version, I'll try to make even more chapters smu*s in this version. Be prepared!!! I'll also try to make the story more entertaining and with decent interaction between the characters. It's not certain that I'll manage that, but I'll try.

8mth
Voir 25 Réponses
Ivan_C_4233

Really tried getting into this story but main goddess (Hestia) is very OCC and not in a good way unfortunately. It just keeps distracting from the story everytime she acts out of character which has been everytime she is on screen.

9d
Voir 0 Réponses
Ruan_Gabriel_8927

I wonder if the protagonist will also have a cool lore in this world literally to be able to explain the powersI could make him a succubus, you know?it would be fucking awesome

22d
Voir 0 Réponses
Zarion116

It’s good. If you want smutty danmachi fanfic with all spice you need. Then you found it.

3mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Elvenerable

If I'm honest the only good thing is the lemon scenes, the rest like character development and so on in general is short, damn it, I've seen better ones, if you want an example, read Marvel's impregnation system, I won't say that this one has potential or something is good In reality, the only good thing it has is that the protagonist is not an idiot and knows what he wants, besides that, nothing

3mth
Voir 3 Réponses
Zarion116

I need 1000 more chapters of this. Please please please please. This fanfic hits the spot. It’s got a decent protagonist. Used the source material well…in my opinion.

4mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Igronaft

I like everything, I’ve read up to 40 chapters, just please add sperm control to the main character’s system, more precisely pregnancy control.)

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
NanoLOA

Letting it marinate some more, if it’s anything like the last version I don’t doubt it’ll be a good read.

5mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Drunk_Hermit

Great potential until... 1. let's eat out a prostitute 2 i got a prostitute pregnant 3 the prostitute 's part of my harem but it's still a prostitute

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5mth
Voir 13 Réponses
Raja_Sihir

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6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Aris82
LV 15 Badge

this danmanchi fanfiction is very good. even without the smut part. so try this one to thoose interested.

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
_elensar_

If you are a fan of Danmachi and like to read an alternative version, this is your story :)

6mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Nova255

before i start reading this. i just have one question is the MC a beta and submissive and get push around like the last novel?. because if it is this is not my cup of tea

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7mth
Voir 4 Réponses
Katanexy

I've known the author for a while (as a close friend) and I know how hard he works! So 5 stars! (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o) (o_o)

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7mth
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Lord_Azathoth

Baby, it's Sunday!!! 40 chapters accumulated... Gonna read’em all.🔥🔥🔥 I hope you've impregnated some good ones in this story...😅

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7mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Kronos_
LV 13 Badge

A great story with good development, I guarantee you won't regret it hehe

7mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Railson_Mateus

Bem melhor que a versao anterior. Nao que fosse ruim, mas realmente a parada de controle da mente e chato pra caralho. Ansioso pra quando aisha descobri a gravidez.

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
applo43
LV 14 Badge

okay let's see what we got here...........

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Kyaa_
LV 4 Badge

You know what would be funny? If he bangs Bell’s Aunt

8mth
Voir 5 Réponses
SoloMorn

thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks

8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
MajiSeason2

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8mth
Voir 0 Réponses
Insert_Here

I mean it is kind of mandatory to give this 5 stars 💯💯💯[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
IgorRSAWs

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8mth
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Artoriapendraragon

way better than last fic you write also I'm rooting for Freya aswell please make it happen 🥺🥺🥺

8mth
Voir 5 Réponses
LORD_SHADOOW

Why did i give a five?? Because its an obligation 😤

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses
Arnab_Panday

A full 5 star from me. Hope it will be as enjoyable as the previous one and maybe more. I think you should make the MC a bit more positive or at least not villain. And definitely not mind control. Also, maybe increase the word count per chapter?

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8mth
Voir 3 Réponses
Takumoto

Thanks for the re-writing!!

8mth
Voir 1 Réponses