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I liked the premise. a unique fanfic involving pokemon and naruto but thr author is obviously not invested. the spelling, spacing, and punctuation are horrendous. ZERO attempt at editing and reviewing. just seems lazy. and if the author doesn't care then the audience should be wary of investing in the story.
I liked the premise. a unique fanfic involving pokemon and naruto but thr author is obviously not invested. the spelling, spacing, and punctuation are horrendous. ZERO attempt at editing and reviewing. just seems lazy. and if the author doesn't care then the audience should be wary of investing in the story.