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A very good football novel. The mc is both coach and player, world building and others are good too only update that is a bit slow but the book is good enough to overlook the update. Re-read 1-14 close to 5 thats how good it is, also note there is a system in it.
Before reading the story, I want you to understand that it's not just about football, but more of a slice of life. It's a relaxing story, so enjoy the ride.
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A very good football novel. The mc is both coach and player, world building and others are good too only update that is a bit slow but the book is good enough to overlook the update. Re-read 1-14 close to 5 thats how good it is, also note there is a system in it.
Before reading the story, I want you to understand that it's not just about football, but more of a slice of life. It's a relaxing story, so enjoy the ride.
Very good i enjoyed it alot. 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯 💯