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MC просто повністю руйнує інакше ідеально міцну фантастику 4/5-4.5/5, його особистість просто сміття, щоб навіть вважати цю фантастику вартою уваги занадто дитячою та некомпетентною, це все одно, що читати старі фантастики Chuuni MC початку 2010-х, де кожен Натомість MC мав бути гострим, а сьогодні це безглузді наполовину написані MC, які думають лише низькою головою, і їм абсолютно й зовсім не вдається зацікавити чи привернути увагу. Цей фік у його поточному стані є повним сміттям, потребує переписування, а MC, який читачі могли б Насправді зацікавтеся не марнотратством, MC зараз пише добре, оновлення непогані, і це Marvel, тому про це гарний світ, щоб писати, але ні, я не бачу жодної форми чи форми, щоб я коли-небудь захотів підтримати цей фік не витрачайте час, є кращі фішки Smut із нейтральними чи злими MC, де MC насправді цікаві чи зрозумілі ніколи не розумів, чому автори хочуть псувати свої власні фішки, як це, це марна трата часу
Dear my fellow readers. This has gotta be the number 1 fanfic with an interesting concept I’ve read since spider man 0x but this time I need pictures of Ricky Luciano get me pictures of Ricky Luciano lol. But seriously my 1-10 ratings are this World building- 10 MC- 9.5 Smut scenes- 9 and only cause personally could include the balls more lol And Plot- 10 cause can’t put this fanfic down Characters interactions - 10
It starts off with the MC being a jerk, but after 4 years of reading fanfics I consider this one of the best character developments I've ever seen.
Don't see any marvel thing in 20 chapters or i just missed it cause it uas so little mentioned
The name doesn't do it justice. Yea there's plenty of great smut and the system rewards things based on that, but this novel is much more than that. The MC character is great. I don't mean that as in him being chivalrous, honorable, steadfast, etc. It's the opposite actually, and that is the reason for many bad reviews. He has a lot of flaws, but he is very fleshed out, and the way he acts and interacts with others is natural and chaotically entertaining even if I dislike how he acts sometimes. Most importantly we slowly learn why he acts in the way he does and the world doesn't just work in his favor regardless, so he gets smacked some hard lessons in the face that force him to grow. And it's very satisfying. The character interactions and dialogues are great. The struggles are well done. The supernatural elements of marvel slowly gets introduced and the fights are exciting. The chapters tend to be very long too.
Writing another review mostly just to boost this amazing story even more… But just wow. The latest chapter further reaffirming Slicks character growth just hit me. 130 Powerstones in and i feel like i have to do at least 100 more now.
Never in my life have I related more to a MC. This story is not what I thought it’d end of being? And it gets better. It’s written beautifully givin real Tarantino vibes. If you also have a weird itch in your brain urging you to run away from your problems give this bad boy a read
It's a great story. I recommend that you endure the first chapter and then the story really opens up. Many thanks to the author for his work!)
Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10 Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10
Finally after 70 chapters the MC has changed. Don't get me wrong he is so entertaining to watch but seeing the guy fall into the same pit falls every single time even when he's trying his best in recent chapters was hardening. But now, we finally had a flashback on why Ricky always runs away from his problems. And it's understandable, trauma is hard to deal with. If y'all can read a past chapter 70 it is worth seeing Ricky change for the better. The Author's best traits is his World building and how well he can flesh out characters. If first person, harem, complex World building and relatable characters is up your alley then yes, this is good for you.
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When I first started to read this I thought it would be just another fun story I could turn my brain off to. I have never been so glad that I’ve been so wrong. Love the character development most of all.
I didn't like MC personality at the start, but he got some character development in the latest chapters. TBH one if not the best fanfic I read I hope author will finish it
The development of the story, the sequence, the plot is a little complicated to read, that doesn't mean it's bad. To be more specific, it is the plot detours, which are like those in a mystery and detective book, that force my brain to work harder and therefore tire it more. MMMMM... In the last chapters, characters from the Marvel Universe begin to appear, which causes me concern because everything that involves the Marvel and DC universes is terribly confusing.
Really well written. I was gonna skip from the title, but when I saw the reviews , I gave it a go and it didn't disappoint. The story has a funny, chaotic tone with some deep stuff. Not to mention the namesake adding extra spice. Author really cooked well with this one. Really loved a different concept of mc compared to the regular tropes.
Story was good in the start but even the author didn't know how to continue it and just goes with the flow. The only thing related to marvel is that the mc and his some friends are the mutant and everybody hate mutants and currently the story is going into other direction, it's definitely not marvel cinematic and comics universe, author is just changing the world background as he like so i am dropping.
overall great story, my only problem is the main character who always frustrates me, cause he was made super idiot, stupid, and dumb yet super lucky, more so when i can barely see any growth to his intelligence.
Good stuff. The patience was worth it reading through all that while almost wanting to punch the damn MC but boy was I wrong Character Development going good Adding unnecessary stuff cause of the damn restriction of 40 words and again Good Stuff 🤌 P.S. Writing this for the second time cause spelling mistakes (autocorrect ain't doing it's job for some reason)
Definetly not just another smut fic. Marvel is just the cherry on top. Although MC is very scummy, author is clearly cooking My only concern is how the system is pushing him to stay scum
I really liked this fanfic, although I thought it would have more names that I know It's understandable since it takes place in 1920 or around that time and the only known one was Captain America or Wolverine when the war happened. The story is very good and the progression too. In the female characters the only one I know is Raven Darkholme, but there are images at hand to imagine them well. The MC is evil and lustful, I love that, although the evil thing is that he is too impulsive and childish. But I like how he matures with the passage of time, especially after the death of... In short, if you like the tags and the description along with the image on the cover, don't hesitate and read some chapters, I think you won't regret it
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One of best fanfic I have ever read , Mc was a pretty vile bastard in his last life due to "reasons" and he is changing slowly and becoming more likeable as the story goes one . Very well written , though till now ....there are close to zero stuff from marvel and first volume is based on a crime mafia family instead but still very enjoyable. Side characters are pretty interesting as well , only gripe of mine is that he doesn't use his powers much till now. Hopefully we will see him fighting with his powers and op weapons soon...
first of all, woah seeing the titlen I first though it would be another stupid harem fanfic without any plot but damn the author is a monster. Slick, our mc is a piece of trash with a truckload of trauma we see change throughout the chapters and masterfully done, particularly here in the black knight arc. The story takes its time to set itself without drowning us with marvel characters left and right which i appreciate. One of the best fanfic i've read. chef's kiss to the author
at first I really thought it would be just another smut novel on webnovel .... that why I stopped reading when there's only smut and no development.... but now you prove me wrong author-min there's finally some character development and the background story is progressing... keep up the good work author ;)
i will be honest this book is amazing the character while horrible is slowly growing and as he loses everything he is realizing his mistakes and learning from them he is slowly growing and becoming a better person. Another point is that the character is realistic he is gradually growing. the story is entertaining and fun. the world building is really really good overall an amazing book the author is amazing he is really talented. thank you for the book author
Spoiler de révélation
The first volume of theis story is good but can be rather frustrating... But the second volume is incredible!!! Stick with it and you won't regret it! seriously amazing writing!
MC просто повністю руйнує інакше ідеально міцну фантастику 4/5-4.5/5, його особистість просто сміття, щоб навіть вважати цю фантастику вартою уваги занадто дитячою та некомпетентною, це все одно, що читати старі фантастики Chuuni MC початку 2010-х, де кожен Натомість MC мав бути гострим, а сьогодні це безглузді наполовину написані MC, які думають лише низькою головою, і їм абсолютно й зовсім не вдається зацікавити чи привернути увагу. Цей фік у його поточному стані є повним сміттям, потребує переписування, а MC, який читачі могли б Насправді зацікавтеся не марнотратством, MC зараз пише добре, оновлення непогані, і це Marvel, тому про це гарний світ, щоб писати, але ні, я не бачу жодної форми чи форми, щоб я коли-небудь захотів підтримати цей фік не витрачайте час, є кращі фішки Smut із нейтральними чи злими MC, де MC насправді цікаві чи зрозумілі ніколи не розумів, чому автори хочуть псувати свої власні фішки, як це, це марна трата часу
Dear my fellow readers. This has gotta be the number 1 fanfic with an interesting concept I’ve read since spider man 0x but this time I need pictures of Ricky Luciano get me pictures of Ricky Luciano lol. But seriously my 1-10 ratings are this World building- 10 MC- 9.5 Smut scenes- 9 and only cause personally could include the balls more lol And Plot- 10 cause can’t put this fanfic down Characters interactions - 10
It starts off with the MC being a jerk, but after 4 years of reading fanfics I consider this one of the best character developments I've ever seen.
Don't see any marvel thing in 20 chapters or i just missed it cause it uas so little mentioned
The name doesn't do it justice. Yea there's plenty of great smut and the system rewards things based on that, but this novel is much more than that. The MC character is great. I don't mean that as in him being chivalrous, honorable, steadfast, etc. It's the opposite actually, and that is the reason for many bad reviews. He has a lot of flaws, but he is very fleshed out, and the way he acts and interacts with others is natural and chaotically entertaining even if I dislike how he acts sometimes. Most importantly we slowly learn why he acts in the way he does and the world doesn't just work in his favor regardless, so he gets smacked some hard lessons in the face that force him to grow. And it's very satisfying. The character interactions and dialogues are great. The struggles are well done. The supernatural elements of marvel slowly gets introduced and the fights are exciting. The chapters tend to be very long too.
Writing another review mostly just to boost this amazing story even more… But just wow. The latest chapter further reaffirming Slicks character growth just hit me. 130 Powerstones in and i feel like i have to do at least 100 more now.
Never in my life have I related more to a MC. This story is not what I thought it’d end of being? And it gets better. It’s written beautifully givin real Tarantino vibes. If you also have a weird itch in your brain urging you to run away from your problems give this bad boy a read
It's a great story. I recommend that you endure the first chapter and then the story really opens up. Many thanks to the author for his work!)
Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10 Damn, it's been a long time since a story made me cry like a little girl. This is the best thing I've read in a long time, 10/10
Finally after 70 chapters the MC has changed. Don't get me wrong he is so entertaining to watch but seeing the guy fall into the same pit falls every single time even when he's trying his best in recent chapters was hardening. But now, we finally had a flashback on why Ricky always runs away from his problems. And it's understandable, trauma is hard to deal with. If y'all can read a past chapter 70 it is worth seeing Ricky change for the better. The Author's best traits is his World building and how well he can flesh out characters. If first person, harem, complex World building and relatable characters is up your alley then yes, this is good for you.
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When I first started to read this I thought it would be just another fun story I could turn my brain off to. I have never been so glad that I’ve been so wrong. Love the character development most of all.
I didn't like MC personality at the start, but he got some character development in the latest chapters. TBH one if not the best fanfic I read I hope author will finish it
The development of the story, the sequence, the plot is a little complicated to read, that doesn't mean it's bad. To be more specific, it is the plot detours, which are like those in a mystery and detective book, that force my brain to work harder and therefore tire it more. MMMMM... In the last chapters, characters from the Marvel Universe begin to appear, which causes me concern because everything that involves the Marvel and DC universes is terribly confusing.
Really well written. I was gonna skip from the title, but when I saw the reviews , I gave it a go and it didn't disappoint. The story has a funny, chaotic tone with some deep stuff. Not to mention the namesake adding extra spice. Author really cooked well with this one. Really loved a different concept of mc compared to the regular tropes.
Story was good in the start but even the author didn't know how to continue it and just goes with the flow. The only thing related to marvel is that the mc and his some friends are the mutant and everybody hate mutants and currently the story is going into other direction, it's definitely not marvel cinematic and comics universe, author is just changing the world background as he like so i am dropping.
overall great story, my only problem is the main character who always frustrates me, cause he was made super idiot, stupid, and dumb yet super lucky, more so when i can barely see any growth to his intelligence.
Good stuff. The patience was worth it reading through all that while almost wanting to punch the damn MC but boy was I wrong Character Development going good Adding unnecessary stuff cause of the damn restriction of 40 words and again Good Stuff 🤌 P.S. Writing this for the second time cause spelling mistakes (autocorrect ain't doing it's job for some reason)
Definetly not just another smut fic. Marvel is just the cherry on top. Although MC is very scummy, author is clearly cooking My only concern is how the system is pushing him to stay scum
I really liked this fanfic, although I thought it would have more names that I know It's understandable since it takes place in 1920 or around that time and the only known one was Captain America or Wolverine when the war happened. The story is very good and the progression too. In the female characters the only one I know is Raven Darkholme, but there are images at hand to imagine them well. The MC is evil and lustful, I love that, although the evil thing is that he is too impulsive and childish. But I like how he matures with the passage of time, especially after the death of... In short, if you like the tags and the description along with the image on the cover, don't hesitate and read some chapters, I think you won't regret it
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One of best fanfic I have ever read , Mc was a pretty vile bastard in his last life due to "reasons" and he is changing slowly and becoming more likeable as the story goes one . Very well written , though till now ....there are close to zero stuff from marvel and first volume is based on a crime mafia family instead but still very enjoyable. Side characters are pretty interesting as well , only gripe of mine is that he doesn't use his powers much till now. Hopefully we will see him fighting with his powers and op weapons soon...
first of all, woah seeing the titlen I first though it would be another stupid harem fanfic without any plot but damn the author is a monster. Slick, our mc is a piece of trash with a truckload of trauma we see change throughout the chapters and masterfully done, particularly here in the black knight arc. The story takes its time to set itself without drowning us with marvel characters left and right which i appreciate. One of the best fanfic i've read. chef's kiss to the author
at first I really thought it would be just another smut novel on webnovel .... that why I stopped reading when there's only smut and no development.... but now you prove me wrong author-min there's finally some character development and the background story is progressing... keep up the good work author ;)
i will be honest this book is amazing the character while horrible is slowly growing and as he loses everything he is realizing his mistakes and learning from them he is slowly growing and becoming a better person. Another point is that the character is realistic he is gradually growing. the story is entertaining and fun. the world building is really really good overall an amazing book the author is amazing he is really talented. thank you for the book author
Spoiler de révélation
The first volume of theis story is good but can be rather frustrating... But the second volume is incredible!!! Stick with it and you won't regret it! seriously amazing writing!